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Adonis
07-14-2019, 06:54 PM
https://i.ibb.co/s5Gdt2L/Untitled-1.jpg

https://i.imgur.com/drgWHTX.png




Welcome!!! All! Seeding was randomized based on the number you were assigned in the Official Sign In Thread.

. http://www.augustana.ab.ca/~mohrj/algorithms/scramble.html
Numbers were jumbled using this ^^^ sites generator and the bracket was based off number generated. I'm too dumb to explain, but I tried.




If anyone really wants to go indepth during predictions and wants them featured in MAG, PM me. Mag up Wednesday night the latest


Witty John Dillinger Lucipher Howlz dead man Sinacog Pharaohs ArmyBlue Bayou Zuo Mr. J Diablo Master Rock MMLP Scar Candy Innovator NYCSPITZ


You all get one extra day of chatting. Threads are going up tomorrow.



All I ASK IS....Please Show, if you don't and know you won't, PM me and I'll work on a replacement. But of the highest seed, whoever no shows I will be ready with a verse the next day, as a back up just in case.

Blue Bayou
07-14-2019, 07:07 PM
Good stuff man

Zuo
07-14-2019, 07:30 PM
Good stuff man

YOure dead bitch

NYCSPITZ
07-14-2019, 08:50 PM
Aight bet

Master Rock
07-14-2019, 08:58 PM
I'm going all in.

Joe Boston
07-15-2019, 12:08 AM
Damn wish I knew the sign up for this Adonis

Adonis
07-15-2019, 12:17 AM
Damn wish I knew the sign up for this Adonis

As of now I have zero alternates, so you might be able to get in on this.

Are you Joe metts? If not, send me a couple links of your other works so I can peep. If you are metts, you got the first alternate spot

Candy
07-15-2019, 01:12 AM
looks sweet gl Scar

Requiem
07-15-2019, 01:26 AM
You need any other alternates, I got you.

Adonis
07-15-2019, 08:38 AM
You need any other alternates, I got you.

Sure. Please PM me a couple of topical, some of your better work please.

Alternates will be based off skill level, highest seed = highest priority

Diablo
07-15-2019, 02:24 PM
I’ll be here

Scar
07-15-2019, 03:20 PM
looks sweet gl Scar

my man. gl

Joe Boston
07-15-2019, 05:09 PM
As of now I have zero alternates, so you might be able to get in on this.

Are you Joe metts? If not, send me a couple links of your other works so I can peep. If you are metts, you got the first alternate spot

No sir I have some stuff I posted on RB I will check if I can find it
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?494684-Little-Cherub-(Gringos-Locos)&highlight=Little+cherub
I’m first verse

Blue Bayou
07-15-2019, 06:02 PM
YOure dead bitch

Best of luck to you in the upcoming match

Objective
07-15-2019, 07:05 PM
I can be a sub if someone no-shows Adonis if you need one.

Adonis
07-15-2019, 07:59 PM
I can be a sub if someone no-shows Adonis if you need one.



Yeah man. You're always welcome. As of now you would take priority over the other alternates due to your track record. I'm posting threads now, so if people don't check in I'll get at you with in a few days. If everyone checks in I'll give you a separate topic to write to just in case someone no-shows. Also, can you pick a number 1-8 for me? This will give me a topic just in case as well. That way it don't seem fishy.

Objective
07-15-2019, 08:09 PM
Yeah man. You're always welcome. As of now you would take priority over the other alternates due to your track record. I'm posting threads now, so if people don't check in I'll get at you with in a few days. If everyone checks in I'll give you a separate topic to write to just in case someone no-shows. Also, can you pick a number 1-8 for me? This will give me a topic just in case as well. That way it don't seem fishy.

For sure. I'll go for 7. I'm hyped af to write some again so being given a separate topic is dope, at worst it'll be an OM piece. Best of luck with running this shit!

Adonis
07-15-2019, 08:28 PM
For sure. I'll go for 7. I'm hyped af to write some again so being given a separate topic is dope, at worst it'll be an OM piece. Best of luck with running this shit!



Thanks

the 7th topic which is mine in case of no show was seleceted at random by Objective. In case of late no-show this will be my topic, no fuckery afoot here boys

Adonis Potential Topic: https://i.imgur.com/Ze7xIS4.jpg

Eŋg
07-16-2019, 05:36 PM
No sir I have some stuff I posted on RB I will check if I can find it
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?494684-Little-Cherub-(Gringos-Locos)&highlight=Little+cherub
I’m first verse

this was offensively bad. dagel, a truly shit-tier writer, outwrote you.

that's gonna be a no from me, dawg.

