ROUND 2 - Orc/Hush vs. Patrick/Sn00p - HUSH/ORC WIN

[PancakeBrah]

Due Date: Saturday, 9/7, Midnight.
Line Limit: 16 Mininum/24 Max.
Extensions by Request

Orc
Hush
Patrick
Sn00p

[Hush]

Gluck Sn00p

[Orc]

doom mode initiateddd

[Swerve]

Good luck, friends.

[Sn00p]

g'luck, fam.

[PancakeBrah]

Orc/Hush
faaack Playedwords that dude is wacker. a newb & actor
The most creative lines dude EVER wrote were the ones saying he used to matter
We showed up last round on that impatient tip
Trust not a single fuck was given.. like Sn00ps last 5 attempts at relationships
Any1 voting against this freshness is a born lame tho
That ain't turning a Blind Eye. it's throwing Beyond headfirst into a Tornado
This dumb german faggits the weakest to date
Dog. U cudn't be a Serius threat if you was Math Hoffa & I screamed in ya face
.. Both these pussies is easy and trash
Only way Pats Breaking Bad is if he snaps his fav Micheal Jackson CD in half
We got Global rep and never roll in stealth
Yall don't need Mass Appeal. More like a personal invitation from da Pope himself
U get bodied by top tier like clockwork u useless bum
If Pattern a win its because he lost 10 in a row and he's finally due for one
Swerve vs Orc will leave teeth rattling & a bum smacked
ironic the Fighting Irish come from Notre Dame & we battling this Hunchback
Snoops a skinny german queer & his figure is frail
Can't tell if u from Hamburg r u just need 100 of those before u wither away
Get eloctrocuted. Fry what lil' pride this baby had
All you'll hear is the Volts. u'd think Sn00p was discussing Mr White & Breaking Bad

[PancakeBrah]

Patrick/Sn00p
ALL ya shit's played...how long u been disconnected, coward?!
i mean it looks like Franco's been under a rock waaay longer than 127 Hours

Orc is like Ricky Bobby & Hush is Kenny Powers
we leaving Franco between a rock & a hard place. shits looking like 127 hours

orc aka hades & hush aka victor

Bust this biter for the fans out there, but all in due time,
While the masses will echo our praises, Orc will echo more of Sn00p’s lines.
& We come with hattori hanzo's when we slit & slay geeks
Orc got no real weapons…you only need to bypass styx to get to hades.
Plus Hush a scared little sissy who's never done hard shit
Fact is u ain't 'breivik'. You couldn't even kill unarmed kids
see, Hush a loser & orc descended from a slut. It's all proven facts
but what's worse? Staying home at night w ur mom or her never doing that?
Orc gets HOF for being a biter with Hush as his true love,
They’re bringing crooked back in a way that even my spine wouldn’t approve of.
Hush got the luck of the draw, but he certified gay,
He goes and wins 35K, but still plans to live with his mom till he's 35, k?
Your taste in music shows you a geek, don’t try to fight it dude,
Cause when it comes to partynextdoor…it’s just another thing Orc’s not invited to.
And my murder game on point, I stay on the block killing g's,
So when I give TJ surgery with the knife, I ain't treating a sports injury.
how can orc be g if he took my line & the sure lock wp and the shit's proven?
with that verse last round, orc was only considered street because he bitumen.
plus hush is probably confused by smoking kush, haze & more of these
thinking he'd win, the green must've gone to victor's head like a laurel wreath.

