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Blue Bayou
07-02-2019, 09:36 AM
Summer Classic VII

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Rules


Due Dates:
Verses are due SATURDAY
JULY 6TH, 2019 @ 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are not due this round, as there are officially no more replacements.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 48 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.


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Max. = 20 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 20 lines

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Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
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means you will disqualified.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

Zuo Cashius

Zuo
07-02-2019, 10:56 AM
YOU FUCKIN DEAD. 16

Cashius
07-02-2019, 11:06 AM
I’m not going 20.

Zuo
07-06-2019, 06:20 PM
Ext.

Cashius
07-07-2019, 08:48 PM
Sent 14 to Blue.

Zuo
07-08-2019, 12:34 AM
Sent 14.

Inno
07-08-2019, 08:20 AM
Sent 14.

Confirmed sent last night

Blue Bayou
07-08-2019, 08:36 AM
Cashius Verse

Black people can make anything a crime
And 8 times out of 10 who’s in this vehicle? A crew of blacks, with some stolen property and drugs etc.

And I’m the racist?! Lol...

Just another crooked cop who hates blacks...Don’t get it perplexed, bruh
ALWAYS riding through Miami with a Dark Passenger...you would think he was Dexter
Son, your lip!!!...did you gargle with sharp objects? It’s nothing but comedy, kid
I was gonna ‘catch you with a hook to the mouth’ but it looks like somebody already did
The recoil crazyyyy on the rifle but fuck it...my gawd is Cash wilin’!
Shit is hot...When it Kick your Top flies off. That’s a Bottle Cap Challenge
This is a good thread. I haven’t thought about the conditions of those people I didn’t know it was this bad.
It’s really not that bad lol. fake news from obv libtard
Lol wait so you law breaking criminals want to go to 1st class jails and shit? Lmaooooooo
Ol’ Lippy is happy immigrants are being mistreated...this faggot’s a disgrace
How you gonna hate on people who Defect...when you’ve got one plastered on your face
My squad liftin’ packs with the longggg barrel...they buck and take lives, stupid
Only time YOUR dogs keep the nose for the drugs...it’s the fucking K-9 unit
I champ EVERYTHING, you faggot...holy fuck, I’m a prob
Only reason YOU’VE taken down multiple leagues is because you suck as a Mod
Hit this cop with the thing...The dezi clear your whole block when it ring, boss
That’s an Angry Bird...when I Let it Go and Air it Out it’s ‘knocking a pig off’

Blue Bayou
07-08-2019, 08:36 AM
Zelph's Verse

Last SC u couldn’t handle them killas. We saw u get mauled n we were baffled
Rushin’ to ur death didn’t take much to put ur lil flame out.. thats Dothraki in a battle
Stay focused on the next bitch. Pray to god she’s not like ur ex chick
Once the foundation was gone u saw her true colors.. that’s Silver in a red wig
I kill bitches like it’s a profession. U have no idea who this dummy is testin
So hang it up or it’ll be a hacksaw through the glass like a Ted Bundy confession
Strong arm, stick blammin’. Lettin’ it fly down range till the shits jammin’
12 on me, BIG CANNON. Or let u catch a bullet from the sidearm - I’m Rich Gannon!
I’ll pipe ur momma. This angry white boy can watch me smash his idol
I’m a Monster, literally fuckin up ur mothers drywalls.. my name is Kyle
Whole fam will catch the iron. Aint nowhere to run wen I slash ur tires
Run in ur crib w/ the strong arm.. Diesel take care of ur kids like The Pacifier
Think ur bars are astounding? U cnt be a king if you’re a dry corpse
Fuck txt, this is Jousting; one pole will take you off your high horse


14.

Answer
07-08-2019, 06:49 PM
Just another crooked cop who hates blacks...Don’t get it perplexed, bruh
ALWAYS riding through Miami with a Dark Passenger...you would think he was Dexter

I never really watched Dexter tbh. I googled dark passenger and read up on it briefly. Everything in the bar seems cool but it probably would've resonated with me more had I already known the reference. Still a solid opener

Son, your lip!!!...did you gargle with sharp objects? It’s nothing but comedy, kid
I was gonna ‘catch you with a hook to the mouth’ but it looks like somebody already did

I'm a little torn on how to judge lip bars because I haven't been around long enough to know much they've been done. Regardless of whether or not it's a played concept, I think this bar was a bit simple and you could've done more with the angle.

