NBL SPOTLIGHT BATTLE: Fracture VS Hush FRACTURE WINS

[UPN Zuch]

16 lines


Verses due Saturday midnight. No extensions.


Have fun.


Hush

Fracture

[Hush]

Wya pussy girl

[Hush]

Amber alert on this little bitch . Gf calling his folks
The next fb missing post abt a txt rapper won’t be a hoax
Headshot . See how shells from a strap taste
44 bringing this tropic thunder and the gun powder once again givin u black face
Ur battle return fell flat ... no ones interested ..wifey got u feeling neglected
Txt like ur marriage invested a bunch of years to not be respected
The fact u begged for change is a shame .. but wit bars he’s no amatuer
I don’t doubt u can cook up some shit.. blue proved u a pan handler
Accept ur fate like man .. no crying begging or chit chat
No need to die being a pussy .. I hear your dad already did that
Ur a faggot in ur soul ..
if the ku cucks klan had a grand wizard ud be magic for the role
Fuck ur wife fuck ur mother fuck ur daughter
my whole team in ya house before the votes counted we trump supporters
We quarantined. Sitting . Chillin. Stackin money enjoying our hobbies
U working from home cuz wifey kicked u out.. now u sleep in the lobby

[Fracture]

His chick is maaaad thick, her fav fragrance is ranch dip
I would rather be underrated.. Underfire... Drowning under water.. Anything but under that fat bitch
And shes Hispanic, so everytime she shaves the schick breaks
Thats why her lower back looks like she got a tramp stamp of finnys chicks leg
Such an odd couple, but ur differences got u locked
She looks like a heffer and you sound like a steak sizzling when you talk
Heard this gay fez sells drugs to pay rent
Not sure what product hes pushing but 1 look at his girl and I know it aint meth
Better not go to jail hush, someone smarten him up
Cause anytime he does a* lengthy sentence he sounds retarded as fuck
Any personal you try is played, 'use to be black' disses hit nada
Even hotel shots will end with you dead, like this shits in rwanda
Just kill yourself faggot, no1 fucks with ya now
If i see you on the ledge ill add a foot faster than blue do to a bumble account
Tropics gon run up in ya crib and let the shells spit
Have 1st responders thinkin ur whole families celebrating Día de Muertos...until the smell hits

[Geno]

Yo. Fucking died @ku cucks klan though lmmfaooooo. Wtf

[evaD]

Tropic thunder (could’ve worded better)
Trump supporters

Vs

Opener was dope, even ranch dip set up was lol. Punch ran on too long which killed it a lil
Steak sizzling
Ain’t meth

I’ve got Frac here. More polished wording. Hush seemed rushed and too statement ish at times

[~RustyGunZ~]

Amber alert on this little bitch . Gf calling his folks
The next fb missing post abt a txt rapper won’t be a hoax

Nice current nc event bar

Headshot . See how shells from a strap taste
44 bringing this tropic thunder and the gun powder once again givin u black face

Fire even if wording seemed rushed

Ur battle return fell flat ... no ones interested ..wifey got u feeling neglected
Txt like ur marriage invested a bunch of years to not be respected

She actually sold out of the investment I think so it doesn’t work as well but stings that he couldn’t hold down a woman long enough to make a bar like this work

The fact u begged for change is a shame .. but wit bars he’s no amatuer
I don’t doubt u can cook up some shit.. blue proved u a pan handler

Lmfao fire

Accept ur fate like man .. no crying begging or chit chat
No need to die being a pussy .. I hear your dad already did that

Sheesh

Ur a faggot in ur soul ..
if the ku cucks klan had a grand wizard ud be magic for the role

This is ok

Fuck ur wife fuck ur mother fuck ur daughter
my whole team in ya house before the votes counted we trump supporters

Nice

We quarantined. Sitting . Chillin. Stackin money enjoying our hobbies
U working from home cuz wifey kicked u out.. now u sleep in the lobby

Again his wife left him after a month but he definitely sleeps in the lobby under his desk

Vs

His chick is maaaad thick, her fav fragrance is ranch dip
I would rather be underrated.. Underfire... Drowning under water.. Anything but under that fat bitch

Nah she’s not fat just has a stronger chin then you

And shes Hispanic, so everytime she shaves the schick breaks
Thats why her lower back looks like she got a tramp stamp of finnys chicks leg

So bad, is this an attempt at a joke? Are you trying to impress us with a finnys girl leg bar? You don’t even discord bro stfu