Joe Boston
07-17-2019, 05:51 PM
this was offensively bad. dagel, a truly shit-tier writer, outwrote you.

that's gonna be a no from me, dawg.

And you’re truly a fag you outgay the whole site

Objective
07-17-2019, 05:51 PM
Oh snap, I think I misunderstood what you meant, Adonis, lol. I thought that pic was my separate topic so I could start writing whenever I felt like it in case of a no-show. Didn't read the part about getting back to me if someone doesn't sign in, haha. Oh well, you got an interesting PM to read now to say the least. fml

Inno
07-17-2019, 06:30 PM
this was offensively bad. dagel, a truly shit-tier writer, outwrote you.

that's gonna be a no from me, dawg.

Lmao

Adonis
07-17-2019, 07:20 PM
this was offensively bad. dagel, a truly shit-tier writer, outwrote you.

that's gonna be a no from me, dawg.

Winning!! Still wish you signed in for this, I guess you just don't like any of my tournaments, ah well.



And to the league, I promised to have mag up by today, and I don't know if that's possible. Tomorrow for sure though. I'm trying to jam pack it but I guess I just miss judged how much work I can actually do each night. Sorry ladies, I hope it's well received though

Candy
07-18-2019, 03:49 AM
Adonis what does that nsfw mean attached to our battle..

Zuo
07-18-2019, 05:11 AM
Adonis what does that nsfw mean attached to our battle..

He’s swaying

Candy
07-18-2019, 06:38 AM
lol

Adonis
07-18-2019, 07:45 PM
He’s swaying



LOL

Candy it's cuz of them titties bro. I didn't realize she was nude until after I posted, I'm not trying to get people in trouble and shit you know? NSFW= not suitable for work

Candy
07-19-2019, 01:28 AM
ok sweet il change it

Adonis
07-19-2019, 08:15 AM
ok sweet il change it

Change what? It's all good, I just put that disclaimer so people don't go opening your page at work

Candy
07-19-2019, 08:39 AM
lol that's sweet I changed it so theres no dramas it was a good point

Candy
07-19-2019, 08:44 AM
hahaha Adonis I just realized it was your topic pic not my avy, my avy had side boob not nipple dope pic btw

Diablo
07-19-2019, 09:35 AM
lmao Mr. J ready when you are

Eŋg
07-19-2019, 05:40 PM
And you’re truly a fag you outgay the whole site

are you legit special needs?

Winning!! Still wish you signed in for this, I guess you just don't like any of my tournaments, ah well.

nothing against you, personally.

John Dillinger
07-19-2019, 06:05 PM
And you’re truly a fag you outgay the whole site

Got em

Adonis
07-20-2019, 01:19 AM
hahaha Adonis I just realized it was your topic pic not my avy, my avy had side boob not nipple dope pic btw

Lmfao, I never thought about that either. I guess you're right though, I don't know how many of these lames scroll at work.

That's funny though, I tripped out when you said I changed it I honestly can't even remember your old av

sral
07-20-2019, 03:54 PM
Scar candy posted already

Pharaohs Army
07-21-2019, 01:24 AM
Not a huge deal but is there a reason why Clasic is missing an S on the main page where you enter?

Adonis
07-21-2019, 10:23 AM
Not a huge deal but is there a reason why Clasic is missing an S on the main page where you enter?

Ahhh, good catch. The reason is because simple, I'm not the brightest bulb in the vanity.

Thanks though

Diablo
07-21-2019, 11:42 AM
lmao where Mr. J at tho?

Candy
07-21-2019, 11:56 AM
I dunno post up Mr. J your competitor is salivating at your death already

Candy
07-21-2019, 11:56 AM
Ahhh, good catch. The reason is because simple, I'm not the brightest bulb in the vanity.

Thanks though

respect you do aite in my books..

Scar
07-22-2019, 11:57 AM
Scar candy posted already
yeah i gotchu bro. im definitely posting.

Candy
07-22-2019, 12:50 PM
sweeeet

Mr. J
07-22-2019, 02:50 PM
Gonna write tonight

Diablo
07-22-2019, 05:30 PM
ready when u are

it’s late here tho

I’ll post when I wake up

Adonis
07-22-2019, 07:38 PM
Master Rock Witty dead man John Dillinger Scar Lucipher Howlz Mr. J Diablo Zuo

Due date is roughly 6.5 hours or so as of this post

Master Rock
07-22-2019, 09:02 PM
Yo, I thought this was due on wen. I will start on something asap.

Scar
07-22-2019, 09:10 PM
Adonis Candy

i do plan to show but can i get an extension?

