I wrote bars abt u

[Hush]

First off RIP Lars ... open mic classics wheneva he typed them
sad txtcees is dyin this year but at least it’s the right ones
viruses running wild as democrats raising the crime rate
Geno aging in reverse but I think it’s only his mind state
this ain’t personal bro’s , the truth is out there at last
Pegged a few of u for wierdos and Aero took it right up his ass
Finally time for your 15 mins of fame !!! We gettin all the clout
Yes!!! We all household names .. it’s all Zuch and Jamie talk abt
open your eyes and realize black lives matter u fucking bastards
Only interesting battle left is who more racist Knuck or Cashius
Its great to see legends return and get set for a run
Barcotic next time u throw a fit aim it at Hens cuz he dress like a bum
A lot of y’all would be fire if u could write wit more rhythm
Sharps been off the charts lately but sadly there for autism
Blue diss Des unborn baby shit is crazy .. niggas still quoting
Sex life like his gun bars ... shooting blanks cuz he impotent
Not a lot of dudes my boy Tim Grady can’t slaughter
I fathered a lot of styles and well.. u literally a grandfather
And fuck blues peloton machine .. that nigga a queer
Next cycle u should work on is not being a faggot year after year

[Aero]

Household names was clever and the fit made me chuckle

[Adverse]

Man this was dope lol

[El Muffin]

Cool little drop

Idg the aero line n I’m sure I don’t even wanna know xD

If I had to guess aero at one point self admitted to letting bae milk his prostrate or some shit

Idk but I gtg lmao

[Hush]

Lmaooo basically

[Answer]

fit was fire

[UserName]

Throw a fit is fire

[El Muffin]

Wolf of Wall Street deleted scene

- rails coke from asshole & then assumes suppository position & says “ my turn “ like dude from scary movie2

[Blue Bayou]

So we're all pretending this isn't 90% ass?

[Hush]

That 10percent tho

[Orc]

Sharp line hahahahaha

[Aero]

So we're all pretending this isn't 90% ass?

Lmao.

[john hensley]

Jeeze.

[El Muffin]

I’m mad no one chuckled at Aero’s version of wolf of Wall Street

Fuck y’all lmao

[Geno]

Fire, that hens fit shit was prolly my fav bar. Lmao. Dope

[Dope girl]

He made a rap about Netcees
Super job

[~RustyGunZ~]

He made a rap about Netcees
Super job

This reads as sarcastic

Got something to say bb grl?

[Dope girl]

I'm saying it's an amazing Netcees verse.

[Objective]

I liked it, repped

[Ouch]

no, but at least you tried

[Hush]

no, but at least you tried

Bitch , ARE YU DUMB

[Ouch]

No.. and what you wrote wasn't bad at all... Granted I don't know half of the people you referenced because I'm not a nerd.

All that aside wasn't bad and its cool that people keep using this as a 'textcee' or whatever to write.

Props for that.

[Vengeance]

First off RIP Lars ... open mic classics wheneva he typed them
sad txtcees is dyin this year but at least it’s the right ones

hah, cold.

viruses running wild as democrats raising the crime rate

not sure how to read this. either you're right-wing and think crime = things poor people do and believe democrats are involved in some crime conspiracy. or you think crime is something connected with democrats somehow, which is a right-wing talking point. the 'US' Democratic Party is literally neoliberal capitalist, they're propetarians.

what's you angle on this line, I'm curious?

TLDR; poor and working-class ''crime'' is a ruling class distraction.

Geno aging in reverse but I think it’s only his mind state
this ain’t personal bro’s , the truth is out there at last
Pegged a few of u for wierdos and Aero took it right up his ass

heh, an anti-gay joke.

Finally time for your 15 mins of fame !!! We gettin all the clout
Yes!!! We all household names .. it’s all Zuch and Jamie talk abt

from the mention in the comments I'm curious about this. what did I miss?

open your eyes and realize black lives matter u fucking bastards
Only interesting battle left is who more racist Knuck or Cashius

I don't know these two but I like the sentiment here and more power to those resisting white supremacy.

Its great to see legends return and get set for a run
Barcotic next time u throw a fit aim it at Hens cuz he dress like a bum

nice wordplay. not feeling the anti-bum/homeless part. homeless people don't really have any specific 'look', there's a lot of 'invisible homelessness' too.

A lot of y’all would be fire if u could write wit more rhythm
Sharps been off the charts lately but sadly there for autism

ehh, autism isn't a joke.