Such an odd couple, but ur differences got u locked
She looks like a heffer and you sound like a steak sizzling when you talk

This kinda fire lmao

Heard this gay fez sells drugs to pay rent
Not sure what product hes pushing but 1 look at his girl and I know it aint meth

Awful

Better not go to jail hush, someone smarten him up
Cause anytime he does a* lengthy sentence he sounds retarded as fuck

Nah this wasn’t it chief

Any personal you try is played, 'use to be black' disses hit nada
Even hotel shots will end with you dead, like this shits in rwanda

Doodoo

Just kill yourself faggot, no1 fucks with ya now
If i see you on the ledge ill add a foot faster than blue do to a bumble account

What

Tropics gon run up in ya crib and let the shells spit
Have 1st responders thinkin ur whole families celebrating Día de Muertos...until the smell hit

Terrible

Frac had one good bar so Zuch must’ve sent him a bar in lieu of a venmo transfer

Hush got this easily. Frac being called a legend after so many bad verses this decade is just criminal.

[El Muffin]

Amber alert on this little bitch . Gf calling his folks
The next fb missing post abt a txt rapper won’t be a hoax
( ok open )
Headshot . See how shells from a strap taste
44 bringing this tropic thunder and the gun powder once again givin u black face
( wording seems a bit uninspired but the concept is gold . I Rock with it kinda )
Ur battle return fell flat ... no ones interested ..wifey got u feeling neglected
Txt like ur marriage invested a bunch of years to not be respected
( don demarco )
The fact u begged for change is a shame .. but wit bars he’s no amatuer
I don’t doubt u can cook up some shit.. blue proved u a pan handler
( don demarcoooo )
Accept ur fate like man .. no crying begging or chit chat
No need to die being a pussy .. I hear your dad already did that
( I’m missing some vital information . Didn’t know all that . How’d his dad die?)
Ur a faggot in ur soul ..
if the ku cucks klan had a grand wizard ud be magic for the role
( okay)
Fuck ur wife fuck ur mother fuck ur daughter
my whole team in ya house before the votes counted we trump supporters
( okay )
We quarantined. Sitting . Chillin. Stackin money enjoying our hobbies
U working from home cuz wifey kicked u out.. now u sleep in the lobby
( lazy close )

His chick is maaaad thick, her fav fragrance is ranch dip
I would rather be underrated.. Underfire... Drowning under water.. Anything but under that fat bitch
( I’ve seen her & she’s not big at all . Bit of a reach . But for the sake of the concept this is still a bit underwhelming imo . It’s ok )
And shes Hispanic, so everytime she shaves the schick breaks
Thats why her lower back looks like she got a tramp stamp of finnys chicks leg
( wut )
Such an odd couple, but ur differences got u locked
She looks like a heffer and you sound like a steak sizzling when you talk
( lmao nice lisp play )
Heard this gay fez sells drugs to pay rent
Not sure what product hes pushing but 1 look at his girl and I know it aint meth
( eh ok )
Better not go to jail hush, someone smarten him up
Cause anytime he does a* lengthy sentence he sounds retarded as fuck
( could of done more with that angle but considering your style I guess you had to tie it up real prompt like . Left much to be desired )
Any personal you try is played, 'use to be black' disses hit nada
Even hotel shots will end with you dead, like this shits in rwanda
( mmm . Eh )
Just kill yourself faggot, no1 fucks with ya now
If i see you on the ledge ill add a foot faster than blue do to a bumble account
( nice )
Tropics gon run up in ya crib and let the shells spit
Have 1st responders thinkin ur whole families celebrating Día de Muertos...until the smell hits
( nah )


Somewhattttt close . I think hush had less misses though . More bars that were ok rather than completely missing . Frac had two couplets that I thought were nice though .

V/ hush via consistency

Nothing wrong with ku cucks clan btw. That was intentional I promise you

[Blue Bayou]