Candy
07-22-2019, 09:48 PM
Scar its ok with me.. but Adonis is setting the rules big guy..

Master Rock
07-22-2019, 10:03 PM
Yo Adonis
I will post tonight central time but no later than 1:00 am.
Please don't close on a brother.

Adonis
07-22-2019, 10:15 PM
Adonis Candy

i do plan to show but can i get an extension?

Yes. Only two per tournament allowed. I wake up around 5am in morning so threads will be openo up until then

After that, the subs are triggered

Mr. J
07-23-2019, 02:20 AM
Diablo Adonis

kind of close, see what i can do though

Mr. J
07-23-2019, 03:02 AM
went over time limit, please no boot :(

Diablo
07-23-2019, 03:04 AM
BOOTED

Adonis
07-23-2019, 08:04 AM
Witty John Dillinger dead man Zuo

When I get off work I'm posting the no show verses

You have until then to get something up or to request ext if approved by competitor.

I will take the place of the highest seed who no showed. Objective will take the place of the 2nd highest seed.

Don't disappoint boys.

Diablo
07-23-2019, 08:43 AM
It might be worth re-doing the brackets and seeding for round two as it will all be stacked on one side and not the other.

What you want is something similar to tennis, so the highest ranked guys avoid each other in the earlier rounds and things heat up in excitement as the tourney progresses

Just a thought

NYCSPITZ
07-23-2019, 09:24 AM
WTF is good with all the no shows? Yo I’m not voting til dead man and Witty keys up a verse

Objective
07-23-2019, 09:32 AM
WTF is good with all the no shows? Yo I’m not voting til dead man and Witty keys up a verse

Why not? What's keeping you from voting just because they no-show?

NYCSPITZ
07-23-2019, 10:08 AM
If I advance, i’d Like the hardest route to champing possible. Nobody cares about weak wins I need to slay topical alphas on my journey or else it means nothing to me

Inno
07-23-2019, 11:09 AM
I’m on my way

Diablo
07-23-2019, 12:04 PM
Mr J
Diablo
Sinacog
Pharoah

Objective
John Dillinger
Inno
NYC

Scar
Candy
Lucy Howlz
Adonis

MMLP
Master Rock
Blue Bayou
Zuo

Objective
07-23-2019, 12:27 PM
If I advance, i’d Like the hardest route to champing possible. Nobody cares about weak wins I need to slay topical alphas on my journey or else it means nothing to me

That explains your motivation to participate, why won't you vote if they don't show tho? That's the part my brain goes dead on.

Master Rock
07-23-2019, 01:50 PM
It leaves one confused.

Witty
07-23-2019, 02:07 PM
Shit I genuinely thought this was due tonight, read it wrong. I'll get something up asap.

Scar
07-23-2019, 04:22 PM
Sinacog, i never liked the torch and pitch fork treatment you get over on the other site (even though you deserved it) but lets start new here. my man, you have to put a little more effort in your vote. you seem like a good dude and i hate that youre being used as a punching bag. unless you're trolling in which case, well....

Adonis
07-23-2019, 07:05 PM
Shit I genuinely thought this was due tonight, read it wrong. I'll get something up asap.

Thank you. Ext. Granted. Get it up



Objective you on line? You can post in place of John Dillinger I will post it for you in a bit

I'm writing soon too, I'll replace whoever is left. Looking like Zuo is Mia cuz dead man posting soon??

That basically covers the board

Witty
07-23-2019, 07:51 PM
Posted Adonis

Adonis
07-23-2019, 08:07 PM
Posted Adonis

I was originally going to pair you with me, but Objective wrote a lot more than Blue Bayou, so I decided to pair you two and I'll match blue's 20 lines. Just trying to be transparent. Thanks for showing broseph, happy belated

Blue Bayou
07-23-2019, 08:08 PM
nvm

Witty
07-23-2019, 08:10 PM
I was originally going to pair you with me, but Objective wrote a lot more than Blue Bayou, so I decided to pair you two and I'll match blue's 20 lines. Just trying to be transparent. Thanks for showing broseph, happy belated

That's cool. I'm happy to be paired with anyone.

And thanks bro.

Witty
07-23-2019, 08:40 PM
Adonis can you put 'open for votes' on my battle please kind sir.

