Contender Match: Hush 5-1 vs Destroyer 4-2 - HUSH WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Pic League

Min: 10 Lines
Max: 16 Lines
Line limit can go up to 20 if both agree

Due Thursday, 8/13 at Midnight PST
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Hush

Destroyer

figure it out

[Hush]

I take no pleasure in this

[Destroyer]

Nah this is fucked
I’m going 16

[Hush]

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/728656473118212096/742797687241310218/image0.jpg

For the first 14 yrs an abusive dad had u in desperation
Background such a purple haze Hendrix wrote the soundtrack to ur childhood molestation
Ur new T-Mobile uniform got me thinking that u smoking dope
The pattern on the jacket is borderline scribble .. same as any verse u ever wrote
I wear ur girls pussy out ... u do it too.. but kinda different cuz ur a clown
Purple puffy and stretched out ...congrats on turning ur wife’s pussy to a button down
Missing ur kids bday writing the worst wordplays ... bro u fucking stupid
U BEEN tied up wit the green and that neck tie is a homage to it
Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing
The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing
But ya baby mom mouth work crazy ... kudos
That bitch make me curl up over the head same as ur Jew fro

[Destroyer]

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/737683808698236968/743644814012055684/image0.jpg

Vic just playing suburban. He still got thots that keep his head in the pink
but bro. When the doc said find cleaner pussy, he didn’t mean wash ur pet in the sink
I’m old. But in the time I’m from, that haircut would be viewed as lame
I sent u a pic of me in a helmet, but I really didn’t expect u to do the same
I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising?
Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerizing
Counter look bare as fuck... like do you ever buy food?
But check up top - u ain’t running out of salt & pepper anytime soon
It must be exhausting pretending to be gangsta. & it’s clear that this dude tries
Dunno what looks more fatigued, that cat, ur shirt, or ur tired ass w/them coon eyes
that’s just a creepy open-mouthed look. I need a sweeter smile, man
Plus ur ear looks like it should be watching over the cliffs of Easter Island

[evaD]

Hush Hendrix opener was nice. Scribble shirt was cool but setup hurt it. I think you rushed this verse a bit? Worse crop was cool.

Des was pretty solid throughout. I liked everything except the coon eyes bar. Good verse.

I think Des took this quite comfortably with just a better worded verse and more good angles.

[Wanderer]

For the first 14 yrs an abusive dad had u in desperation
Background such a purple haze Hendrix wrote the soundtrack to ur childhood molestation
Lol nice
Ur new T-Mobile uniform got me thinking that u smoking dope
The pattern on the jacket is borderline scribble .. same as any verse u ever wrote
Cool, good again
I wear ur girls pussy out ... u do it too.. but kinda different cuz ur a clown
Purple puffy and stretched out ...congrats on turning ur wife’s pussy to a button down
Ermm not feeling this
Missing ur kids bday writing the worst wordplays ... bro u fucking stupid
U BEEN tied up wit the green and that neck tie is a homage to it
It’s ok
Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing
The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing
Lol ok again
But ya baby mom mouth work crazy ... kudos
That bitch make me curl up over the head same as ur Jew fro
Kinda simple but it’s not a miss

Vs

Vic just playing suburban. He still got thots that keep his head in the pink
but bro. When the doc said find cleaner pussy, he didn’t mean wash ur pet in the sink
Lol solid opener
I’m old. But in the time I’m from, that haircut would be viewed as lame
I sent u a pic of me in a helmet, but I really didn’t expect u to do the same
It’s hilarious that his hair does look like a helmet but this loses something cos u not really wearing a helmet urself?
I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising?
Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerising
Ok
Counter look bare as fuck... like do you ever buy food?
But check up top - u ain’t running out of salt & pepper anytime soon
Dope lol
It must be exhausting pretending to be gangsta. & it’s clear that this dude tries
Dunno what looks more fatigued, that cat, ur shirt, or ur tired ass w/them coon eyes
Not feeling man
that’s just a creepy open-mouthed look. I need a sweeter smile, man
Plus ur ear looks like it should be watching over the cliffs of Easter Island
Not feeling much either

Oh man this one’s tough. Hush was more consistent but des had higher highs to me, just funnier. I’m gonna go on the verse I enjoyed more and I’m leaning Des

Vote - Des

[FGR]

Purple haze
Borderline scribble
Crop work (ok)
Closer was alright to

Vs

Cleaner pussy
Pours (ok)
Salt n pepper


I gotta give this to hush... I thought his consistent outshined Des harder hitting bars

Vote hush... But close af

[UPN Zuch]

Hush was super consistent here. Cocky and a lot of wit. First 6 were good and the growing bar.

Des had some hot stuff too. Salt and pepper and first 4 were dope.


I got hush BARELY

Good battle though guys I enjoyed it

[Quiz]

For the first 14 yrs an abusive dad had u in desperation
Background such a purple haze Hendrix wrote the soundtrack to ur childhood molestation
Ur new T-Mobile uniform got me thinking that u smoking dope
The pattern on the jacket is borderline scribble .. same as any verse u ever wrote
Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing
The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing
But ya baby mom mouth work crazy ... kudos
That bitch make me curl up over the head same as ur Jew fro

vs.

I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising?
Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerizing

Almost quoted Destroyer's opener, but much like Evad's this week..it was too simple/dated. An obvious and expected flip to be used with a cat in the pic

Then I almost quoted the helmet bar, before noticing Destroyer is wearing a hat...
Destro's verse seemed rushed

Hush got it

[UserName]

Hush -

I wear ur girls pussy out ... u do it too.. but kinda different cuz ur a clown
Purple puffy and stretched out ...congrats on turning ur wife’s pussy to a button down
Missing ur kids bday writing the worst wordplays ... bro u fucking stupid
U BEEN tied up wit the green and that neck tie is a homage to it
Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing
The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing

Cool section here, I really liked the wear your girls pussy out/button down idea - i dont think you spent enough time really fleshing it out, you made it into 2 lines when i think with tighter wording you could've done that whole idea in just the punch. Still, clever, and the uhoh/eddie line was comedy.