The recoil crazyyyy on the rifle but fuck it...my gawd is Cash wilin’!
Shit is hot...When it Kick your Top flies off. That’s a Bottle Cap Challenge

This is good. A bit shy of a haymaker, but it connects

Ol’ Lippy is happy immigrants are being mistreated...this faggot’s a disgrace
How you gonna hate on people who Defect...when you’ve got one plastered on your face

LOL. I dug this one. I think it was more creative and landed much stronger than the hook bar

My squad liftin’ packs with the longggg barrel...they buck and take lives, stupid
Only time YOUR dogs keep the nose for the drugs...it’s the fucking K-9 unit

solid personal. it connects but it falls just shy of a brutal haymaker for me, primarily because it rehashes a few old ideas e.g. dogs, nose/barrel, etc.

I, champ EVERYTHING, you faggot...holy fuck, I’m a prob
Only reason YOU’VE taken down multiple leagues is because you suck as a Mod

lol this made me laugh. I like this

Hit this cop with the thing...The dezi clear your whole block when it ring, boss
That’s an Angry Bird...when I Let it Go and Air it Out it’s ‘knocking a pig off’

Solid closer.



Last SC u couldn’t handle them killas. We saw u get mauled n we were baffled
Rushin’ to ur death didn’t take much to put ur lil flame out.. thats Dothraki in a battle

Solid opener. I personally think it might've been a better wording choice to leave out the word "lil" but it's not a big deal

Stay focused on the next bitch. Pray to god she’s not like ur ex chick
Once the foundation was gone u saw her true colors.. that’s Silver in a red wig

Nah, I'm not feeling it. Not really sure what you're going for to be honest apart from comparing silver/red as colors, but it doesn't seem to have a strong to connection to the angle of his ex

I kill bitches like it’s a profession. U have no idea who this dummy is testin
So hang it up or it’ll be a hacksaw through the glass like a Ted Bundy confession

This is a cool concept with a bunch of potential in it, but the execution of the wordplay is just clunky

Strong arm, stick blammin’. Lettin’ it fly down range till the shits jammin’
12 on me, BIG CANNON. Or let u catch a bullet from the sidearm - I’m Rich Gannon!

The only real issue with this bar is the bullet/football/cannon angle has been done a quite a lot, and this wasn't really a different approach. I did see the thread about big arms a while back that I think you were kind of alluding to, but it just didn't save the line for me.

I’ll pipe ur momma. This angry white boy can watch me smash his idol
I’m a Monster, literally fuckin up ur mothers drywalls.. my name is Kyle

lol to be honest this bar was borderline stupid, but the fact that it can make me laugh out loud is worth something imo

Whole fam will catch the iron. Aint nowhere to run wen I slash ur tires
Run in ur crib w/ the strong arm.. Diesel take care of ur kids like The Pacifier

Dope concept, wording could've been just a tad bit cleaner but it's still a solid hit imo. I think this was your best bar

Think ur bars are astounding? U cnt be a king if you’re a dry corpse
Fuck txt, this is Jousting; one pole will take you off your high horse

nah I'm not digging this one to be honest with you.


Overall I liked Zelph's vin diesel line, and the drywall bar made me lol. He had a few good concepts and made it a competitive bout in my opinion, but he also had a couple bars that I just felt were misses e.g. the jousting bar, and rich gannon. Cashius didn't really come out swinging the way I expected him to. Granted I think the Dexter bar was probably one of his better punches and it was lost on me as someone who hasn't seen the show. But still, Cashius really ticked all the boxes when it came to consistency, I think almost all of his bars were above average and he didn't really make any obvious mistakes. I think that's just something that you chalk up to experience and having done this for a long time. It's kind of that floyd mayweather approach, where he doesn't have knock you out, he just has to outlast you and wait for you to make a mistake.

anyway mvgt cashius

Allen Knight
07-08-2019, 08:03 PM
nother crooked cop who hates blacks...Don’t get it perplexed, bruh
ALWAYS riding through Miami with a Dark Passenger...you would think he was Dexter
The recoil crazyyyy on the rifle but fuck it...my gawd is Cash wilin’!
Shit is hot...When it Kick your Top flies off. That’s a Bottle Cap Challenge
Ol’ Lippy is happy immigrants are being mistreated...this faggot’s a disgrace
How you gonna hate on people who Defect...when you’ve got one plastered on your face
My squad liftin’ packs with the longggg barrel...they buck and take lives, stupid
Only time YOUR dogs keep the nose for the drugs...it’s the fucking K-9 unit
I champ EVERYTHING, you faggot...holy fuck, I’m a prob
Only reason YOU’VE taken down multiple leagues is because you suck as a Mod


