Wanderer vs Zuo - ZELPH WINS

[Sharp]

BA Summer League

Due Thursday, July 4th

Minimum - 6 lines
Max - 10 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree
24hr ext to be granted by opponent

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit or match the first to drop


Zuo Wanderer

[Zuo]

Sup. Let’s just match but try not to go 10

[Wanderer]

I’ll drop soon

[Wanderer]

Fuck ur girl at gunpoint cos these cannons ain’t harmless
Twins pressed right against her shirt like she went braless
Boy u need religion. Each hand got a gat in em
Arm raised to ur head for one finger motion to wet u up, no baptism
Petty crime ain’t my shit. Ride around aligning the clip
When I spark from the dash then drive away it ain’t cos I’m hot wiring ur whip

[Zuo]

Ur entire teams fulla wack guys, im aimin’ cannons at ur squad for a flat price
BLAST PIPES. Bullets tear thru ur vessels.. whole crews gettin wrecked by the capsize
Full clip for this queer fuck. Shells’ll hit u & whoever ur near bruh
STOMACH SHOT! It’ll leave ur belly leakin’ out ya shirt like a beer gut
Think I’m scared of this bitch? For thinkin’ u’ll win ur gettin aired n then split
we ain’t bout to see a dead guy run the show.. this ain’t Tales from the Crypt

[Blue Bayou]

Wanderer

-Twins pressed against your shirt was pretty cool.. enjoyable meta & the setup was good
-Baptism pretty fire 'arm raised' concept and gun bar.. well developed and the short and sweet setup I dig.. nice meta
-spark from the dash and drive away / drive-by concept is niceee.. dig it, don't recall seeing it unless it's been in a live battle Ive missed

Nice short verse with cool metas

Vs

Zelph

-Capsize is ehhhh I just feel like it's already been done a ton of ways, and better tbh... Age old vessel blood & boat reference and tie in takes away from the bar more then helps it imo cuz it's so old
-hmmm, beer belly's don't really leak out of shirts, they'd flop more than anything.. ehh, it's a decent concept at best that's a stretch to work... Not really feeling
-run the show conceptually wasn't really tied in well here and seems out of nowhere.. but the meta is fresh and pretty cool


Overall yeah Wanderer got this... All 3 of his concepts were pretty solid and his concepts were more creative and fresher on the whole... Cool read

Vote - Wanderer

[Ryno]

Hard to choose. Bar for bar it’s...
Beer belly vs the hot wire bar imo
I’m taking Wanderer. Thought his bar was put together
better. Like the concept a tad bit more too

V/ Wanderer

[Sharp]

Fuck ur girl at gunpoint cos these cannons ain’t harmless
Twins pressed right against her shirt like she went braless
cool, haven't seen this angle before
Boy u need religion. Each hand got a gat in em
Arm raised to ur head for one finger motion to wet u up, no baptism
same as above
Petty crime ain’t my shit. Ride around aligning the clip
When I spark from the dash then drive away it ain’t cos I’m hot wiring ur whip
cool, haven't seen this angle before and had a nice live style sting


Ur entire teams fulla wack guys, im aimin’ cannons at ur squad for a flat price
BLAST PIPES. Bullets tear thru ur vessels.. whole crews gettin wrecked by the capsize
cool take on capsize, but I've seen a lot of capsize bars. Def one of thr better ones I've seen, but it's not hitting too hard for that reason
Full clip for this queer fuck. Shells’ll hit u & whoever ur near bruh
STOMACH SHOT! It’ll leave ur belly leakin’ out ya shirt like a beer gut
I fuck with this one
Think I’m scared of this bitch? For thinkin’ u’ll win ur gettin aired n then split
we ain’t bout to see a dead guy run the show.. this ain’t Tales from the Crypt
I really like this one. Not a ton of sting but a good idea


Close, but I found Wanderer's verse more consistent. Dope stuff guys

V/wanderer

[Kill Spree]

Brless was cool could have done more with it.. baptism was dope and hot wiring ur whip was aight wasn’t a big fan. Maybe a different angle it could have been dope

Capsize I’ve seen a million ways. I fuck with the beer gut that was nice. Tales from the crypt was cool felt it could have had more sting...


This is close tbh I hated zelph a capsize play... but felt his other two bars were a hair better

Could go either way but v/zelph

[Master Rock]

Gun bars...ugggh...Not my cup of tea. Wanderer was descent.his closer line, "When I spark from the dash then drive away it ain’t cos I’m hot wiring ur whip" was the most creative. Zuo on the other hand plenty of creative juices flowing throughout. I'm not a huge fan of these type of battles but metaphors, visuals, rhymesheme, and vocab where all present in Zuo''s verse.
Overall they both did well and I had to figure out which verse would do for me.
Therefore I'm going with Zuo for the win.

[Aero]

Wand:

Fuck ur girl at gunpoint cos these cannons ain’t harmless
Twins pressed right against her shirt like she went braless
Cool
Boy u need religion. Each hand got a gat in em
Arm raised to ur head for one finger motion to wet u up, no baptism
Concept was cool but delivery could've been better

Look at the gat size, boy you'll need religion, I chastise
Arm raised to your head the finger to wet you up, you're getting baptized

Petty crime ain’t my shit. Ride around aligning the clip
When I spark from the dash then drive away it ain’t cos I’m hot wiring ur whip
concept cool needed tighter wording

Zuo:

Ur entire teams fulla wack guys, im aimin’ cannons at ur squad for a flat price
BLAST PIPES. Bullets tear thru ur vessels.. whole crews gettin wrecked by the capsize
liked the multis, played concept
Full clip for this queer fuck. Shells’ll hit u & whoever ur near bruh
STOMACH SHOT! It’ll leave ur belly leakin’ out ya shirt like a beer gut
cool
Think I’m scared of this bitch? For thinkin’ u’ll win ur gettin aired n then split
we ain’t bout to see a dead guy run the show.. this ain’t Tales from the Crypt
lol cool


Wanted to vote TIE at first but if I'm being real I liked Zuo's verse better but Wanderer had the better attempts.

MVGT Zuo

[Inno]

This was a dope battle actually pretty even from both but I think I got zelph edging this out.

Zuo

[Saint]

This could go either way imo, similar approach

Lets see.. Braless vs Beer Gut was even
Hot wire, Tales from Crypt, Capsize, Baptism
that order..

hmm vote - ZUO for executing a lil better to my liking
close tho