[Decibel]

faaack Playedwords that dude is wacker. a newb & actor
The most creative lines dude EVER wrote were the ones saying he used to matter
Kinda decent opener.. funny and chuckled
We showed up last round on that impatient tip
Trust not a single fuck was given.. like Sn00ps last 5 attempts at relationships
Made a chuckle here too.. good
Any1 voting against this freshness is a born lame tho
That ain't turning a Blind Eye. it's throwing Beyond headfirst into a Tornado
Good bar here... solid
This dumb german faggits the weakest to date
Dog. U cudn't be a Serius threat if you was Math Hoffa & I screamed in ya face
Decent bar here.. direct and a slight hit.
.. Both these pussies is easy and trash
Only way Pats Breaking Bad is if he snaps his fav Micheal Jackson CD in half
Good bar here.. like it
We got Global rep and never roll in stealth
Yall don't need Mass Appeal. More like a personal invitation from da Pope himself
I get it and it was okay
U get bodied by top tier like clockwork u useless bum
If Pattern a win its because he lost 10 in a row and he's finally due for one
Love the WP here... good bar/punch
Swerve vs Orc will leave teeth rattling & a bum smacked
ironic the Fighting Irish come from Notre Dame & we battling this Hunchback
Okay shot here
Snoops a skinny german queer & his figure is frail
Can't tell if u from Hamburg r u just need 100 of those before u wither away
Didnt rhyme? kinda threw it off TBH
Get eloctrocuted. Fry what lil' pride this baby had
All you'll hear is the Volts. u'd think Sn00p was discussing Mr White & Breaking Bad
Dig the show and it was a overall decent closer


To put it simple this was a good verse (aside from the non rhyming bar). Decent shots and personals. Favorite bar was the Pattern WP bar... creative stuff.. should be an interesting battle.




Bust this biter for the fans out there, but all in due time,
While the masses will echo our praises, Orc will echo more of Sn00p’s lines.
Dig the opener here. Personal/direct shot!
& We come with hattori hanzo's when we slit & slay geeks
Orc got no real weapons…you only need to bypass styx to get to hades.
Good/decent shot here.
Plus Hush a scared little sissy who's never done hard shit
Fact is u ain't 'breivik'. You couldn't even kill unarmed kids
Okay at best here. Not really feeling it
see, Hush a loser & orc descended from a slut. It's all proven facts
but what's worse? Staying home at night w ur mom or her never doing that?
General punch/diss.. I get it but just seen all types of flips on this stuff
Orc gets HOF for being a biter with Hush as his true love,
They’re bringing crooked back in a way that even my spine wouldn’t approve of.
Good flip here on personal...Dig it
Hush got the luck of the draw, but he certified gay,
He goes and wins 35K, but still plans to live with his mom till he's 35, k?
Waiting for someone to use that on a flip. Good hit here
Your taste in music shows you a geek, don’t try to fight it dude,
Cause when it comes to partynextdoor…it’s just another thing Orc’s not invited to.
Good shot here..
And my murder game on point, I stay on the block killing g's,
So when I give TJ surgery with the knife, I ain't treating a sports injury.
Alright bar here.. not strongest.
how can orc be g if he took my line & the sure lock wp and the shit's proven?
with that verse last round, orc was only considered street because he bitumen.
Same concept as before.. fresh flip.. good ish
plus hush is probably confused by smoking kush, haze & more of these
thinking he'd win, the green must've gone to victor's head like a laurel wreath.
Not so strong closer here.


Overall.. Your opener was fire here. That drove to be a bomb verse but you had some misses here and there. Not so strong lines in some areas, used same concept basically twice as well. You had some personals in there, however, just not consistent...


Vote: Orc/Hush for consistency really. I felt Pat/Snoop had bar of battle with the opener (as it was so true), however, just slacked in some lines.

[Cashius]

Fuck was given, serious threat, hamburg

Vs.

35k, Styx/Hades

Felt Hush Orc here pretty significantly. Really liked the 3 I quoted. Snoop/Pat...just wasn't feeling some of the references. Pat...didn't like the spine personal. There were also a couple from Horc I almost quoted...pattern, mass appeal.

Horc gets it.