Vs


I kill bitches like it’s a profession. U have no idea who this dummy is testin
So hang it up or it’ll be a hacksaw through the glass like a Ted Bundy confession
I’ll pipe ur momma. This angry white boy can watch me smash his idol
I’m a Monster, literally fuckin up ur mothers drywalls.. my name is Kyle
Whole fam will catch the iron. Aint nowhere to run wen I slash ur tires
Run in ur crib w/ the strong arm.. Diesel take care of ur kids like The Pacifier

V/cash, nice battle both had some good bars, i think cash was a more consistent
here imo & he had the lotb but lips drywall line was nice & diesel punch too. props to both

Inno
07-08-2019, 09:32 PM
Cash

Cap challenge, face disgrace, sucks as a mod and closer

Zelph

Opener, drywall’s , and pacifier lines

Good battle overall zelph did his thing I just think he had to many misses where as cash kept hitting not always hard hitting but he kept chipping away. That disgrace in yo face line pretty much sealed it for me

Cash

~RustyGunZ~
07-08-2019, 11:16 PM
Just another crooked cop who hates blacks...Don’t get it perplexed, bruh
ALWAYS riding through Miami with a Dark Passenger...you would think he was Dexter

clever personal

Son, your lip!!!...did you gargle with sharp objects? It’s nothing but comedy, kid
I was gonna ‘catch you with a hook to the mouth’ but it looks like somebody already did

ehh seen better lip plays

The recoil crazyyyy on the rifle but fuck it...my gawd is Cash wilin’!
Shit is hot...When it Kick your Top flies off. That’s a Bottle Cap Challenge

cool

Ol’ Lippy is happy immigrants are being mistreated...this faggot’s a disgrace
How you gonna hate on people who Defect...when you’ve got one plastered on your face

ok

My squad liftin’ packs with the longggg barrel...they buck and take lives, stupid
Only time YOUR dogs keep the nose for the drugs...it’s the fucking K-9 unit

ok personal

I champ EVERYTHING, you faggot...holy fuck, I’m a prob
Only reason YOU’VE taken down multiple leagues is because you suck as a Mod

dope

Hit this cop with the thing...The dezi clear your whole block when it ring, boss
That’s an Angry Bird...when I Let it Go and Air it Out it’s ‘knocking a pig off’

dig it

4 quotables

vs

Last SC u couldn’t handle them killas. We saw u get mauled n we were baffled
Rushin’ to ur death didn’t take much to put ur lil flame out.. thats Dothraki in a battle

dope

Stay focused on the next bitch. Pray to god she’s not like ur ex chick
Once the foundation was gone u saw her true colors.. that’s Silver in a red wig

eh

I kill bitches like it’s a profession. U have no idea who this dummy is testin
So hang it up or it’ll be a hacksaw through the glass like a Ted Bundy confession

ok

Strong arm, stick blammin’. Lettin’ it fly down range till the shits jammin’
12 on me, BIG CANNON. Or let u catch a bullet from the sidearm - I’m Rich Gannon!

ok think i've seen the concept before

I’ll pipe ur momma. This angry white boy can watch me smash his idol
I’m a Monster, literally fuckin up ur mothers drywalls.. my name is Kyle

good idea lazy execution, monster wp too played to crutch it on a current trend without a lot of effort

Whole fam will catch the iron. Aint nowhere to run wen I slash ur tires
Run in ur crib w/ the strong arm.. Diesel take care of ur kids like The Pacifier

fire, not sure if he has kids but generics fly against someone that tip toes around letting personals slip lol

Think ur bars are astounding? U cnt be a king if you’re a dry corpse
Fuck txt, this is Jousting; one pole will take you off your high horse

cool

3 quotables

cash had more quotes by 1 and was a bit more personal
z had the better standouts but they were more generic aside from opener

both only had one that was bad, some ok

I'm going against the grain and going with zelph

Clout
07-09-2019, 12:21 AM
Zelph's Verse

Last SC u couldn’t handle them killas. We saw u get mauled n we were baffled
Rushin’ to ur death didn’t take much to put ur lil flame out.. thats Dothraki in a battle

This doesnt really do much for you because you didnt handle the killas either in the last sc lol. But punch is cool.

Stay focused on the next bitch. Pray to god she’s not like ur ex chick
Once the foundation was gone u saw her true colors.. that’s Silver in a red wig

Liked this one not bad little zelph not bad.

