Zygote Battle Rap 5

[Pharaohs Army]

http://soundcloud.com/user-337502377/zygote-battle-rap-5

[Pharaohs Army]

JESODIST
zygote

[corleone]

zygote is cool.. but the whole idea of having a ghost writer on a forum is totally wack so in essence I genuinely wasn't feeling this..

[Eŋg]

jesus fucking christ, bro

not your finest moment

i think this ranks among the worst in your time here, actually

and you've already had some pretty bad ones, so...

edit - i did originally turn it off after 30 seconds but decided to listen all the way through and holy shit @ that mic presence

the quality is bad, the beat choice and rendition questionable

but compounded with the fact you're just reading a random guy's script off the internet, recording it and then posting it is really getting me for some reason

i don't know what i expected. sorry.

[Pharaohs Army]

jesus fucking christ, bro

not your finest moment

i think this ranks among the worst in your time here, actually

and you've already had some pretty bad ones, so...

edit - i did originally turn it off after 30 seconds but decided to listen all the way through and holy shit @ that mic presence

the quality is bad, the beat choice and rendition questionable

but compounded with the fact you're just reading a random guy's script off the internet, recording it and then posting it is really getting me for some reason

i don't know what i expected. sorry.

It was 1 take.
And for how little experience I have with recording it's NOT terrible by MY standards. Was on beat for the first 3/4ths. Did run out of breath at the end.
I know I have a lot of room for improvement. "Ranking the worst in my time here" is a little much IMO

[Adverse]

I mean I think for what this was it was a cool little homage thing and yeah your delivery was a little meh but at the same time like you said it was one take and you read it off paper, I think that reflected here and was kinda meh but I don't think it was the "worst"

[Sinnercog]

Horrendous.


Do more.

[Hush]

I know your showing this to other ppl and assume you aren’t giving Zygote his writing credits



This isn’t normal
This isn’t hip hop
This isn’t cool

[Pharaohs Army]

I know your showing this to other ppl and assume you aren’t giving Zygote his writing credits

Wrong on your assumption. I put his name in the title and also the description I said "written by Zygote".
This isn’t normal
This isn’t hip hop
This isn’t cool

I disagree that it's not hip hop. And I think the first 3/4 are Not Terrible. Somewhat okay.

But whatever. You can have your opinions.

[Hush]

Aight maybe I took it the wrong way


And yea u was on beat


Rock out brother

[Eŋg]

yea this wasn't good

if it isn't among your worst things here please detail to me what you think was worse?

[JESODIST]

Lyrical-Flame Spiritual Same no Mystical-Fame
In this Empirical-Game far form a Pitiful Dame
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sYspXO6I6C8

[Pharaohs Army]

yea this wasn't good

if it isn't among your worst things here please detail to me what you think was worse?

I think I've heard a spoken word of yours. How bout you post a track where you're rapping over a beat for all to hear, like I did.

[Pharaohs Army]

Lyrical-Flame Spiritual Same no Mystical-Fame
In this Empirical-Game far form a Pitiful Dame
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sYspXO6I6C8

Is that you on the track?

[Eŋg]

I think I've heard a spoken word of yours.

yea i was pretty good. i also wrote it.

Pakistani Hand Cannon spits lava on the mic. holla at him if you tryna get bodied further.

[Pharaohs Army]

yea i was pretty good. i also wrote it.

Pakistani Hand Cannon spits lava on the mic. holla at him if you tryna get bodied further.

I still maintain that this is Okay. Not bad.

If Pakistani Hand Cannon wants to post a rap that's better. By all means. Please do,

[Exis]

I think Ox was a little harsh on you...I'm no audio head so critique from me means nothin', thought it was aight though...def noticed you ran outta breath lol...gracias for linkin' fam.

[Pakistani Hand Cannon]

straight audio aids

[Pharaohs Army]

straight audio aids

I'll take that as a compliment.
Very sick

[Master Rock]

Dang, Pharaoh you make a brotha wanna do an underground tape deck hiss fisher price recording high school collab. I think you potential my man in the nostaglik underground scene. Keep rocking bro!

[Johnny 6 feet]

Felt the audio was a little too loud for your vocals. Made them difficult to listen to. You stayed on beat and the delivery was solid enough but I felt it could've been delivered with a little more intensity and variation in tone. Far, far from the worst I've heard though. Lyrics were packed out with multis and good vocabs, also some good punches thrown in.

As a diss, I felt the middle finger was delivered solidly enough.

keep elevating dude.