Semi Finals: FGR Vs. Wanderer - WANDERER WINS

[Incredible]

8-Man Show N' Prove Semi-Finals!!

Rules

Due Dates:
• Verses are due Thursday by 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends MONDAY ideally
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• One sided battles may get closed early.
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• Max. = 20 lines
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• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines



FGR Wanderer

[Wanderer]

Yep

[FGR]

Yeah man

[FGR]

Wanderer I sent 12 to incred

[Incredible]

Wanderers Verse:


A girl probs said ur dick was too small & I doubt u ever got past that
let’s be real... this won’t be the first time u’ve had to show n prove & been laughed at
Losing streak in the NBL. Last week to Orc’s verse in the worst way
& unsurprisingly struggled with Letter’s... since u always forcing them wordplays
Not a revered writer. No Oscar Wilde but for sure this kid’s gay
Hardly Shakespeare... but I WILL be tryna dislodge one from ur rib cage
& I won’t talk shit bout ur weight.. tho it’d make the people chant
How can I throw shade on u when even the worlds largest gazebo can’t
Srsly.. Clench fists at me? buckshot’ll teach this faker a lesson
Pop one in ur jaw & watch ur teeth roll over each other, that’s a display of aggression
See I got a .44 for close range but all my choppers are mean
If u pulling arms wit the snub nose it’s coz ur girl’s a pig & u don’t wanna be seen



VS.


FGRs Verse:


Punches, personals, wordplay.... I suggest bringing yo best
Whatever u got in store for me I'm smashing like a George Floyd protest
Everytime he drops a verse the site dies a little. His bars leave us in dire straits
if we keep reading wanderoo in text faster than a book on primates
A tourney win for you?? that is not what this man will see
Keep dreaming, cuz I'll aim this Armiger chest & make sure it's your final fantasy
You'll need a ambulance after this beating. My hits are vicious, fag
One or two punches will cosmetics to come to your house like a ipsy bag
This gay fuck doesn't slay stuff. playing with the chrome will get him hurt
if you hear he's raising arms it's most likely some dude taking off his shirt
Women despise you. No chick wants to service your boner
If a girl bangs him, Wannamaker want to die like a suicidal store owner

[Hush]

Wanderers Verse:


A girl probs said ur dick was too small & I doubt u ever got past that
let’s be real... this won’t be the first time u’ve had to show n prove & been laughed at
....that’s nice . Smooth and relevant
Losing streak in the NBL. Last week to Orc’s verse in the worst way
& unsurprisingly struggled with Letter’s... since u always forcing them wordplays
.:.ok
Not a revered writer. No Oscar Wilde but for sure this kid’s gay
Hardly Shakespeare... but I WILL be tryna dislodge one from ur rib cage
.....this is a old concept and the flip here was not clever enough
& I won’t talk shit bout ur weight.. tho it’d make the people chant
How can I throw shade on u when even the worlds largest gazebo can’t
....nah
Srsly.. Clench fists at me? buckshot’ll teach this faker a lesson
Pop one in ur jaw & watch ur teeth roll over each other, that’s a display of aggression
.....good try but it didn’t land flat
See I got a .44 for close range but all my choppers are mean
If u pulling arms wit the snub nose it’s coz ur girl’s a pig & u don’t wanna be seen
...::that’s dope



VS.


FGRs Verse:


Punches, personals, wordplay.... I suggest bringing yo best
Whatever u got in store for me I'm smashing like a George Floyd protest
...nah man . This is simple and many ppl have done lines on this concept thus far . Stuff like this is really only potent the week off the news break
Everytime he drops a verse the site dies a little. His bars leave us in dire straits
if we keep reading wanderoo in text faster than a book on primates
....I don’t get it
A tourney win for you?? that is not what this man will see
Keep dreaming, cuz I'll aim this Armiger chest & make sure it's your final fantasy
....I don’t get this wordplay
You'll need a ambulance after this beating. My hits are vicious, fag
One or two punches will cosmetics to come to your house like a ipsy bag
....lol ok
This gay fuck doesn't slay stuff. playing with the chrome will get him hurt
if you hear he's raising arms it's most likely some dude taking off his shirt
....lol silly but ok
Women despise you. No chick wants to service your boner
If a girl bangs him, Wannamaker want to die like a suicidal store owner
...nah





Wander got this by a line or two in my opinion


Fgr had some stuff I didn’t understand and that made the differenxe

[Adverse]

Wand:
A girl probs said ur dick was too small & I doubt u ever got past that
let’s be real... this won’t be the first time u’ve had to show n prove & been laughed at
^ decent opener

Losing streak in the NBL. Last week to Orc’s verse in the worst way
& unsurprisingly struggled with Letter’s... since u always forcing them wordplays
^ lmao nice one here

Not a revered writer. No Oscar Wilde but for sure this kid’s gay
Hardly Shakespeare... but I WILL be tryna dislodge one from ur rib cage
^ decent but I've seen it done a lot of different ways