Inno
07-24-2019, 12:03 AM
Adonis thanks forvdoin this babe

We needed you

Inno
07-24-2019, 12:04 AM
Despite these pieces of shits barely showing up

Adonis
07-24-2019, 12:16 AM
Despite these pieces of shits barely showing up


Mostly a solid showing considering recent history

Now it's time to pester for votes hahaha

The cycle continues

Hell, we even got an unborn Buddha sighting. I'm loving it

Inno
07-24-2019, 12:25 AM
You did good bro

Candy
07-24-2019, 07:29 AM
Mostly a solid showing considering recent history

Now it's time to pester for votes hahaha

The cycle continues

Hell, we even got an unborn Buddha sighting. I'm loving it

done and dusted

Witty
07-24-2019, 04:59 PM
Getting my votes in tomorrow.

Diablo
07-24-2019, 06:13 PM
Voted and left feed on Lucy Howlz

Will hit them all if I have time

Objective
07-24-2019, 06:20 PM
I'm gonna have to get my votes in tomorrow as well unless I find some time to sit down and actually read the pieces properly tonight which is doubtful.

Pharaohs Army: The meaning is definitely there as that part is probably the one I spent the most time making sure that it did but I'm afraid of saying anything more in case it's looked upon as swaying etc. I do agree that it is not an easy read tho, it is a demanding piece.

Pharaohs Army
07-24-2019, 06:26 PM
I just found some of it to be nonsensical, so I'm sorry if me being dense has cost you a vote, but it's already done.

Inno
07-24-2019, 07:42 PM
Getting my votes in tomorrow.

Same I started but I need to re-read most these and digest them properly

Adonis
07-24-2019, 09:30 PM
Just to be transparent, I am going to struggle getting these mags up by set schedule. I'm currently working 12 hour shifts doing construction. This wasn't the plan, but this job I'm at for the next month + is turning into a nightmare. I'm still on board, just bare with me. Thanks

Objective
07-24-2019, 10:26 PM
I just found some of it to be nonsensical, so I'm sorry if me being dense has cost you a vote, but it's already done.

Oh, don't worry at all, that's not on you! That's definitely on me as the writer. Just wanted to say there are thoughts that makes sense within it all but I might have made it too difficult, idk.

Scar
07-24-2019, 11:43 PM
Adonis read them all. i'll have my votes in by tomorrow.

Objective
07-25-2019, 06:50 PM
Adonis read them all. i'll have my votes in by tomorrow.

Just wanted to say thanks for your very thorough and thought out vote/feed. If there's any interest I can answer your questions once the voting is closed.

Adonis
07-25-2019, 09:36 PM
Just wanted to say thanks for your very thorough and thought out vote/feed. If there's any interest I can answer your questions once the voting is closed.

I have more for you in the mag. But you can pm me if you want. Thread is closed, I can't remember what I said compared to mag and actual vote, but the concept in my head, I'm curious if I was close or not

Scar
07-25-2019, 09:42 PM
Just wanted to say thanks for your very thorough and thought out vote/feed. If there's any interest I can answer your questions once the voting is closed.
not a problem man. i definitely want some clarifications after the voting closes.

Adonis
07-25-2019, 09:46 PM
not a problem man. i definitely want some clarifications after the voting closes.

Fuck, I thought he was talking to me. I see know he wasn't. Now I have to go read your vote. Too much shit to do, too little time

Scar
07-25-2019, 10:25 PM
Fuck, I thought he was talking to me. I see know he wasn't. Now I have to go read your vote. Too much shit to do, too little time
lulz i was confused by your post too. i had to do a double take to be sure who obj was talkin to

Adonis
07-26-2019, 12:26 AM
Picture topics OK again?

That's what I always liked writing to most, but if a some prefer a different task I can come up with something different.

I will likely leave remaining threads open until I get off work as well because I don't have topics ready as of now. But new threads will be up by, say 7 pm West coast.

Lucipher Howlz
07-26-2019, 06:36 AM
I'm down with picture topics

Blue Bayou
07-26-2019, 06:50 AM
Will get those votes in today

Diablo
07-26-2019, 07:51 AM
NYC def troll voting.

I see you. :)

Objective
07-26-2019, 10:22 AM
not a problem man. i definitely want some clarifications after the voting closes.

Sorry for not having a TLDR-version but I thought some backstory could clear some of the things up as my concept seemed to go amiss by readers (I could be wrong tho, or it's just bad writing altogether, would definitely appreciate some thoughts after this reply even tho I felt Diablo and you touched on a lot of it in his/your feed/vote as well. Link to the battle in case of anyone wanting to re-read: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=140492.)

Aiiight, what inspired me to write the piece was a dude I met a couple weeks ago while BBQ'ing in the park and smoking some. He got there with a mate, and is a virgin past the age of 20. Unruly, trying to be tough by saying edgy shit and throwing chauvinist jokes around and making whore-jokes towards the only woman there but dude really is sweet at the core. Just can't handle himself socially that well and didn't mean anything by it but it was uncalled for.

