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Hush
01-12-2021, 10:42 AM
8 lines due tonight 1/12/21

Sharp
01-12-2021, 10:22 PM
Read your last verse..

quit pretending. you're no longer a contender
last time a Fat Man drop was that bad Japan surrendered {......you kidding me?? FIYAH!!}
you'll get these hands if you call me skinny bruh
Fuck a body, I'll drop your whole Soul like Disney Plus {....creativity much?!?!}
you winning? Sure, then you'll lose the weight... I think not
bags workout, text, whatever... Talk all you want, you ain't doing squat (DAMN!)
writing after whiskey means you're dropping trash geek
when you bring in the riots a mess like the capital last week {LMAOO Its Ovaa}

UserName
01-12-2021, 10:29 PM
Shout outs to uh-oh

CALL THE MISSES, I’M SCRUBBING ALL YOU BITCHES
PUFF YA CHEST AND THIS METAL BRUSH YA PLATE LIKE IM WASHING DISHES
IM FAT, YOU’RE SKINNY, AND I GET THE BETTER RESPECT
I GET MY CLOTHES CUSTOM-FITTED, YOU GET YOURS FROM A MALIBU KEN ACCESSORY SET
YOU’RE FUCKING OVER GUY, YOU DON’T GET A SOBER TRY
I SHUT YOU OUT ALREADY, AND THIS WIN’S COMING OFF A SWEEP JUST LIKE COBRA KAI
YOU TEACH MUSIC, FLUTES CLARINETS TUBAS, ALL OF THE LUNG SHIT
BUT THE SHIT YOU DROP WHEN BLOWING DOWN IS WORSE THAN ANYTHING KUNG DID

Swerve
01-12-2021, 11:12 PM
Liked Sharp's opener, the word "whole" ruined the next line for me and it was a nice concept that I think you could have done more with. Bags workout was solid. Dang, I did a capitol building line too...not feeling this one though.

User, that opener was so slickkkkk...it feels like it almost has to have been done, but it was flipped way too nice. LOTB so far. 2nd line was nice too. 3rd line, solid again. Closer meh.

I got User here.

Eviction
01-12-2021, 11:18 PM
I didn't feel nothing from sharp, did this man use adlibs in his verse? blue bayou would be proud, user had cobra kai and washing dishes, username got this.

Mac
01-12-2021, 11:44 PM
lolddd at this clash of styles.. opener is ok but not surprising.. soul disney plus could have been better lol maybe.. third bar is nah.. not getting the last bar sorry I don't understand the situation there.

Users opener was decent.. next two OK and closer NO

V. user-oh

evaD
01-13-2021, 03:39 AM
Fun read I guess you were both trashed but I think user took it. Cobra Kai and Malibu Ken were cool

Amen
01-13-2021, 10:03 AM
Lmao Sharp on his LetsBeef verse.

I think user gor this one with better punches.

User.

Blue Bayou
01-13-2021, 11:43 AM
Lmao at the Sharp adlibs...love it

Sharp was consistently pretty cool but nothing that popped per se

Malibu Ken I thought was hilarious....opening gun bar pretty cool, kobra Kai prob lots

Got User in this exchange

fraze
01-13-2021, 02:08 PM
quit pretending. you're no longer a contender
last time a Fat Man drop was that bad Japan surrendered {......you kidding me?? FIYAH!!}
haha. this is cool.
you'll get these hands if you call me skinny bruh
Fuck a body, I'll drop your whole Soul like Disney Plus {....creativity much?!?!}
dead at this ad libs. punch was ok
you winning? Sure, then you'll lose the weight... I think not
bags workout, text, whatever... Talk all you want, you ain't doing squat (DAMN!)
discord reference punch. not a huge fan but this is ok. it works
writing after whiskey means you're dropping trash geek
when you bring in the riots a mess like the capital last week {LMAOO Its Ovaa}
wording on this doesn't work for me


Quotes: opener
Close: soul, ain't doing squat

Cool verse. I dig the style.



CALL THE MISSES, I’M SCRUBBING ALL YOU BITCHES
PUFF YA CHEST AND THIS METAL BRUSH YA PLATE LIKE IM WASHING DISHES
nice brillo pad gun bar
IM FAT, YOU’RE SKINNY, AND I GET THE BETTER RESPECT
I GET MY CLOTHES CUSTOM-FITTED, YOU GET YOURS FROM A MALIBU KEN ACCESSORY SET
kinda funny but still light
YOU’RE FUCKING OVER GUY, YOU DON’T GET A SOBER TRY
I SHUT YOU OUT ALREADY, AND THIS WIN’S COMING OFF A SWEEP JUST LIKE COBRA KAI
nice
YOU TEACH MUSIC, FLUTES CLARINETS TUBAS, ALL OF THE LUNG SHIT
BUT THE SHIT YOU DROP WHEN BLOWING DOWN IS WORSE THAN ANYTHING KUNG DID
don't get the reference, sorry. like the setup tho


Quotes: opener, cobra kai
Close: Malibu ken

Cobra kai line was smooth. Nice verse.

Vote: UserName I have user taking this by a hair. Good battle on both sides

Kill Spree
01-13-2021, 03:13 PM
Opener and doing squat

Vs

Washing dishes, Malibu Ken, and cobra Kai

Got user by a quote