[Geno]

read this battle earlier when it first went up

orc hush had some dope bars on a more back to back consistent basis

patrick/snoop had the flip on the bite. which hit pretty hard imo. just to bad they didnt keep more shit inbetween to balance out hush and orc. feel like hush and orc may have slept a tad bit here cause ive seen better from both.. but still think they did what was necessary for the w

v-hush/orc

[Alvin Karpis]

Nice battle. Hush/orc/orc had the opener, snoop line was funny, math hoffa, pattern, and hunchback. Mass was really played but overall cool verse. Snoop/pat had the opener which started off nice, also had crooked back, 35k, tj surgery. This battle was close but it came down to misses and i felt hush/orc had less

v/hush/orc

[Dominate]

faaack Playedwords that dude is wacker. a newb & actor
The most creative lines dude EVER wrote were the ones saying he used to matter
nah. fillerish/nothingish
We showed up last round on that impatient tip
Trust not a single fuck was given.. like Sn00ps last 5 attempts at relationships
delivery made it OK but the concept is not fresh
Any1 voting against this freshness is a born lame tho
That ain't turning a Blind Eye. it's throwing Beyond headfirst into a Tornado
LMAO. I've always said that Beyond eye lines are so overdone they don't work anymore unless they are really dope - this qualifies
This dumb german faggits the weakest to date
Dog. U cudn't be a Serius threat if you was Math Hoffa & I screamed in ya face
OK recent event flip
.. Both these pussies is easy and trash
Only way Pats Breaking Bad is if he snaps his fav Micheal Jackson CD in half
OK. A jab.
We got Global rep and never roll in stealth
Yall don't need Mass Appeal. More like a personal invitation from da Pope himself
eh. Seen/done a lot of mass wp before
U get bodied by top tier like clockwork u useless bum
If Pattern a win its because he lost 10 in a row and he's finally due for one
lol good nameflip, landed well
Swerve vs Orc will leave teeth rattling & a bum smacked
ironic the Fighting Irish come from Notre Dame & we battling this Hunchback
cool self personal/personal line
Snoops a skinny german queer & his figure is frail
Can't tell if u from Hamburg r u just need 100 of those before u wither away
lol good
Get eloctrocuted. Fry what lil' pride this baby had
All you'll hear is the Volts. u'd think Sn00p was discussing Mr White & Breaking Bad
eh, I've seen that swapping w for v accent idea before on different words (vigour/wigger?), would've been better otherwise


vs

Bust this biter for the fans out there, but all in due time,
While the masses will echo our praises, Orc will echo more of Sn00p’s lines.
eh OK... it's not really much more than pointing out the similar lines, seemed a bit nothing-ish after the lines were quoted
& We come with hattori hanzo's when we slit & slay geeks
Orc got no real weapons…you only need to bypass styx to get to hades.
cool wp/np
Plus Hush a scared little sissy who's never done hard shit
Fact is u ain't 'breivik'. You couldn't even kill unarmed kids
another good np, original
see, Hush a loser & orc descended from a slut. It's all proven facts
but what's worse? Staying home at night w ur mom or her never doing that?
okayyy... punch is good but delivery needed some cleverness
Orc gets HOF for being a biter with Hush as his true love,
They’re bringing crooked back in a way that even my spine wouldn’t approve of.
lol cool
Hush got the luck of the draw, but he certified gay,
He goes and wins 35K, but still plans to live with his mom till he's 35, k?
personal punch concept's good but the "k?" part of the wp I can't dig
Your taste in music shows you a geek, don’t try to fight it dude,
Cause when it comes to partynextdoor…it’s just another thing Orc’s not invited to.
cool thread flip
And my murder game on point, I stay on the block killing g's,
So when I give TJ surgery with the knife, I ain't treating a sports injury.
I don't know what TJ surgery is
how can orc be g if he took my line & the sure lock wp and the shit's proven?
with that verse last round, orc was only considered street because he bitumen.
I pronounce bitumen as bit-cha-men... I bit-two-men is a stretch in any accent I can think of
plus hush is probably confused by smoking kush, haze & more of these
thinking he'd win, the green must've gone to victor's head like a laurel wreath.
pretty good personal/nameflip


swerve/sn00p had 1 more line I liked but the ones I liked from Horc were harder hitters ... it's close but Horc had more lulz and so my gut feeling's to edge it to them


v/ Horc