I kill bitches like it’s a profession. U have no idea who this dummy is testin
So hang it up or it’ll be a hacksaw through the glass like a Ted Bundy confession

Eh ok

Strong arm, stick blammin’. Lettin’ it fly down range till the shits jammin’
12 on me, BIG CANNON. Or let u catch a bullet from the sidearm - I’m Rich Gannon!

This is cool

I’ll pipe ur momma. This angry white boy can watch me smash his idol
I’m a Monster, literally fuckin up ur mothers drywalls.. my name is Kyle

Dope

Whole fam will catch the iron. Aint nowhere to run wen I slash ur tires
Run in ur crib w/ the strong arm.. Diesel take care of ur kids like The Pacifier

Dope

Think ur bars are astounding? U cnt be a king if you’re a dry corpse
Fuck txt, this is Jousting; one pole will take you off your high horse

Nah

14.

Cashius Verse




And I’m the racist?! Lol...

Just another crooked cop who hates blacks...Don’t get it perplexed, bruh
ALWAYS riding through Miami with a Dark Passenger...you would think he was Dexter

Dope personal

Son, your lip!!!...did you gargle with sharp objects? It’s nothing but comedy, kid
I was gonna ‘catch you with a hook to the mouth’ but it looks like somebody already did

Eh this is light

The recoil crazyyyy on the rifle but fuck it...my gawd is Cash wilin’!
Shit is hot...When it Kick your Top flies off. That’s a Bottle Cap Challenge

Nice

Ol’ Lippy is happy immigrants are being mistreated...this faggot’s a disgrace
How you gonna hate on people who Defect...when you’ve got one plastered on your face

Fire

My squad liftin’ packs with the longggg barrel...they buck and take lives, stupid
Only time YOUR dogs keep the nose for the drugs...it’s the fucking K-9 unit

Dope

I champ EVERYTHING, you faggot...holy fuck, I’m a prob
Only reason YOU’VE taken down multiple leagues is because you suck as a Mod

Dope lol and so true ..

Hit this cop with the thing...The dezi clear your whole block when it ring, boss
That’s an Angry Bird...when I Let it Go and Air it Out it’s ‘knocking a pig off’

Nah

Well zelph came pretty good but Cassius went in and had something extra to his bars cus of the personals. I think cashius got this; zelph I liked drywall and pacifier lines. Cash had 2 bars I got competing for line of the battle the mod line and the defect line. That k9 unit was dope too as well as that dexter flip.

Aero
07-09-2019, 01:18 PM
Cashius:

And I’m the racist?! Lol...

Just another crooked cop who hates blacks...Don’t get it perplexed, bruh
ALWAYS riding through Miami with a Dark Passenger...you would think he was Dexter
Was forced to look up the reference to make sure the Miami thing conncected and it did. This hits bc of all the things that went into it.
Son, your lip!!!...did you gargle with sharp objects? It’s nothing but comedy, kid
I was gonna ‘catch you with a hook to the mouth’ but it looks like somebody already did
Predictable
The recoil crazyyyy on the rifle but fuck it...my gawd is Cash wilin’!
Shit is hot...When it Kick your Top flies off. That’s a Bottle Cap Challenge
Cool but already played
Ol’ Lippy is happy immigrants are being mistreated...this faggot’s a disgrace
How you gonna hate on people who Defect...when you’ve got one plastered on your face
Don Demarco! ((Demarco))
My squad liftin’ packs with the longggg barrel...they buck and take lives, stupid
Only time YOUR dogs keep the nose for the drugs...it’s the fucking K-9 unit
Should've hit me up to word this for you
I champ EVERYTHING, you faggot...holy fuck, I’m a prob
Only reason YOU’VE taken down multiple leagues is because you suck as a Mod
Predictable but still hits
Hit this cop with the thing...The dezi clear your whole block when it ring, boss
That’s an Angry Bird...when I Let it Go and Air it Out it’s ‘knocking a pig off’
Everything connects. It's a hit



Zelph:

