Semi Finals: SMaSH Vs. evaD - EVAD WINS

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8-Man Show N' Prove Semi-Finals!!

Rules

Due Dates:
• Verses are due Thursday by 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends MONDAY ideally
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ
• To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance

Line Limit:
• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 20 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.

Voting:
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• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
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means you will disqualified.
• A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
• If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a verse.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines



SMaSH evaD

[evaD]

Ahh my all-dishin for the final

Ready whenever

[SMaSH]

Cool...

[SMaSH]

This coulda went from a skirmish to a full brawl....now I'm finna murder this fool y'all
Cuz when I show this Davey boy... Smiths.... It's not the British bulldog
If you tubed into the last round, shit was sad ...talk about an easy path
We know you gay.... You bottom right? Got put In the best position to skip an ad
But you'll be dead in no time, why waste bullets from a 45
But it's no prob, compare him to spongebob just another square wit no drive
You can't tell the difference? I know you hear it... And y'all don't like gun bars? But you should fear it
Cuz I'll shoot his father and his son... Till they both have a Holy Spirit
Didn't like my audition bar? Well all yours remedial , couldn't measure upto me in any show
So STAND UP just to get stomped by a big ass force like a ludacris video
I'm tired of the fake niggas tactics still, bout as hard as a dafodil
you Prolly a rat.... Unable to preform good without singing like Beyonce acting skills
And for me.... There is no need for a boast my punching power really makes me a goat
Cuz Dave could be off the weed and the coke and it still wouldn't cushion the blow

IDK why I sent the verse I shoulda just posted.... Oh well

[evaD]

“SMaSH"

ima open without a punch, fuck it, just something I wanna say..
if I was in a newcomer tourney after 4 years id be fucking ashamed.
I put in work to earn that capital.. what i write down is the same
this lil bitch couldn't hold down a shift long enough to type out his own name
This verse inspired by Aero, dudes SC battle was a fly caper
I got a loada stories to throw you off too but mine'll be a skyscraper
Respect to FGR and Wanderer, but worthy he’s never been
you're only here to make up numbers, you should’ve been seeded eleventeen
Inc whats with these losers you keep feeding me? its like a fall-guy platter
cuz I'm a problem and you aint seeing me.....like #alllivesmatter
speaking of race relations, it takes one call to mack your bitch
She pull up skrt and slides her back end out if you really catch my drift
so let this be a lesson man, this time you're fucked and ill warn ya
Dave roll with a Beckham gang..my Set Pieces'll curl you up in the corner

[Adverse]

Smash:
This coulda went from a skirmish to a full brawl....now I'm finna murder this fool y'all
Cuz when I show this Davey boy... Smiths.... It's not the British bulldog
^ had to google but was decent overall

If you tubed into the last round, shit was sad ...talk about an easy path
We know you gay.... You bottom right? Got put In the best position to skip an ad
^ I AM OFFENDED lol jp was an alright connection but execution could have been better

But you'll be dead in no time, why waste bullets from a 45
But it's no prob, compare him to spongebob just another square wit no drive
^ this is alright I'm sure it's been done before

You can't tell the difference? I know you hear it... And y'all don't like gun bars? But you should fear it
Cuz I'll shoot his father and his son... Till they both have a Holy Spirit
^ lacked execution but a good idea

Didn't like my audition bar? Well all yours remedial , couldn't measure upto me in any show
So STAND UP just to get stomped by a big ass force like a ludacris video
^ alright pretty decent

I'm tired of the fake niggas tactics still, bout as hard as a dafodil
you Prolly a rat.... Unable to preform good without singing like Beyonce acting skills
^ ehhhh not feeling it

And for me.... There is no need for a boast my punching power really makes me a goat
Cuz Dave could be off the weed and the coke and it still wouldn't cushion the blow
^ pretty decent

Dave:
ima open without a punch, fuck it, just something I wanna say..
if I was in a newcomer tourney after 4 years id be fucking ashamed.
^ decent statement

I put in work to earn that capital.. what i write down is the same
this lil bitch couldn't hold down a shift long enough to type out his own name
^ hahaha i liked this!

This verse inspired by Aero, dudes SC battle was a fly caper
I got a loada stories to throw you off too but mine'll be a skyscraper
^ damn dope. Good hit

Respect to FGR and Wanderer, but worthy he’s never been
you're only here to make up numbers, you should’ve been seeded eleventeen
^ cool idea

Inc whats with these losers you keep feeding me? its like a fall-guy platter
cuz I'm a problem and you aint seeing me.....like #alllivesmatter
^ ehhhhh okay

speaking of race relations, it takes one call to mack your bitch
She pull up skrt and slides her back end out if you really catch my drift
^ nice

so let this be a lesson man, this time you're fucked and ill warn ya
Dave roll with a Beckham gang..my Set Pieces'll curl you up in the corner
^ i don't know wasn't your best

Dave got this pretty convincingly to me, had some good consistent punches where Smash had a couple of misses. Twas a decent battle though

V/Davey

[Wanderer]

This coulda went from a skirmish to a full brawl....now I'm finna murder this fool y'all
Cuz when I show this Davey boy... Smiths.... It's not the British bulldog
Didn’t like that the set up felt longer than the punch BUT the punch was cool
If you tubed into the last round, shit was sad ...talk about an easy path
We know you gay.... You bottom right? Got put In the best position to skip an ad
just about ok... seen a LOT of Ad plays
But you'll be dead in no time, why waste bullets from a 45
But it's no prob, compare him to spongebob just another square wit no drive
I wasn’t feeling this if I’m honest
You can't tell the difference? I know you hear it... And y'all don't like gun bars? But you should fear it
Cuz I'll shoot his father and his son... Till they both have a Holy Spirit
Set up felt too long again. The punch wasn’t great here either
Didn't like my audition bar? Well all yours remedial , couldn't measure upto me in any show
So STAND UP just to get stomped by a big ass force like a ludacris video
Same again with the setup but I enjoyed the punch
I'm tired of the fake niggas tactics still, bout as hard as a dafodil
you Prolly a rat.... Unable to preform good without singing like Beyonce acting skills
This is ok
And for me.... There is no need for a boast my punching power really makes me a goat
Cuz Dave could be off the weed and the coke and it still wouldn't cushion the blow
Fell flat