Amber alert on this little bitch . Gf calling his folks
The next fb missing post abt a txt rapper won’t be a hoax
Cool current event jab. Solid enough
Headshot . See how shells from a strap taste
44 bringing this tropic thunder and the gun powder once again givin u black face
Tropic thunder was done earlier this year , but blackface personal / gun powder flip was pretty dope to me
Ur battle return fell flat ... no ones interested ..wifey got u feeling neglected
Txt like ur marriage invested a bunch of years to not be respected
Nah not enough to this for me
The fact u begged for change is a shame .. but wit bars he’s no amatuer
I don’t doubt u can cook up some shit.. blue proved u a pan handler
Prettt dope , this hits
Accept ur fate like man .. no crying begging or chit chat
No need to die being a pussy .. I hear your dad already did that
Nah there's not enough here... basic followup to my bar last week
Ur a faggot in ur soul ..
if the ku cucks klan had a grand wizard ud be magic for the role
Not a fan
Fuck ur wife fuck ur mother fuck ur daughter
my whole team in ya house before the votes counted we trump supporters
Decent gun bar and current event punch
We quarantined. Sitting . Chillin. Stackin money enjoying our hobbies
U working from home cuz wifey kicked u out.. now u sleep in the lobby
Another soft personal that needed more

His chick is maaaad thick, her fav fragrance is ranch dip
I would rather be underrated.. Underfire... Drowning under water.. Anything but under that fat bitch
Lol I like the idea behind this but I feel like you overworded it
And shes Hispanic, so everytime she shaves the schick breaks
Thats why her lower back looks like she got a tramp stamp of finnys chicks leg
Funny visual but nah
Such an odd couple, but ur differences got u locked
She looks like a heffer and you sound like a steak sizzling when you talk
Lmaooo this bangs
Heard this gay fez sells drugs to pay rent
Not sure what product hes pushing but 1 look at his girl and I know it aint meth
Funny your chick is fat punch
Better not go to jail hush, someone smarten him up
Cause anytime he does a* lengthy sentence he sounds retarded as fuck
Lol funny sentence flip...this is solid and set up well
Any personal you try is played, 'use to be black' disses hit nada
Even hotel shots will end with you dead, like this shits in rwanda
I can appreciate yiu trying to go on the offensive with the hotel angle... i just don't love the concept here tbh
Just kill yourself faggot, no1 fucks with ya now
If i see you on the ledge ill add a foot faster than blue do to a bumble account
I don't really know where the me being short narrative started... anyways whatever the concept is fire, but I cant help but feel like there's a missed opportunity for a great concept & personal here....Hush legit like 5'6" lol if you said your bumble account this would've really banged
Tropics gon run up in ya crib and let the shells spit
Have 1st responders thinkin ur whole families celebrating Día de Muertos...until the smell hits
This was okay


Close battle here despite all the BS....seen both come better tbh

Hush i thought pan handler and tropic thunder were dope, and in your house before the votes gun bar generic was coolish
But a lot of the personals fell flat to me and were the perfect examples of statementish personals that needed more...this felt like a pure key

Frac the lisp punches were jokes to me... i also thought the ain't meth gf punch had great swag...add a foot / kick him off the ledge angle could've easily been bar of the battle had you made it into a personal ... I usually love your murder wit bars but the closer I wasn't a big fan of the closer or hotel Rwanda concepts this week

Tough call but i got frac 4 quotes to 3....I feel like hush could've done so much more with some of the angles he took then he did and it cost him imo...props to both

[UPN Zuch]

2-2. Show these gentlemen some more love. Thanks guys.

[big baby]

frac had more quoties and lines dAt hit HARDER dan hushio.. -vote FRAC

[Barcotic]

Nobody would DARE delete the bullshit n freeposts in a barc battle btw ...
For those dbl standard pillow pushing circle jerkers out there

Anyway this was terrible. I endorced it in discussion, but it disappointed big time
Don't get mad at that. Get motivated

Ku cucks klan is worse than anything ive ever wrote
And i did tropic thunder better not long ago ..
This is NOT a Simple Jack && the blasts are awful-sounding
I'll bring this Tropic Thunder that could blow the black off robert downey

Pan handler was good tho
And the trump line was OK

Frac had his overworded opener, not completely missing
Sizzling steak easy lotb off humor alone
Add a foot had potential, everything else was ehhh

Frac wins

[JaysonFresh]

vote: Fracture.

better wording (didnt think it was possible to outword Hush who is a whiz at it ) , lines that hit, and humor.

Hush was ok. not his usual stuff. Felt like the lines were more statementish.

Such an odd couple, but ur differences got u locked
She looks like a heffer and you sound like a steak sizzling when you talk
Heard this gay fez sells drugs to pay rent
Not sure what product hes pushing but 1 look at his girl and I know it aint meth
Better not go to jail hush, someone smarten him up
Cause anytime he does a* lengthy sentence he sounds retarded as fuck

vs

Amber alert on this little bitch . Gf calling his folks
The next fb missing post abt a txt rapper won’t be a hoax

[UPN Zuch]

Fracture wins 5-2.