Blue diss Des unborn baby shit is crazy .. niggas still quoting
Sex life like his gun bars ... shooting blanks cuz he impotent
Not a lot of dudes my boy Tim Grady can’t slaughter
I fathered a lot of styles and well.. u literally a grandfather

ha, the 'fathered a lot of styles' angle had been heavily used way back so I guess this isn't so fresh

And fuck blues peloton machine .. that nigga a queer
Next cycle u should work on is not being a faggot year after year

the cycle wordplay would've been good if not combined with the anti-gay content

Overall this was disappointing. Reliance on social tropes against gay people, the autistic and homeless/poor is basically evidence of bad writing. People using stuff like this are utilising existing inequities to just bash downwards. I'm not supporting this stuff, not only from a political position but from a writers' position, it's just lazy to weaponise people already shit on by society to try to score points. I mean, you're writing pro-BLM and exposing racists in this verse - nice. Apply that same approach to the poor, sexuality and mental illness and switch the power dynamics.

Hope you take this criticism in good faith.

[Hush]

Are you gay or sumn ?

[El Muffin]

That’s kind of the impression I got too

Not gonna lie

It matters to me not though. Just an observation

One thing to keep in mind is this is a very casual verse . Emphasis on very

[Aero]

Vengeance did you really say you're not supporting a verse from a political position? Get out.

[El Muffin]

Yall leave him alone lol

[Vengeance]

How to expose your specific xenophobia, a guide:

Someone: *supports BLM, homeless people, gay people, poor and working-class people and autistic people*

You: "̶a̶r̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶B̶l̶a̶c̶k̶ ̶o̶r̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶?̶"̶
̶"̶a̶r̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶h̶o̶m̶e̶l̶e̶s̶s̶ ̶o̶r̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶?̶"̶
̶"̶a̶r̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶poor ̶o̶r̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶?̶"̶
̶"̶a̶r̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶w̶o̶r̶k̶i̶n̶g̶-̶c̶l̶a̶s̶s̶ ̶o̶r̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶?̶"̶
̶"̶a̶r̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶a̶u̶t̶i̶s̶t̶i̶c̶ ̶o̶r̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶?̶"̶

"are you gay or something?"

*cough*

Let me be clear, to declare your sexuality in order to placate straight people who give you good reason to suggest that they're anti-gay is anti-gay. I'm not here to make straight people feel comfortable by telling them my sexuality. My sexuality has nothing to do with opposition to anti-gayness.

Do you find the only good reason to support BLM and the only good reason to oppose white supremacy is being Black yourself? Because that's a pretty poor analysis. Part of the strength of Black radicalism from BLM and beyond is that it is not a single-issue struggle. Single-issue struggles are doomed to failure because Black gay people exist. Because of white supremacy Black people are more likely to be poor, working-class and homeless, and a disproportionate amount of those people are Black autistic people.

Hope this clears up why this was a weird verse for me, at once appealing to the resistance for Black lives while playing into anti-gay, anti-autistic, anti-poor and, working-class tropes. It's politically contradictory because Black people are all of these things too and often *because* of systemic racism.

[Aero]

Someone ban this man.

[Cred]

How to expose your specific xenophobia, a guide:

Someone: *supports BLM, homeless people, gay people, poor and working-class people and autistic people*

You: "̶a̶r̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶B̶l̶a̶c̶k̶ ̶o̶r̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶?̶"̶
̶"̶a̶r̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶h̶o̶m̶e̶l̶e̶s̶s̶ ̶o̶r̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶?̶"̶
̶"̶a̶r̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶poor ̶o̶r̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶?̶"̶
̶"̶a̶r̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶w̶o̶r̶k̶i̶n̶g̶-̶c̶l̶a̶s̶s̶ ̶o̶r̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶?̶"̶
̶"̶a̶r̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶a̶u̶t̶i̶s̶t̶i̶c̶ ̶o̶r̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶?̶"̶

"are you gay or something?"

*cough*

Let me be clear, to declare your sexuality in order to placate straight people who give you good reason to suggest that they're anti-gay is anti-gay. I'm not here to make straight people feel comfortable by telling them my sexuality. My sexuality has nothing to do with opposition to anti-gayness.

