God Of War
01-27-2013, 02:01 PM
posted on 2/19/01
Zodiac
Now this was a topical battle! The loser will have "I lost to (name of winner)" under his name for a week. There were rules to this and all were matched nicely.
The judges have the verses and will vote accordingly. They will send their comments and votes to me via e-mail so the comments below won't affect their decision. The judges will vote on the Black InQ Criteria of Voting ::
• Originality
• Overall Content
• Creative Imagery
• Word-Play
Now here's the topic ::
"Friday the 13th"
It was a 24-30 Bar limit. This is open for comment. Enjoy!
MC Shadow ::
it was friday the 13th
bored as hell, we needed a vacation
black inq cats, abyss cats, and this wierd kid named jason
all loaded up on a bus, and headed to crystal lake
what we didn't realize were the chances we were about to take
before embarkin on the expedition, i stocked up on all the basics
condoms, snacks, notebooks for raps, and the movie matrix
i could swear i heard dA Menace tell me to grab some horror flicks
but empress iris clutched my hand and said shadow, i'm scared of that shit
i said cool
we got to the camp like six hours after we left the store
as soon as we touched down, a few niggas started actin like lil whores
i mean if it wasn't xtrimity complainin about bugs and sticks,
then it was j rock simply bitchin bout the small number of chicks
i was just chillin in my cabin like 10 o'clock that night
when i heard a sharp yell, i could tell it was a scream from fright
so i jumped up, and ran to where i heard the sound comin from
when i got there SRap was layin in blood wit no tongue
i'm like, damn, i saw a movie like this
but i couldn't think on which one
right when i thought i had it
i heard a sound of a very large gun
i'm runnin fast, wishin this was a dream, hopin this shit would end
i got to where the gunshot came from and saw one of my men
damn menace, through the next few hours i saw a lot of emcees slain,i'm tryin to
find a way outta this, i gotta use my brain
i need to know who the killer is, right when i had that thought
dj judge dread rushes in like, damn shadow we caught
that kid jason's racin round wit knives and guns killin, and we next on the menu
for the endin check the boards, this story's to be continued...........
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DJ Judge Dread ::
I walk down the passageway and all I feel is a cringe from my DNA.
My mind studies the gray clouds above as I question to if its the day.
Was in the public bathroom when I saw a man shudder as his mirror-reflection shattered.
Then a man slip and break his arm as he walked under a roofers ladder.
A drunk man causes a ten car pile up on the Interstate Highway.
Excuse me as I kiss the sky to pray to the spirits above as they laugh and play.
Walk past the arboretum, the green grass turns brown and the flowers wilt.
The earth rumbles as a house falls from that of which Jack had built.
Hokus Pocus, my mind froze unlike a lens that is focused when I walk down the path of mysticism.
A black cat walks by and I breath heavy to this thought of superstition.
And Oak falls like the almighty had sent a sign of the thunderbolt.
The farmers field blazes an angry red fire from the menacing million-volt.
But I just pass by a baby cry as a German Shepard pierces the skull.
The Beast looks at me with his maroon tongue saying "this is only a spoonful."
Get the thoughts outa my head! My body state has me dazed and incarcerated.
I try to realize the lost souls doing the evil, but my brain is decaffeinated.
I did the math, and tried to think of how many bodies could fit in a bath.
I got the "shining" wrath and walking the thin line to the road of a cerebral psychopath.
My feet lead me to the hospital in the elevator headed to the maternity floor.
And watch a lady take the docs syringe to her wrist like the Soap Operas encore.
The blood poured like the predator tyrannosaur finishing the raptors core.
Yet my black friend on the mantel still held the black rose in his claw quoting "nevermore."
My mind spooked at the 13th floor of Hotel Karma looking at my boneless X-ray.
I crawled halfway but my will power held over Erie fears saying, "Its just another day."
Call The Zodiac toll-free and leave a message at:
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Zodiac
Now this was a topical battle! The loser will have "I lost to (name of winner)" under his name for a week. There were rules to this and all were matched nicely.
The judges have the verses and will vote accordingly. They will send their comments and votes to me via e-mail so the comments below won't affect their decision. The judges will vote on the Black InQ Criteria of Voting ::
• Originality
• Overall Content
• Creative Imagery
• Word-Play
Now here's the topic ::
"Friday the 13th"
It was a 24-30 Bar limit. This is open for comment. Enjoy!
MC Shadow ::
it was friday the 13th
bored as hell, we needed a vacation
black inq cats, abyss cats, and this wierd kid named jason
all loaded up on a bus, and headed to crystal lake
what we didn't realize were the chances we were about to take
before embarkin on the expedition, i stocked up on all the basics
condoms, snacks, notebooks for raps, and the movie matrix
i could swear i heard dA Menace tell me to grab some horror flicks
but empress iris clutched my hand and said shadow, i'm scared of that shit
i said cool
we got to the camp like six hours after we left the store
as soon as we touched down, a few niggas started actin like lil whores
i mean if it wasn't xtrimity complainin about bugs and sticks,
then it was j rock simply bitchin bout the small number of chicks
i was just chillin in my cabin like 10 o'clock that night
when i heard a sharp yell, i could tell it was a scream from fright
so i jumped up, and ran to where i heard the sound comin from
when i got there SRap was layin in blood wit no tongue
i'm like, damn, i saw a movie like this
but i couldn't think on which one
right when i thought i had it
i heard a sound of a very large gun
i'm runnin fast, wishin this was a dream, hopin this shit would end
i got to where the gunshot came from and saw one of my men
damn menace, through the next few hours i saw a lot of emcees slain,i'm tryin to
find a way outta this, i gotta use my brain
i need to know who the killer is, right when i had that thought
dj judge dread rushes in like, damn shadow we caught
that kid jason's racin round wit knives and guns killin, and we next on the menu
for the endin check the boards, this story's to be continued...........
------------------------
DJ Judge Dread ::
I walk down the passageway and all I feel is a cringe from my DNA.
My mind studies the gray clouds above as I question to if its the day.
Was in the public bathroom when I saw a man shudder as his mirror-reflection shattered.
Then a man slip and break his arm as he walked under a roofers ladder.
A drunk man causes a ten car pile up on the Interstate Highway.
Excuse me as I kiss the sky to pray to the spirits above as they laugh and play.
Walk past the arboretum, the green grass turns brown and the flowers wilt.
The earth rumbles as a house falls from that of which Jack had built.
Hokus Pocus, my mind froze unlike a lens that is focused when I walk down the path of mysticism.
A black cat walks by and I breath heavy to this thought of superstition.
And Oak falls like the almighty had sent a sign of the thunderbolt.
The farmers field blazes an angry red fire from the menacing million-volt.
But I just pass by a baby cry as a German Shepard pierces the skull.
The Beast looks at me with his maroon tongue saying "this is only a spoonful."
Get the thoughts outa my head! My body state has me dazed and incarcerated.
I try to realize the lost souls doing the evil, but my brain is decaffeinated.
I did the math, and tried to think of how many bodies could fit in a bath.
I got the "shining" wrath and walking the thin line to the road of a cerebral psychopath.
My feet lead me to the hospital in the elevator headed to the maternity floor.
And watch a lady take the docs syringe to her wrist like the Soap Operas encore.
The blood poured like the predator tyrannosaur finishing the raptors core.
Yet my black friend on the mantel still held the black rose in his claw quoting "nevermore."
My mind spooked at the 13th floor of Hotel Karma looking at my boneless X-ray.
I crawled halfway but my will power held over Erie fears saying, "Its just another day."
Call The Zodiac toll-free and leave a message at:
1-888-excite2 pin#: 9734559739