Rnd 1 - Knuck vs Doc Savage - OPEN FOR VOTES

[Hush]

8 lines due tonight 1/12/21

[~RustyGunZ~]

Fucking who?

[Fathom]

Here, early

[~RustyGunZ~]

Doc Savage aka INF aka Kyo aka Tragic aka................

lol how I beat you as all those names tho?!

How many faggot accounts I gotta merk? Twitter fingers gonna bruise ya neck
I should be exiled to Parler with all the dead names of I've abused to death
Schein is guttah & when the squad roll his way metal gon fold this fake
This freaky friday.. We gonna see a redhead put dots all over an old bitch face
Ya complex wordplays is trash, stop tryin to be Bayou to win & learn dude
This loser is Georgia, soon as he thinks about votes his whole state turns Blue
Cus u obsessed w/ impressing men, bring u to the rape sphere to meet ur fate
Bagga done told me, only time you drop bars is when u try to deadlift half ur weight

[Fathom]

Knuck

I'm winnin this shit, who thought this fat fuck could compete!?
ALWAYS the loser. dude only reverse roles suckin his gut in @ the beach
Wife fat af too.. if she fell into seths arms it'd snap his shit
Way he stay attached to pulling jumbos his life's been a strongman event
And she cheats fast, male bodies appear w/ their dicks
Box was made for more swords to be in at once than magicians tricks
I'll leave the scene clean & real quiet when I shoot gunz
Silencers got the remedy, cuz a potatoes helping me to remove rust

[UserName]

kinda close

Seth -

How many faggot accounts I gotta merk? Twitter fingers gonna bruise ya neck
I should be exiled to Parler with all the dead names of I've abused to death


INF -

I'm winnin this shit, who thought this fat fuck could compete!?
ALWAYS the loser. dude only reverse roles suckin his gut in @ the beach
And she cheats fast, male bodies appear w/ their dicks
Box was made for more swords to be in at once than magicians tricks

Opener was solid for Inf, as fat bars go that was a good one. enjoyed the magician line, nothing else really. Seth only really had the Parler line to me, freaky friday concept I've seen before, Georgia was a whiff for me, Bagga line was funny but light.

Going with INF here personally

[Fracture]

Knuckles- you don't ever get to talk about anybody elses verses again..... Ever again. Even for a key this was so fucking bad. You must be Georgia??? Really????? You rhymed that and kept it and used it and hit send? Lmaooo The only thing that looked remotely close to decent was parler and you managed to fuck up the wording on that. Yuck.


Doc- not the strongest verse but I fuck with that intro. Literally all you needed to win here. Like, i was going to probably vote against knuckles no matter what but then he truly shit the bed and your first punch banged. Magician tricks and closer had potential

Vote- doc

[~RustyGunZ~]

UPN stick together like glue

[~RustyGunZ~]

Barcotic can I get your vote in here since it’s a bias only zone?

[Barcotic]

No prob.
I feel like I should dish a hate vote back to you..but unlike your fat ugly self, I dont hold grudges an can keep it 100. My feels arent an issue, mr.butthurt .. dont make me give you another L
Bc I gladly will. It's always fun

But please
Since no part of your dumb ass can keep it real back, stay tf out of my battles you fucking loser

Now for my HONEST vote...

Heff
Terrible opener. Wordy, weak concept
Dots all over & drop bars both played af ideas/old simple garbage. I should expect nothing more tho
Blue line had potential, but wording made it come off weird and unimpactful

Doc
Decent opener, which is all you needed really
Strongman almost, had potential
Swords was a fuck no
Closer whiffed

Doc wins

[~RustyGunZ~]

Love the honesty

@pakastani pocket pussy can you finish this battle up?

[Mac]

I got seth here.. parler was crazy. i didnt feel much of INF verse contrary to other people here.. different style i guess

[fraze]

How many faggot accounts I gotta merk? Twitter fingers gonna bruise ya neck
I should be exiled to Parler with all the dead names of I've abused to death
like this concept but of/I've wording isn't helping you
Schein is guttah & when the squad roll his way metal gon fold this fake
This freaky friday.. We gonna see a redhead put dots all over an old bitch face
who's the redhead? concept is cool but didn't set this up well
Ya complex wordplays is trash, stop tryin to be Bayou to win & learn dude
This loser is Georgia, soon as he thinks about votes his whole state turns Blue
cool current events punch. wording is off to me but still like the concept
Cus u obsessed w/ impressing men, bring u to the rape sphere to meet ur fate
Bagga done told me, only time you drop bars is when u try to deadlift half ur weight
this is ok. kinda light


Quotes: Parler, Georgia
Close: Freaky friday, deadlift

Nothing was a bad miss but not a fan of your wording in all places. Tried not to penalize you too much for that but it will affect the vote if the battle is close.


I'm winnin this shit, who thought this fat fuck could compete!?
ALWAYS the loser. dude only reverse roles suckin his gut in @ the beach
cool opener. creative
Wife fat af too.. if she fell into seths arms it'd snap his shit
Way he stay attached to pulling jumbos his life's been a strongman event
i get it. ok punch
And she cheats fast, male bodies appear w/ their dicks
Box was made for more swords to be in at once than magicians tricks
ok. not the hardest but it hits
I'll leave the scene clean & real quiet when I shoot gunz
Silencers got the remedy, cuz a potatoes helping me to remove rust
i guess this is ok.


Quotes: opener, strongman, magician ticks
Close: closer

Nice verse. Enjoyed the read.

Vote: Doc Savage I have Doc taking this on quotes.