Do you find the only good reason to support BLM and the only good reason to oppose white supremacy is being Black yourself? Because that's a pretty poor analysis. Part of the strength of Black radicalism from BLM and beyond is that it is not a single-issue struggle. Single-issue struggles are doomed to failure because Black gay people exist. Because of white supremacy Black people are more likely to be poor, working-class and homeless, and a disproportionate amount of those people are Black autistic people.

Hope this clears up why this was a weird verse for me, at once appealing to the resistance for Black lives while playing into anti-gay, anti-autistic, anti-poor and, working-class tropes. It's politically contradictory because Black people are all of these things too and often *because* of systemic racism.

Mannnnnn shut yo faggot ass up

[Vengeance]

Vengeance did you really say you're not supporting a verse from a political position? Get out.

1. The verse itself explicitly references BLM. Even the most politically ignorant would recognise that as explicitly political.

2. Everything is political. Text verses don't magically transcend politics somehow. The very idea of 'exceptions' is standard rhetoric deployed to shut-down criticism (often from the same people who talk about "fReEdOm Of SpEeCh!!11")

Check this which covers the idea of comedy, like art, being exceptional and immune to criticism: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ILugwjdQQsI

3. All criticisms of a verse are political, implicitly or otherwise.

4. If a verse is explicitly anti-gay, anti-autistic etc. then being surprised that a response remarks on those exact things is pretty much saying "only responses which approve of everything that has been said are acceptable". That doesn't sound like a space where opinions are shared, that sounds like a dull echo-chamber.

5. Yes. Yes, that's what I'm saying.

:)

[Vengeance]

Someone ban this man.

Hahaha, the fragility.

[Vengeance]

Mannnnnn shut yo faggot ass up

Awww, you're afraid of the very mention of gay people unless someone is bashing them. How pathetic.

[Cred]

Awww, you're afraid of the very mention of gay people unless someone is bashing them. How pathetic.

This isn't eharmony. com you fag ass dude, we're on a fuckin rap battles site.

[Vengeance]

This isn't eharmony. com you fag ass dude, we're on a fuckin rap battles site.

So why does he mention sexuality in his rap on this rap battle site? Seems like a bit of a contradiction you got there, but don't let that get in the way of your bias ;)

[Dope girl]

I remember Ven from Avemcs

[Hush]

So why does he mention sexuality in his rap on this rap battle site? Seems like a bit of a contradiction you got there, but don't let that get in the way of your bias ;)

Nigga is you DUMB

This is battle rap

Suck my dick FAGGOT

[Orc]

We’re actually very open minded in terms of sexual preferences here. Check out an Aero verse. He, very playfully, refers to himself quite often as the Gayest Of All Time (or GOAT).

[Dank]

I remember Ven from Avemcs

oh yeah I remember now

he was garb there too

[Scout]

Omg this nigga gay

[El Muffin]

We’re actually very open minded in terms of sexual preferences here. Check out an Aero verse. He, very playfully, refers to himself quite often as the Gayest Of All Time (or GOAT).

Mannn LMAO

I needed this laugh

[Vengeance]

Nigga is you DUMB

This is battle rap

Suck my dick FAGGOT

I see you've learned nothing :)

Cool hollow Black radicalism you got there.

[Hush]

Only you can teach me is how to sashay and be fierce

So I’ll pass

[Vengeance]

I remember Ven from Avemcs

Hey. Nah, I just picked a cliche name which was bound to have already been used a bunch of times.

[Vengeance]

Only you can teach me is how to sashay and be fierce

So I’ll pass

I can hear you in the streets, "BEGPHALM!" "BEGPHALM!"

Black Except Gay, Poor, Homeless, and Autistic Lives Matter.

Doesn't have the same ring to it. You've got your work cut out. You need to work on your inherent political contradictions, your writing, and your slogans.

[Aero]

I can hear you in the streets, "BEGPHALM!" "BEGPHALM!"

Black Except Gay, Poor, Homeless, and Autistic Lives Matter.

Doesn't have the same ring to it. You've got your work cut out. You need to work on your inherent political contradictions, your writing, and your slogans.

Is this a troll or do I have to send someone for you?

[Vengeance]

Is this a troll or do I have to send someone for you?

Do you write? Because sarcasm should be basic comprehension.

Hush: *promotes BLM*

Also, Hush: *disrespects gay, autistic, and homeless people*

Gay, autistic and homeless Black people: *exist*

Anyone who cannot fathom these basic contradictions needs to do some work on their logic and unchecked biases.