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Sharp
07-16-2019, 11:42 PM
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Innovator Wanderer

Inno
07-17-2019, 12:21 AM
Yo

Wanderer
07-17-2019, 02:28 AM
Here

Wanderer
07-18-2019, 03:55 AM
catch a beating & have a tantrum. truly, u amaze
Leave u with more rings on ur face than a teenager going thru a phaze
I’m a thrill seeker so the barrel roll before I smoke this guy
Arms up. hear a click ‘fore ur heads jolting back.. Rollercoaster ride
& ur girl only need make up when I slap her face during menstration
My Palm destroying so much natural beauty, I call it a sugar plantation
U a beast facing me?! Real animals die by my hand, please don’t
2 barrels to the back of ur neck.. Feel the heat over ur shoulders like a mink coat

Inno
07-19-2019, 10:46 PM
LAST WEEK BLUE STOMPED YOU, WONT TAKE MUCH TO BLOW BY YOU NIGGA IM NICE
LET THE K AIR EM OUT, IT AINT HOCKEY WHEN THE STICK LEAVES YOU ON ICE!
30 AUT’ll DROWN U IN BLOOD...HOLD MY CALLS LET ME SPRAY THAT GUN
A WIZZARD WITH THE TRIGGER, NO HARRY POTTER WHEN I WAVE TO WAND
PUSSY! ILL SLIDE IN YO PITCH LIKE FIRST BASE, MAKE YOU RAISE THE BABY
ILL TELL HER TO LIE AND HAVE YOU CONVINCED ITS YOURS LIKE AN EPISODE OF MAURY
NIGGA I AINT NOTHING SWEET, PUNCH YAH TEETH, KNEE TO YAH GUT LEAVE YAH MIDSECTION WEEK
SEND BULLETS TO YAH TEAM, SCOPE WITH THE BEAM...PROPOSE DEATH WHEN I PUT A RED DOT TO YAH DOME PIECE!!!

Ryno
07-20-2019, 07:45 PM
Wanderer that roller coasters line? Yes indeed. Thought the wave to wand line from
Inno was cool. Blue had a line similar last week I think so it wasn’t as impactful but
still my fav line from ur verse. Thought the roller coaster line was original & ether
though, I’m giving this to Wand

V/Wanderer

Sharp
07-21-2019, 09:32 PM
catch a beating & have a tantrum. truly, u amaze
Leave u with more rings on ur face than a teenager going thru a phaze
light but okay
I’m a thrill seeker so the barrel roll before I smoke this guy
Arms up. hear a click ‘fore ur heads jolting back.. Rollercoaster ride
interesting
& ur girl only need make up when I slap her face during menstration
My Palm destroying so much natural beauty, I call it a sugar plantation
lost me here... slap her face during menstruation? I barely had focus for the basic palm flip lmaoo
U a beast facing me?! Real animals die by my hand, please don’t
2 barrels to the back of ur neck.. Feel the heat over ur shoulders like a mink coat
like this concept a lot


LAST WEEK BLUE STOMPED YOU, WONT TAKE MUCH TO BLOW BY YOU NIGGA IM NICE
LET THE K AIR EM OUT, IT AINT HOCKEY WHEN THE STICK LEAVES YOU ON ICE!
okay
30 AUT’ll DROWN U IN BLOOD...HOLD MY CALLS LET ME SPRAY THAT GUN
A WIZZARD WITH THE TRIGGER, NO HARRY POTTER WHEN I WAVE TO WAND
Gun/Wand doesn't rhyme. Blue literally had the harry potter flip against him last week and it was better so it's hard to call this effective... and 'wave to wand' doesn't work both ways, I think
PUSSY! ILL SLIDE IN YO PITCH LIKE FIRST BASE, MAKE YOU RAISE THE BABY
ILL TELL HER TO LIE AND HAVE YOU CONVINCED ITS YOURS LIKE AN EPISODE OF MAURY
not really wordplay so much as a reference
NIGGA I AINT NOTHING SWEET, PUNCH YAH TEETH, KNEE TO YAH GUT LEAVE YAH MIDSECTION WEEK
SEND BULLETS TO YAH TEAM, SCOPE WITH THE BEAM...PROPOSE DEATH WHEN I PUT A RED DOT TO YAH DOME PIECE!!!
RHYMING BARS, FLYING CARS, BUY CIGARS WITH IRON JARS

v/wanderer

Diablo
07-22-2019, 03:17 AM
I wasn’t so keen on “rings” felt that was kinda a reach tbh

didn’t like the execution of rollercoaster

natural beauty/sugar plant was nice

mink coat was nice and slightly obscure too


Inno needed more with the hockey line, similar with the Wand line to me, Maury and the closer lost any kinda momentum you had really


Vote - Wand

Kill Spree
07-22-2019, 02:15 PM
Rings was cool... rollercoaster was a dope concept just didn’t execute it right

Palm sugar plantation was dope imo wasn’t a fan of your closer



Inno that hockey bar been done a million ways wave to wand could have been dope with a different angle..
Maury could have been dope but baby and Maury don’t even rhyme..

Not a fan of your closer

Vote wand had more hits