& I won’t talk shit bout ur weight.. tho it’d make the people chant
How can I throw shade on u when even the worlds largest gazebo can’t
^ this was alright but at the same time was worded kinda awkward

Srsly.. Clench fists at me? buckshot’ll teach this faker a lesson
Pop one in ur jaw & watch ur teeth roll over each other, that’s a display of aggression
^ ehhhhh

See I got a .44 for close range but all my choppers are mean
If u pulling arms wit the snub nose it’s coz ur girl’s a pig & u don’t wanna be seen
^ hahaha good closer man

FGR:
Punches, personals, wordplay.... I suggest bringing yo best
Whatever u got in store for me I'm smashing like a George Floyd protest
^ I liked this solid punch to start it off

Everytime he drops a verse the site dies a little. His bars leave us in dire straits
if we keep reading wanderoo in text faster than a book on primates
^ kinda forced tbh

A tourney win for you?? that is not what this man will see
Keep dreaming, cuz I'll aim this Armiger chest & make sure it's your final fantasy
^ okay decent reference

You'll need a ambulance after this beating. My hits are vicious, fag
One or two punches will cosmetics to come to your house like a ipsy bag
^ had to google but alright

This gay fuck doesn't slay stuff. playing with the chrome will get him hurt
if you hear he's raising arms it's most likely some dude taking off his shirt
^ okay hahaha kinda funny

Women despise you. No chick wants to service your boner
If a girl bangs him, Wannamaker want to die like a suicidal store owner
^ could have been executed a little better

Overall i think Wand squeezed this one out, his was a tiny bit more consistent. Fgr had more misses imo

[Resin M-I-C]

show and prove intro was hot
ok statement letter line
shakespeare is a lil old my dude
lol solid fat lines
display of aggression was a banggerr
snub nose was funny

vs

floyd was simple, was ok
wanderoo didnt hit
googled armiger.. a lil stretch but pts on creativity
cosmetic seen before, fresh twist i like it
shirt made me laugh out loud fr haha
googled wannamaker, aight

wanderer was a bit more consistant here.. started to heat up at the end real good.. fgr has good concepts, a lil tweak here and there with a couple lines and he’d have a bigger impact.. good stuff gentlemen

v Wanderer

[Coop]

Wanderer

A girl probs said ur dick was too small & I doubt u ever got past that
let’s be real... this won’t be the first time u’ve had to show n prove & been laughed at
Subpar opener.
Losing streak in the NBL. Last week to Orc’s verse in the worst way
& unsurprisingly struggled with Letter’s... since u always forcing them wordplays
Not bad, but I wasn't feelin the wording of the 2nd line. And like i've mentioned before, the "you lost to ___ last week" bars don't really impress.
Not a revered writer. No Oscar Wilde but for sure this kid’s gay
Hardly Shakespeare... but I WILL be tryna dislodge one from ur rib cage
Meh
& I won’t talk shit bout ur weight.. tho it’d make the people chant
How can I throw shade on u when even the worlds largest gazebo can’t
Ok
Srsly.. Clench fists at me? buckshot’ll teach this faker a lesson
Pop one in ur jaw & watch ur teeth roll over each other, that’s a display of aggression
Above avg gun bar
See I got a .44 for close range but all my choppers are mean
If u pulling arms wit the snub nose it’s coz ur girl’s a pig & u don’t wanna be seen
Ehhhhhh


You had 3 bars in the battle against me better than anything you brought here. Writing fatigue?

5.5/10

VS.


FGRs Verse:


Punches, personals, wordplay.... I suggest bringing yo best
Whatever u got in store for me I'm smashing like a George Floyd protest
Basic
Everytime he drops a verse the site dies a little. His bars leave us in dire straits
if we keep reading wanderoo in text faster than a book on primates
The wp didn't work. Wander you? Oooh? tf
A tourney win for you?? that is not what this man will see
Keep dreaming, cuz I'll aim this Armiger chest & make sure it's your final fantasy
So-so gun bar
You'll need a ambulance after this beating. My hits are vicious, fag
One or two punches will cosmetics to come to your house like a ipsy bag
Had to look up Ipsy but i like the wp here
This gay fuck doesn't slay stuff. playing with the chrome will get him hurt
if you hear he's raising arms it's most likely some dude taking off his shirt
I chuckled
Women despise you. No chick wants to service your boner
If a girl bangs him, Wannamaker want to die like a suicidal store owner
Ok

6/10


I'd like to see you be more clever than just using WPs. Wordplays should be the icing on the cake, not the cake itself. If I had to pick, cosmetics was LOTB.


Cosmetics > raising arms > aggression > wannamaker/letters/gazebo

Vote: FGR

[evaD]

Pullin arms
Letters
Gazebo

Armiger
Cosmetics

WNderer was more consistent here FGR I thought your name plays were a bit too obscure so they didn’t really land

Vote - wanderer

[Hush]

Wand wins