Video (3rd verse)

[Unfukwitable]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DQgH8apLag0

[Smod of War]

Dope

[Scout]

Yo this is actually good. Props
All 3 voices blended well, ill beat

Bumping again just now

[Burd]

This was fire bro

[Scout]

Playlisted

[Smod of War]

Playlisted

lol ok calm down

[UPN Zuch]

lol ok calm down

Lmao

[Scout]

Well I wasn't sure on day one

Second day though, third listen. Playlisted
Shit is catchy

[Unfukwitable]

Appreciate it yall bout to drop another video tn

[Amen]

Fire.

[dull boy]

This is fucking awful. It isn’t fire. Do me a favor and post the lyrics for this shit so I can have a good laugh.

I commend your attempts at making music, but I’m afraid whatever is influencing your style is of the poorest of qualities and your taste has been reenforced by others with similarly poor taste. Your words are hallow and nearly void of ANY substance. Tf are you saying?

Matter fact dog, here’s a pencil. Go home, write some shit, make it suspenseful and don’t come back until something dope hits you.

[dull boy]

Perhaps I was too harsh. Whoever produced this video did a bang up job. You’re the only one of the trio of rappers featured here who appears to have any hope of being good at it. Lyrics aren’t the end all be all of music, they’re just what I tend to place emphasis on.

[Unfukwitable]

Perhaps I was too harsh. Whoever produced this video did a bang up job. You’re the only one of the trio of rappers featured here who appears to have any hope of being good at it. Lyrics aren’t the end all be all of music, they’re just what I tend to place emphasis on.

I wont expect you to understand the essence of whats going on.... if you have music videos of your own you should post it and show me how its done

[Sharp]

Well let's not get ahead of ourselves now

nothing wrong with making a music video and trying to get it views, but let's not act like there's some sort of esoteric deeper meaning that the average listener wouldn't understand here

[dull boy]

I wont expect you to understand the essence of whats going on.... if you have music videos of your own you should post it and show me how its done

The essence lol Who authorized this type of wilin’?

[Ouch]

So you were the nigga singing and the dude on the last ‘verse’?

It’s prett dope, cool video edit positive thing is that is sounds like a lot of that type of music that gets popular... negative is it sounds like a lot of that music that gets popular and there are thousands of people who do that and sound like that.

Feel me? But regardless pretty dope.

[Ouch]

I watched it again and thats really dope, the guy shooting it did a good job with the lights and whatever... and whoever edited and put it all together to turn a bunch of people bouncing around under black lights and acting tough to all put that together.


but for real the problem is you aren't doing anything special... I like it and good for you but you arent

[Unfukwitable]

Well let's not get ahead of ourselves now

nothing wrong with making a music video and trying to get it views, but let's not act like there's some sort of esoteric deeper meaning that the average listener wouldn't understand here

theres depth in everything in life.

[Unfukwitable]

The essence lol Who authorized this type of wilin’?

so I see you have nothing to display in your defense?

[Sharp]

theres depth in everything in life.

https://tenor.com/view/jerk-off-the-hangover-ken-jeong-jerk-off-motion-screw-you-gif-5953847


and your video has depth because it exists? which makes it special how?

look

bud

I've worked with plenty of vocalists, rappers included, and there's nothing wrong with what you're doing - I support it even - but lets not act like there's anything crazy that dull was missing there

[SHECK WES]

https://tenor.com/view/jerk-off-the-hangover-ken-jeong-jerk-off-motion-screw-you-gif-5953847


and your video has depth because it exists? which makes it special how?

look

bud

I've worked with plenty of vocalists, rappers included, and there's nothing wrong with what you're doing - I support it even - but lets not act like there's anything crazy that dull was missing there

I thought you supported black artists? Really didn’t expect this from you


Remove that Jordan logo from your avy at once

[Adverse]

I can’t really critique since I’m asking for it atm but I thought this was cool for what it was. Didn’t break the mold in anyways and much like dull I place emphasis on lyrics musically so this wasn’t my cup of tea personally but I think it fits the landscape of current hip hop well and I do support that.

[dull boy]

so I see you have nothing to display in your defense?

Saying nothing and having nothing are distinctly different things that someone who comprehends the essence of things should understand. I believe I made my opinion obvious and tasked you with providing me the lyrics for this for my amusement. So I see you are ashamed of them since we’re jumping to conclusions for the sake of argument.

Positive feedback was given and I gave leeway on the content of this ‘music’ on the basis that some misguided adolescent may find commonality in it’s ‘vibe’. Take that and get the fuck on.

[Geno]

Theres no way in hell the vocals were placed over the instro with the correct timing? Gotta be kidding. This aint dope. First guy wasnt even rapping wtf was that? Retard tbh.

Second and third guys were closer to actually being on beat.. but still horribly off.

Nothing else worth saying really


If you cant ride a beat then gtfoh. That should be the first lesson. Cant even call it music if ur offebeat. Idk wtf is going on these days but thats why i quit music lmfao.

[Ajax]

Whoever shot and edited the video was dope. It was well done.

The music isn’t my style. But, it wasn’t bad for what you were going for. The second MC was the best of the three, by a fair amount.

Keep doing your thing. Cheers.

[Cred]

dull boy a literal suicidal loser definitely don’t even reply to that idiot, he can’t like shit he don’t even like himself lmaoo

Unfukwitable this shit was tough my nigga.

[Cred]

U gotta remember who frequents this site my guy lmao jus get the views and roll out we gettin to this bagggg don’t reply to these bum ass niggas Unfukwitable

[dull boy]

Cred understands the essence, for sure.

[Hush]

Good luck bro

[Pakistani Hand Cannon]

first brodie reminded me of g herbo or somebody, a lil off beat - but kinda makes it work, guttery delivery, iunno. i dont digg it too heavy - though i thought it was garbage on first listen, less so on the second, just generic af.

second verse equally as generic - mans still doing xzibit pimp your ride references? still? - regardless, the verse sounded nice lol good energy, picked up from the first verse

cant be fucked to comment on the third - my bad if that one's you

i will say the 3 styles do work well with each other - iunno why even - but they do.