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dull boy
02-17-2020, 10:45 AM
Welcome to my private hell. There's no one to fight now, enjoy myself. I'd rather drown than ask for help. I wish I was someone else. Mr. Perfect, Ms. Construed. Lead the way, follow through. You probably hate me, I do too. You're so much like me I feel sorry for you. But I think you're pretty, pretty sure. You will profit, you will get hurt. I eat my words they taste like dirt. I'm only ashamed because I know what it's worth. Find my comfort inside blame. Shove my pride back down my face. My worst habit's waking up at least once a day. Balance barefoot on a needle heaven's just a jump away.

Adverse
02-17-2020, 11:07 AM
Burn Fetish - Eyedea & Abilities

dull boy
02-17-2020, 11:16 AM
Burn Fetish - Eyedea & Abilities

I’m looking for feed on my original piece, Buzz Killington.

Adverse
02-17-2020, 11:39 AM
Sorry dude i just thought you might like that Eyedea track

dull boy
02-17-2020, 12:27 PM
Sorry dude i just thought you might like that Eyedea track

No, I’m sorry. My comment was light hearted. I do like the track.

Exis
02-17-2020, 06:38 PM
You're one of the best people I've read doin' paragraph style...Oh & CopyPat, my bad had to give him a shout out.

Plot
02-18-2020, 01:32 AM
I liked this for the content, too short though. And needed more multies instead of single rhyme sounds. Liked the kinda switch of tempo/scheme towards the end.
Im feeling the name as a play on a trent Rezner track, and gotta sort of abstract music vibe.. when you mention 'think your pretty' i subconciously think of the sex-pistols, and when you talk about 'hurt' my mind goes to Johny Cash. Maybe it was intended maybe not, might be some I missed even

Eŋg
02-20-2020, 07:15 PM
ms.construed was clever. i liked that.

Master Rock
02-21-2020, 11:38 PM
Yo, the dull boy is polishing the area. Watch out!

slecht
02-22-2020, 08:23 PM
I can relate.

Wish was longer though.

Cool piece.