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Geno
04-27-2020, 11:46 PM
Curse.
Whats a rampage? A basket case- commit mass rape, stab, maim- a few hand grenades, blast the gauge, shove your face in the fan blades, laugh, play in the blood splattered on your lamp shades, masquerade at a caberet, get the facts straight, my swags great, every pair of tits and ass gonna learn how my shaft taste, stand, wait- for the manager to agitate, pull out the mack, spray, listen to the bullets collaborate, down his back, waist- collapsed legs, the whole shit on your youtubes, make a mask change, reanimate, start a new massacre lookin for faggots to castrate, I dont gotta shit talk, when i can grip yall- around the neck with hands like pit jaws, from where you stand ..then pinfall, the new debo snatch the tricycle from jigsaw- then cripwalk, over and ambush my sniper while hes wipin his lens off, smack the shit outta limbaugh and drag him thru crenshaw, im pissed off- like johnny 23 when he was set fire by pinball, im in the restroom- kick stalls, cuz i dont give a fuck about your privacy the way connecticut did griswold...

AnOn.
...No shitballs, cause after I sip sauce, I'm snatching wallets and makin deposits -faster than your handkerchief falls// I get lost -with no coordinates, insubordinate, convinced ill die as poor shit, pour the fifth, and still kick sick performances// unfortunate -cases of karma, babies and mommas, rabies the scratch gave me from car rust, sniffing saw dust, call n get cussed out as quick as my boss does// live in a small bus -special ed in the house, with definite doubts, no lead pencils allowed, stencils of clowns, proud, and you might find weapons around// kept in the house -hidden, bound for prison, ten seconds from injections that put down your kitten, sippin, I'm a fountain -pissin, on your couch n listen.. to the sound of your drownin surrounded system// down for missions -ill rob you nicely, on the propper night be -Pooky verses ice tee, fight me, snatchin womens nikes//.

Pharaohs Army
04-27-2020, 11:54 PM
curse's verse makes me wanna rap it so i did

corleone
04-28-2020, 12:09 AM
curse's verse makes me wanna rap it so i did

this shit was dope.. yo, anon.. shiiiiieeeetttt.. why aint you tell me that you was you? vow.. lol remember all the crews we use to be in and collabs we use to do together?.. this was over 22 years ago when we use to get down.. I miss you bro, always a kindred spirit to be welcomed to.. love and peace my dude

BraGGin Rights
04-28-2020, 06:40 PM
then cripwalk, over and ambush my sniper while hes wipin his lens off

live in a small bus -special ed in the house, with definite doubts, no lead pencils allowed, stencils of clowns, proud, and you might find weapons around

Those stood out to me. Thanks for sharing

Johnny 6 feet
05-03-2020, 12:31 PM
This whole collab put me in mind of a couple of dudes taking turns beating the shit out of punching bag. Nice imagery and rhyme schemes in both verses.

Some stand out stuff:

"get the facts straight, my swags great, every pair of tits and ass gonna learn how my shaft taste,"

"live in a small bus -special ed in the house, with definite doubts, no lead pencils allowed, stencils of clowns, proud, and you might find weapons around"

Internals, vocab, pacing, all good. You guys work well together. My only note would be just to space your lines out so they're not in a paragraph. Just makes them easier to read.

Good stuff. Keep posting.

-6

corleone
10-10-2020, 04:01 AM
^^ this dude El Muffin said my boy curse was trash, smh.. hes trippin, my boy Curse is raw.. just read his verse and capture the imagery he displays in his verses.. hes one of the best to ever do it.. straight up

El Muffin
10-10-2020, 05:20 AM
Nope. Dude talked as much shit as you do

Called me out Preceding a tournament

Bodied. Never seen again.

These are the facts

El Muffin
10-10-2020, 05:21 AM
He was a dirty juggalo looking ass bum

These are also Faxts

El Muffin
10-10-2020, 05:22 AM
Verse read like a great value Eminem

Genocide is raw though . I like his tracks he did with Phil

Dope girl
10-11-2020, 02:23 PM
I see you guys spit slick lines
The flow is raw
Keep spitting