So my piece in general is about dating, unwritten rules of how to behave towards seeking love that is in a constant dynamic change and how the rest of the population responds to these "Self proclaimed nice guys" like Randal here confessing he's one of them, hence the verdict the way they (or society if you want) heard it during the BBQ or any similar instance of a guy trying to be cool and relatable for all the wrong reasons. Despite this dude looking upon himself as a good guy the jokes were definitely off and not fitting but if people/the girl understood him there wouldn't be any issues. Instead, he's the outcast that isn't like the rest of us in a way. I tried to reflect on people like him, and who are looked upon as great "boyfriend"-material and who isn't, and how society/we can respond to their actions in my piece as I think most of us has met someone with this character trait at some point in our lives, or seen them online, and probably thought ours regarding these people despite understanding there's probably some underlying mental issues going on.

To answer Pharaohs Army, last line starting with theatrics on all bases is just me saying we're all (including the "nice guy") playing a theater of some sort where we adhere to social rules even if we may not agree with them cus that's what you do to fit in. It just comes naturally to most. "Faceless among ageless phases" meaning that it's not directly tied to age or a time in history either, it'll just keep being like this invisible constant yet changing thing for as long as humanity and dating is a thing. I think most of us know about Atlantis and where it derives from but I'm adding this regardless: "Atlantis has become a byword for any and all supposed advanced prehistoric lost civilizations and continues to inspire contemporary fiction, from comic books to films."
What I'm saying when it balances on the head of a ranting mantis is basically that nice guys are stuck in their ways of handling themselves derived from a place submerged in chaos and fiction, the mantis also gets their heads eaten by females after sex. They're (the "nice guys", in quotation marks since they're not really nice altho values/morals are important to them) advancing with stoic pride but get shut down by confident extroverts as they themselves have found their mate by just being themselves for the most part. Flexing in any way can definitely win a woman over, but usually when people flex it's not because they're romantically interested, they just want to get their dick wet hence palace for malice, a state of being in a highly regarded place for the wrong reasons.

In terms of the "joking locust", locust is described as: "Locusts are certain species of short-horned grasshoppers in the family Acrididae that have a swarming phase. These insects are usually solitary, but under certain circumstances they become more abundant and change their behaviour and habits, becoming gregarious." The joking locust in this case would be the guy that jokes about, seem all happy and shit but is usually solitary and feeling lonely. Smoking (weed or cigs, or whatever have you) chokes them as an addictive need, perhaps to feel something different or be dependent on something or have something to escape for a sec with), or simply giving triggering underlying paranoia/other mental diagnosis, thus the locust is lost and starved for focus despite having a swarming phase which could be understood as clubs/festivals/speed dates/etc.
The following line about potent roaches is both saying the rest of us without these issues are invasive damaging bugs but also that smoking can lead us to reflect on things which usually ends up being either about/discussing/or creating our "magnus opus", whether that'd be your personality or work of art, in the end it's a metaphor for how to be a good human being misguided by people or substances that may not be trusted to begin with on what your goals are or if you've even achieved them. The incel being self-reflective enough to realize this is me putting them a bit higher than the general society's understanding of a socially awkward person never getting any and our verdict (or the way society heard it/sees it in action) disregards that notion completely thinking they're not capable of dealing with much on a higher personal level which is very often not true, I'd rather say misguided or misunderstood.

The last stanza is basically me discussing the relevance of it all and how I see it at this point in time. I feel we're all playing according to the unspoken rules as they change a bit every 5 years or so, and we disregard things that shouldn't be disregarded and like to play the "holier than thou'"-card without realizing it. The topic comes in here as we're shooting them down, women are shooting them down, but we (those of us not dealing with that issue) kinda need this notion in order to keep it up since they're really not bad people at the core for the most part, just misguided, and they usually stay really loyal once they get in a relationship. But I'm not blind to the point where I don't see the faults in what they do either. I ended it on a short and simple note on purpose hoping the reader would reflect on why I said that in case of a second read through, or simply wanting more and readers automatically starting to reflect on their own as a result of that. That was what I was going for at least.

I definitely think I made this piece a bit too hard to read/understand what I was getting at but nothing in this piece was said without reason.

Witty
07-26-2019, 10:41 AM
Thanks for the battle Objective I enjoyed your verse.

Objective
07-26-2019, 10:49 AM
Thanks for the battle Objective I enjoyed your verse.

I really enjoyed yours too, dude! Can't wait to see you in the finals as I've had my button on you in previous tourneys, don't get lazy and you got this. :)