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Mr. J
09-01-2013, 08:28 PM
The verbiage is care-free but the mood isn't
can't tell how it all happened or who did it
used to be hard bars kicked to a smooth rhythm
left each MC ate, a menace straight up, new fitted
old kicks sitting high in the laboratory
diabetic hooks caused the end of that story...
so since Nate Dogg left, I been hoping to witness yo' death
couldn't stay tuned in, cramped up should exercise yo' self
fitness for health, should understand the prices of wealth
precise likeness to dividends in decline, no business, no help
disregard for savings and what the idea does
got high in plain sight felt what happened to Aaliyah just rush






















to be continued

Geno
09-01-2013, 11:32 PM
first half was fire, then you got lazy

would like to see sometheing more coherant from you. something less random thoughts, and more precision execution.

cool drop though, always a pleasure. short, sweet, to the point. still waiting for something irregular from you though

Mr. J
09-05-2013, 06:57 PM
thnx breh

CopyPat
09-06-2013, 04:22 AM
didn't really get this man??? needs to be fully explained/finished

Split
09-06-2013, 07:06 AM
The verbiage is care-free but the mood isn't
can't tell how it all happened or who did it
used to be hard bars kicked to a smooth rhythm
left each MC ate, a menace straight up, new fitted
old kicks sitting high in the laboratory
diabetic hooks caused the end of that story...
so since Nate Dogg left, I been hoping to witness yo' death
couldn't stay tuned in, cramped up should exercise yo' self
fitness for health, should understand the prices of wealth
precise likeness to dividends in decline, no business, no help
>didnt like
disregard for savings and what the idea does
got high in plain sight felt what happened to Aaliyah just rush


to be continued

Everything above the line I didnt like, was fire. idk I don't have much to add or throw out there but it was cool to read, and simple without being simplistic. The bold line was my favorite in a long time.. Thought you killed this tho

When's the next Issue come out?