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Hush
07-20-2020, 03:26 PM
10 lines
Due tonight


Barcotic TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO
07-20-2020, 03:35 PM
Ready when you are

Hush
07-20-2020, 03:44 PM
Ready when you are

You can dm it to me so you don’t gotta play the waiting game with him

Hush
07-20-2020, 04:32 PM
Barcotic I have his verse

Barcotic
07-20-2020, 06:02 PM
Zaddy's vote does not count. GL

Barcotic
07-21-2020, 12:28 AM
U either a fat faggot or an alias using a fat faggot's pictures

Either way U a faggot too

With 2 consecutive losses, soon to be 3 & contemplating a break
That's Drag in a crossroads...and so is his body when I'm omw to the lake
Failing to climb ranks? Shit that's a bummer, I sit at the summit
I'm a George St-Pierre. U a Paul Daley...by posting pics of your stomach
Peeped Hush's brackets and immediately pouted. It's flop!
I'm at the top of the mountain, why am I battling the mountain of Top ..
For any1 who did NOT see, his latest pic is sloppy/quite the image
I got Randy with his sister..
He got Randy from Trailer Park Boys suing for copyright infringement
Is this a spy op. or is there another reason you deny lots?
Won't tell us where ya from? The only thing ppl keep from U is livestock

Hush
07-21-2020, 07:18 AM
Chop this guy up, put his limbs in separate concoctions
If I want to find myself a wack rapper, I have to check all the boxes
You winning? That plot’s botched I’m top notch
Leave your parts EVERYWHERE, forensics with the chalk setting up hop scotch
You’re well known here, but the reasons are less inspired
Them verses are critically ‘panned’, hit with gasoline and set on fire
Your hygeine is a coin flip, except every cent had is sour,
You’re like clear skies to the nose, zero percent chance of showers
Voters see your verse and realize quick they’re tightly knit
You’ll be hearing more nah’s than a Queens project in 96

evaD
07-21-2020, 10:04 AM
Draggin across roads is a stretch for me but it’s cool and a personal
Appall daily is nice
Don’t like mountain unless I’m missing something
Had to google Randy but it hits. Needs to rhyme better for this long of a bar though
Livestock was funny setup coulda been better to tie in as the punch cane slightly left field

Check boxes a bit awkward/forced
Hopscotch better version of the same idea. Still technically doesn’t make sense wrt hopscotch
Panned is cool
Showers is cool like the wp in the setup even if it’s a played one. On the nose part threw me a bit
Nas is ok but kinda basic. Bit embarrassed how long I took to even get that lol

Draggin v boxes
Paul Daley v hopscotch
Mountain v pan
Trailer park boys v showers (just)
Livestock v nas

I got Barc edging this 3-2 was very close though

Vote - Barcotic

Destroyer
07-21-2020, 10:12 AM
I got barc here
it was a good battle, I didn’t get a couple from top. Panned...showers was light
Paul Daley was lols

I got barc

Hush
07-21-2020, 10:23 AM
U either a fat faggot or an alias using a fat faggot's pictures

Either way U a faggot too

With 2 consecutive losses, soon to be 3 & contemplating a break
That's Drag in a crossroads...and so is his body when I'm omw to the lake
i understand your at a crossroads with your decision. like if u wanted to battle or not... but the saying/idiom/cliche is "im at a crossroads" wtf does drag in a crossroads mean? its weird. not normal to word it this way. forced is the best way to explain this line. it isnt good
Failing to climb ranks? Shit that's a bummer, I sit at the summit
I'm a George St-Pierre. U a Paul Daley...by posting pics of your stomach
cant lie I almost didnt get this. But i did. i stopped watching mma around this time. its appaul wp right? yeah this is cool
Peeped Hush's brackets and immediately pouted. It's flop!
I'm at the top of the mountain, why am I battling the mountain of Top ..
horrible setup. do ppl say "its flop" in canada meaning not cool or something. or do u just force shit bcuz it rhymes. punch is aight. its really a jab
For any1 who did NOT see, his latest pic is sloppy/quite the image
I got Randy with his sister..
He got Randy from Trailer Park Boys suing for copyright infringement
this is better. I like this.
Is this a spy op. or is there another reason you deny lots?
Won't tell us where ya from? The only thing ppl keep from U is livestock
deny lots? what the fuck does that mean. nah man , this shit is not natural.





Chop this guy up, put his limbs in separate concoctions
If I want to find myself a wack rapper, I have to check all the boxes
I dig this.. nice setup tied in cleanly
You winning? That plot’s botched I’m top notch
Leave your parts EVERYWHERE, forensics with the chalk setting up hop scotch
this is fire
You’re well known here, but the reasons are less inspired
Them verses are critically ‘panned’, hit with gasoline and set on fire
cool jab
Your hygeine is a coin flip, except every cent had is sour,
You’re like clear skies to the nose, zero percent chance of showers
this is really fucking bad. cringe bad. its a dad joke. wtf . no no no no no. this is BAD
Voters see your verse and realize quick they’re tightly knit
You’ll be hearing more nah’s than a Queens project in 96
yikes this is also really bad. really dated. nas wp. really? really? this is not good bro. not at all



this is close

both had some shit. Top had the best and worst lines

when I say yall had some shit, i want to clarify that I meant dog shit

barc has the worst wording


top has some old ass cocnepts


no way u can do a nas/nahs line and win

u just cant


vote/ barcotic



alot of cringe in this battle wtf guys

UPN Zuch
07-21-2020, 10:49 AM
Top ill started dope but finished wack.


I got barcotic here based on consistency


Vote - barc

the Munster
07-21-2020, 10:51 AM
Uhhh. Top ill bit zuch in his battle against me wtf???


And I’m confused as fuck right now cuz he just voted above me?

Hush
07-21-2020, 11:19 AM
Barcotic wins


Top Ill Dragster Two banned from all leagues for biting and tomfoolery