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Joko
03-28-2020, 02:49 PM
Since heaven sent peddlers of metaphysics meddling,

I been a ghost rider road ragin on a pale bike pedaling,

Heated like Lucy placed a lightbulb above my head and lit,

So here I sit spittin hellfire from my magma lips,

Good heavens or goddamn hell might settle in,

While you fucking fussin over facebook messagin,

Petty playin victim with a pussy grabbing president,

And handin extra billions to the foot soldier fetishists,

Bar none; Let em in,

30 coins to cross the river Styx,

Swerve and curve fast furious around the Sanzu drift,

Quiet looms in darkest pits,

Flames speaks; I spark the spliff,

Burning bush fires lit the roads pathed with bad intent,

Eŋg
03-28-2020, 03:28 PM
very miltonian in referencing charon and then fast and furious.

good shit.

dull boy
03-28-2020, 03:31 PM
Dope

Adverse
03-30-2020, 07:21 PM
Flowed well, liked the biblical references thought they were cool. Short, sweet and straight to the point really appealed to me as a reader so props