FIGHT NIGHT RD 1: Top Ill Gangster 2 vs. Chainz

[Blue Bayou]

8 Lines, due in 10 Minutes.

Post on time or you are DQ’d. No excuses. Cutting it close? Post an incomplete verse then. If you are late you are DQ’d.

No biting / recycling. Those are a DQ.

Short votes are acceptable. This is supposed to move quickly. No detailed breakdowns needed.

VERSES ARE DUE 10 MINS AFTER THE TIME YOUR THREAD IS POSTED


@ToP iLL Gangster Two
Chainz

[TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO]

Trading skill for us would be a unique swap
with the concepts I’m Steve Jobs, your resume goes ghost on Indeed Jobs
In this political game, I’m Joe Biden man
I’ll deny this rape and still win the votes when this bitch gets touched by Dem hands
I know I bothered you last night, I’ll leave you alone bro
It’s just your mom’s cell got cut off so I had to call the home phone
I’m Catholic but I get Synagogue praise now
After this I will banish you to the open mic to do Sinacog breakdowns

[Chainz]

Ur girl won't let ya hit, I smash her souls w dreams
lay her down an wrap her legs around me till I Canoli fill that hole wit cream
Fist strong to leave a ackin dude
Uppercut lift gangsta grills to a level dentists cant make a dedication too
Bring gats, i got knives to steal ya life fam
fuck Top Gun, I'll stab his air strip till he's left on Ice man
weak word play...get Touched quick
Gang raped another verse w his forced shit

[Blue Bayou]

OPEN FOR VOTES

[~RustyGunZ~]

Chainz got it with his opener and not shamelessly using prewrittens in a fn

[Neighbor]

v/ Top

[sral]

Chainz for me also

Cannoli was enough really

[Blue Bayou]

2-1 VOTE UP

[Neighbor]

Am I missing something w/ the cannoli line?

[Answer]

Am I missing something w/ the cannoli line?

i assume its a butchered phonetic of can only its ok

idk man i think chainz first 2 were the better bars here but top ill had a full 8.


v/ chainz i guess

[TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO]

Am I missing something w/ the cannoli line?

Can only

[Blue Bayou]

steve jobs & dem hands vs. Top Gun i thought was done well

Overall i think if Chainz had a legitimate closer he couldve maybe had it... the mom bar fell flat to me but Canoli , while a good attempt, just doesn't quite work as can only


I got Top

[Blue Bayou]

3-2 UPP

[TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO]

Answer explanation does not make sense.

[Steve Fox]

chainz

[Neighbor]

Cannoli didn't translate for me.. next 2 were decent jabs & the closer was irrelevant

Top had presumably pre-writtens, but they landed so I have to go w/ him here

v/ TID2

[Answer]

Answer explanation does not make sense.

It does. 3 weak bars & 1 ok bar vs. 3 ok bars and 1 filler.

im going with the 3 ok bars

v/ chainz

[Blue Bayou]

4-2 please keep voting

my bad on the count

[tradanN]

V top

Opener and closer better than cannoli imo

[Blue Bayou]

4-3

[Blue Bayou]

Chainz wins

gotta keep it movin

[Incredible]

Lol nvm