“SMaSH"

ima open without a punch, fuck it, just something I wanna say..
if I was in a newcomer tourney after 4 years id be fucking ashamed.
Lol ok
I put in work to earn that capital.. what i write down is the same
this lil bitch couldn't hold down a shift long enough to type out his own name
Cool
This verse inspired by Aero, dudes SC battle was a fly caper
I got a loada stories to throw you off too but mine'll be a skyscraper
like the idea a lot but somehow I think it coulda been executed a tad better
Respect to FGR and Wanderer, but worthy he’s never been
you're only here to make up numbers, you should’ve been seeded eleventeen
Lol yeah ok
Inc whats with these losers you keep feeding me? its like a fall-guy platter
cuz I'm a problem and you aint seeing me.....like #alllivesmatter
I’m not sure on this one... like what’s a fall-guy platter? & the punch was so so
speaking of race relations, it takes one call to mack your bitch
She pull up skrt and slides her back end out if you really catch my drift
Ermmm there’s something camp about this. Idk why. Still kinda like it for the lol factor
so let this be a lesson man, this time you're fucked and ill warn ya
Dave roll with a Beckham gang..my Set Pieces'll curl you up in the corner
Fire


Closer from Dave LOTB for me... then I got his first 4 bars probably trumping anything Smash put out. Having said that, this is definitely one of the better verses I’ve seen you drop Smash. Keep it up. I got Dave winning as I preferred his setups and he came harder all round with less misses.

Vote evaD

[Resin M-I-C]

bulldog ryhme was off but that punch was fiiire
seen some ad lines, it was aigh
spongebob was a miss for me man
holy spirit got me like why didnt i think of that concent, i fucks with it heavy
stand up was ehhhh
dafodils caught me off guard lol punch missed
closer ok but drug lines been done like that before

vs

starting off swingiin with that newcomer line
shift was cool
throw u off stories lines been done, this was ok.. fly caper tho lol
eleventeen was corny but funny
fall guy platter lol.. punch coulda been better also
drift was ok
bckham coulda been way better


this was close, smash started off solid but fell off sharply.. same with dave but his lows werent as low.. first time reading smash, solid potential.. this wasnt up to par from what i’ve read from dave but if he gets more consistant he’s gonna be a problem here

v dave

v dave

[the Munster]

I think this was a great battle. I like smash better in this one, to me he had the more consistent verse, where I felt daves slacked off in the middle of the verse. I also liked the skip ad punch. I think it was a great battle tho

[Coop]

Smash

This coulda went from a skirmish to a full brawl....now I'm finna murder this fool y'all
Cuz when I show this Davey boy... Smiths.... It's not the British bulldog
Light
If you tubed into the last round, shit was sad ...talk about an easy path
We know you gay.... You bottom right? Got put In the best position to skip an ad
I like the cleverness. I feel the skip an ad part backfired though. To me it came off like it was effortless to get past him
But you'll be dead in no time, why waste bullets from a 45
But it's no prob, compare him to spongebob just another square wit no drive
Above avg filler. Setup should've been more relevant
You can't tell the difference? I know you hear it... And y'all don't like gun bars? But you should fear it
Cuz I'll shoot his father and his son... Till they both have a Holy Spirit
Set up a little wordy but I chuckled
Didn't like my audition bar? Well all yours remedial , couldn't measure upto me in any show
So STAND UP just to get stomped by a big ass force like a ludacris video
Subpar
I'm tired of the fake niggas tactics still, bout as hard as a dafodil
you Prolly a rat.... Unable to preform good without singing like Beyonce acting skills
Wasn't feelin
And for me.... There is no need for a boast my punching power really makes me a goat
Cuz Dave could be off the weed and the coke and it still wouldn't cushion the blow
If this was intended to be kush wp, it's a reach. If not, this was ok.

Skip an ad was my favorite, holy spirit was second. You had much better wording overall than the last few battles I've seen from you.

5.5/10



VS


evaD

ima open without a punch, fuck it, just something I wanna say..
if I was in a newcomer tourney after 4 years id be fucking ashamed.
Basic but I chuckled.
I put in work to earn that capital.. what i write down is the same
this lil bitch couldn't hold down a shift long enough to type out his own name
LOTB so far
This verse inspired by Aero, dudes SC battle was a fly caper
I got a loada stories to throw you off too but mine'll be a skyscraper
The 'throw you off' part didn't work
Respect to FGR and Wanderer, but worthy he’s never been
you're only here to make up numbers, you should’ve been seeded eleventeen
Seems like a bar for SC, not this tourney.
Inc whats with these losers you keep feeding me? its like a fall-guy platter
cuz I'm a problem and you aint seeing me.....like #alllivesmatter
Above avg filler
speaking of race relations, it takes one call to mack your bitch
She pull up skrt and slides her back end out if you really catch my drift
Ok ok
so let this be a lesson man, this time you're fucked and ill warn ya
Dave roll with a Beckham gang..my Set Pieces'll curl you up in the corner
Wasn't feelin

The first two lines i liked more than Smash's best two lines. All you had to do was not fumble the rest of the verse. Mission accomplished.

6.5/10

Vote: evaD

[Hush]

Dave wins