I need someone smart to read my book

[Answer]

It's currently at 157 pages, but I'm still making plenty of adjustments. It's sort of comedic but meant to be educational, primarily targeted at the demographic of people graduating high school.

These are some people I'd consider

Sharp - Solid, probably my top contender

Diode - I don't really know much about him tbh but I think he's super successful

Bags - I think he's really religious, don't think he can make it through the atheist content

Zuch - I don't really trust him to keep it private

Blue Bayou - Not reliable

I think that's all I can think of

[UserName]

Well, I’ll fuck right off

[Blue Bayou]

Sheesh

[UPN Zuch]

I already leaked it. But the reviews so far are great.


Syke naw. I will read it but I can’t promise to have any sort of critique back in a timely matter. Sharp is def your best bet.

[Ghost1]

Lol idgaf if ur atheist. I read dawkins, hitchens, harris...and the other guy.... ironically the other guy is actually my favorite.... Oh well

But yea I'll peep. Got two of veritas books on my shelf tbf.

[~RustyGunZ~]

Any laugh tracks?

[Destroyer]

if it helps, Veritas sent me his book and i haven’t read it yet

[dull boy]

Any laugh tracks?

lol

[Aero]

I read Answer's 157 page book --- No one

[Fracture]

We be reading ur novels every post bro fuck u

[Fracture]

Also im probably the only one who listened to ur standup from beginning to end so fuck u twice

[Answer]

A lot of saltiness here

[Fracture]

Ill read ur book man what's up?*


Autocorrect

[Blue Bayou]

Book Title: But That's Life

Most of its a blur to me but there's some things I remember perfectly

[sral]

I can read

[kungfugrip]

New York Times Least Seller over here

[Smod of War]

Do you plan on releasing it in the form of ‘interpretative dance’ ?

That way it’s less racist and such

[Orc]

We be reading ur novels every post bro fuck u

Yep

[uh-oh]

Needs someone smart. Hmm how bout bags

Smfh

[Sharp]

Send it

[Eŋg]

i'm smart but i would rather not read anything you write.

[~RustyGunZ~]

i'm smart but i would rather not read anything you write.

Where did you go to reach that conclusion?

[Eŋg]

tompkins cortland community college.

[Answer]

i'm smart

lmao lemme just get ouch to read it

[Eŋg]

sober ouch is deceptively cognizant.

still a fucking spacehead, but you know, relatively.

[Answer]

yeah, relative to you

[Eŋg]

ok. i'm dumber than a dumb guy? scathing.

[~RustyGunZ~]

tompkins cortland community college.

That’s creepy

Who’s more in love with me, you or your brother?

[Eŋg]

tough one. phone the feds and ask them maybe?!

[~RustyGunZ~]

Such a stretch of a personal lol the feds?

[Dope girl]

I'm happy for your book Answer

[Answer]

Mods close this thread, I’ve got a winner

[Dope girl]

I bet nobody knows Answer made up this chanllege

[bare ryu]

depends. i can only read at a seventh grade level. if its anything like the hunger games hml

[Answer]

depends. i can only read at a seventh grade level. if its anything like the hunger games hml

yooo I'm sending you the PM on RR. You should sign up for the SC if you've got any battles left in you. I'm probably sitting it out but it'd be fun to watch

[bare ryu]

yooo I'm sending you the PM on RR. You should sign up for the SC if you've got any battles left in you. I'm probably sitting it out but it'd be fun to watch

bet. also probably not i havent battled since i last went against TGO and i wanna see what the NC format is like first. might consider it though

[~RustyGunZ~]

If you’re from RR you’re probably not good enough

[bare ryu]

If you’re from RR you’re probably not good enough
what if im from america?

[Pakistani Hand Cannon]

That’s creepy

Who’s more in love with me, you or your brother?

if callin you a rat snitch, & reminding you how you call the po lice on internet forum members often cause it obv bothers you on some level to be so pussy, is love...

then deffo me

also

salute on writing a book Answer, genuine.

[kungfugrip]

If you don't want certain people to read your book, wouldn't that mean it's absolutely not good enough to be published?

You realize that like, 29 people will read your book if it ever hits the shelves right? And you probably can't trust them to keep it a secret

[Answer]

I’m just looking for feedback, trying to make sure I didn’t claim anything that’s clearly false, and I’m still making changes to it. fixing a lot of typos, etc. it’s nowhere near complete yet

[Ouch]

go to a forum thats about people writing in the style you do nigga its not thats much.. people here are like old ass 30 year olds who kind of write....


you do know what reddit is right... and im not tryna be a dick

[Answer]

go to a forum thats about people writing in the style you do nigga its not thats much.. people here are like old ass 30 year olds who kind of write....


you do know what reddit is right... and im not tryna be a dick

What’s reddit

[UPN Zuch]

Bro ouch is owning you right now

[~RustyGunZ~]

if callin you a rat snitch, & reminding you how you call the po lice on internet forum members often cause it obv bothers you on some level to be so pussy, is love...

then deffo me

also

salute on writing a book Answer, genuine.

More of an obsession but yea, the following me around in every thread possible to use a fake personal while taking the reaction of “that’s a fake personal” as I’m bothered and you won an equally imaginary troll prize is a bit obsessed

[~RustyGunZ~]

Also gay

[BOOM]

More of an obsession but yea, the following me around in every thread possible to use a fake personal while taking the reaction of “that’s a fake personal” as I’m bothered and you won an equally imaginary troll prize is a bit obsessed

lmao if this ain’t the pot calling the kettle fat

[~RustyGunZ~]

If you put as much effort into selling hot tubs as you do making aliases on a text forum in 2021 your wife might fuck less black guys while your kids nap

[BOOM]

lmao ur wifes cunt juice taste of honey glazed ham

[~RustyGunZ~]

Delicious

Your wife look like cured meat

[kungfugrip]

Lmao this is hilarious

[kungfugrip]

I’m just looking for feedback, trying to make sure I didn’t claim anything that’s clearly false, and I’m still making changes to it. fixing a lot of typos, etc. it’s nowhere near complete yet

I have 3 screenplays written and i send them out willy nilly. My favourite one is about how racist WWF was in the 80s. It's called Tusslemania 10: The Caucasianing, and i used alot of those Million Peso Man jokes from UPN