Last SC u couldn’t handle them killas. We saw u get mauled n we were baffled
Rushin’ to ur death didn’t take much to put ur lil flame out.. thats Dothraki in a battle
Both of you are going to make me look up shows I don't watch. Okay looked it up.. This was aight
Stay focused on the next bitch. Pray to god she’s not like ur ex chick
Once the foundation was gone u saw her true colors.. that’s Silver in a red wig
this could work with a better tie-in
I kill bitches like it’s a profession. U have no idea who this dummy is testin
So hang it up or it’ll be a hacksaw through the glass like a Ted Bundy confession
Setup should've included breaking through his window or something. I like the idea though I might use it down the road but better
Strong arm, stick blammin’. Lettin’ it fly down range till the shits jammin’
12 on me, BIG CANNON. Or let u catch a bullet from the sidearm - I’m Rich Gannon!
Loved the delivery..
I’ll pipe ur momma. This angry white boy can watch me smash his idol
I’m a Monster, literally fuckin up ur mothers drywalls.. my name is Kyle
I don't get the reference man. All these reference bars get annoying, I get the premise of the bar though and it's cool. Literally every bar is a reference so far so hopefully that changes.
Whole fam will catch the iron. Aint nowhere to run wen I slash ur tires
Run in ur crib w/ the strong arm.. Diesel take care of ur kids like The Pacifier
Nope it didn't change. Another reference but this one is pretty good.
Think ur bars are astounding? U cnt be a king if you’re a dry corpse
Fuck txt, this is Jousting; one pole will take you off your high horse
This works but is light


Cashius had the more enjoyable verse and the Defect line was spot-on..
That hits even without a bar like if someone said that to him in Discussion.
This is probably Battle of the Week but I've got Cash comfortably.


Cash

Barcotic
07-09-2019, 08:08 PM
Zuo can i vote?
if not cool

Blue Bayou
07-09-2019, 08:18 PM
Zuo can i vote?
if not cool

Yes you can
It was not stipulated or requested beforehand... Please do so

Zuo
07-09-2019, 08:40 PM
Yes you can
It was not stipulated or requested beforehand... Please do so

Yup this ain’t RB bitch


Barcotic yeah I don’t mind bro

Barcotic
07-09-2019, 08:46 PM
Yes you can
It was not stipulated or requested beforehand... Please do so
i would respect his answer

bc im not like him
iont do this shit to hate

voting now

Zuo
07-09-2019, 08:48 PM
This ain’t RB

I’m voting on everything next round and I’m checking it twice

Barcotic
07-09-2019, 09:07 PM
Cash
Just another crooked cop who hates blacks...Don’t get it perplexed, bruh
ALWAYS riding through Miami with a Dark Passenger...you would think he was Dexter
nice
Son, your lip!!!...did you gargle with sharp objects? It’s nothing but comedy, kid
I was gonna ‘catch you with a hook to the mouth’ but it looks like somebody already did
beeeen done
The recoil crazyyyy on the rifle but fuck it...my gawd is Cash wilin’!
Shit is hot...When it Kick your Top flies off. That’s a Bottle Cap Challenge
cool
Ol’ Lippy is happy immigrants are being mistreated...this faggot’s a disgrace
How you gonna hate on people who Defect...when you’ve got one plastered on your face
lol simple but hits
My squad liftin’ packs with the longggg barrel...they buck and take lives, stupid
Only time YOUR dogs keep the nose for the drugs...it’s the fuking K-9 unit
ok
I champ EVERYTHING, you faggot...holy fuck, I’m a prob
Only reason YOU’VE taken down multiple leagues is because you suck as a Mod
fire
Hit this cop with the thing...The dezi clear your whole block when it ring, boss
That’s an Angry Bird...when I Let it Go and Air it Out it’s ‘knocking a pig off’
nahh

4 gd punches
1 jab
2 misses

vs.

Zelph
Last SC u couldn’t handle them killas. We saw u get mauled n we were baffled
Rushin’ to ur death didn’t take much to put ur lil flame out.. thats Dothraki in a battle
pretty weak
Stay focused on the next bitch. Pray to god she’s not like ur ex chick
Once the foundation was gone u saw her true colors.. that’s Silver in a red wig
lol k a little above ave. funny, works
I kill bitches like it’s a profession. U have no idea who this dummy is testin
So hang it up or it’ll be a hacksaw through the glass like a Ted Bundy confession
ehhh, ok
Strong arm, stick blammin’. Lettin’ it fly down range till the shits jammin’
12 on me, BIG CANNON. Or let u catch a bullet from the sidearm - I’m Rich Gannon!
dope
I’ll pipe ur momma. This angry white boy can watch me smash his idol
I’m a Monster, literally fuckin up ur mothers drywalls.. my name is Kyle
drywalls is too played to even reread this
Whole fam will catch the iron. Aint nowhere to run wen I slash ur tires
Run in ur crib w/ the strong arm.. Diesel take care of ur kids like The Pacifier
whack
Think ur bars are astounding? U cnt be a king if you’re a dry corpse
Fuck txt, this is Jousting; one pole will take you off your high horse
ok
seems played but ok, passable ime

2 gd punches
2 jabs
3 misses

v/cashius

Blue Bayou
07-09-2019, 10:33 PM
6-1 cash wins