Des -

Vic just playing suburban. He still got thots that keep his head in the pink
but bro. When the doc said find cleaner pussy, he didn’t mean wash ur pet in the sink
I’m old. But in the time I’m from, that haircut would be viewed as lame
I sent u a pic of me in a helmet, but I really didn’t expect u to do the same
I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising?
Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerizing
that’s just a creepy open-mouthed look. I need a sweeter smile, man
Plus ur ear looks like it should be watching over the cliffs of Easter Island

Des, you kinda had the issue I saw with Wand in some of this verse. Some of the 'punches' come off very statement-ish and it stifles the impact of any creativity you were going for. The salt and pepper line, for instance. However, beyond that - I really liked the sink line, really liked the haircut line, pours could've been harder, loved the idea, didn't really vibe with the execution - same as Hush's wear the pussy out line above. Easter Island was light, but comedy.



Overall, I feel like Des got this one, off the strength of one more quotable. I really like the sink line, I guess I'd consider that LOTB for me. Hush felt a bit rushed/lazy on his wording this week. I still dug a lot of his verse, which speaks to his skill.

Dope battle, but Des edged it to me.

V - Des

[Sharp]

For the first 14 yrs an abusive dad had u in desperation
Background such a purple haze Hendrix wrote the soundtrack to ur childhood molestation
ok
Ur new T-Mobile uniform got me thinking that u smoking dope
The pattern on the jacket is borderline scribble .. same as any verse u ever wrote
cool
I wear ur girls pussy out ... u do it too.. but kinda different cuz ur a clown
Purple puffy and stretched out ...congrats on turning ur wife’s pussy to a button down
funny but light
Missing ur kids bday writing the worst wordplays ... bro u fucking stupid
U BEEN tied up wit the green and that neck tie is a homage to it
ok
Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing
The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing
not really feeling it
But ya baby mom mouth work crazy ... kudos
That bitch make me curl up over the head same as ur Jew fro
cool



Vic just playing suburban. He still got thots that keep his head in the pink
but bro. When the doc said find cleaner pussy, he didn’t mean wash ur pet in the sink
funny but light
I’m old. But in the time I’m from, that haircut would be viewed as lame
I sent u a pic of me in a helmet, but I really didn’t expect u to do the same
are you referencing a pic that isn't in this thread? Not a huge fan tbh
I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising?
Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerizing
funny but light
Counter look bare as fuck... like do you ever buy food?
But check up top - u ain’t running out of salt & pepper anytime soon
lol cool
It must be exhausting pretending to be gangsta. & it’s clear that this dude tries
Dunno what looks more fatigued, that cat, ur shirt, or ur tired ass w/them coon eyes
ok
that’s just a creepy open-mouthed look. I need a sweeter smile, man
Plus ur ear looks like it should be watching over the cliffs of Easter Island
not really feeling this one. Looked it up and everything. Got nothing.

I'd say the punches were about as strong from each so this is probably just going to be preference. I thought Hush was a tad more consistent.

V/Hush

[Mac]

For the first 14 yrs an abusive dad had u in desperation
Background such a purple haze Hendrix wrote the soundtrack to ur childhood molestation
cool

Ur new T-Mobile uniform got me thinking that u smoking dope
The pattern on the jacket is borderline scribble .. same as any verse u ever wrote
decent

I wear ur girls pussy out ... u do it too.. but kinda different cuz ur a clown
Purple puffy and stretched out ...congrats on turning ur wife’s pussy to a button down
not getting this

Missing ur kids bday writing the worst wordplays ... bro u fucking stupid
U BEEN tied up wit the green and that neck tie is a homage to it
okk

Photoshop the image cuz u ain’t wana expose wifey hoeing
The edit on this pic is worst crop work than the bullshit Uhoh and Eddie growing
yup

But ya baby mom mouth work crazy ... kudos
That bitch make me curl up over the head same as ur Jew fro
cool


vs.

Vic just playing suburban. He still got thots that keep his head in the pink
but bro. When the doc said find cleaner pussy, he didn’t mean wash ur pet in the sink
funny lol

I’m old. But in the time I’m from, that haircut would be viewed as lame
I sent u a pic of me in a helmet, but I really didn’t expect u to do the same
lol

I see the hint of a bicep & vitamins. U detoxing & exercising?
Sure, that faucet pours, but it’s the ones on ur nose i find mesmerizing
okk

Counter look bare as fuck... like do you ever buy food?
But check up top - u ain’t running out of salt & pepper anytime soon
not hard hitting

It must be exhausting pretending to be gangsta. & it’s clear that this dude tries
Dunno what looks more fatigued, that cat, ur shirt, or ur tired ass w/them coon eyes
okk

that’s just a creepy open-mouthed look. I need a sweeter smile, man
Plus ur ear looks like it should be watching over the cliffs of Easter Island
cool lol


I preferred destroyer verse here. both displayed very good but at the end destroyer was slightly more consistent

[Resin M-I-C]

purple haze was ok lil light
liked scribble
button down coulda been cleaner
tied up hittt
crop work fiire
jew fro was light

vs

pussy was straightforward
helmet ok
faucet was a miss, maybe i missed something
pepper funny but light
coon was ehhh
easter island was random af


Hush had the top 2 lines and was punchin more, not the best des i’ve seen here

v Hush