Era

[Bad Lieutenant]

We die young, falling victim to narcotics
Wild and reckless, we refuse to use logic
Where's the love, we fighting our own kind
Cold world, animosity blowing in the wind
It's different times, personalities are star signs
Constantly on platforms, hiding behind fake smiles
Currency is going digital, no need for real cash
Shut down the internet and the whole world crash
Taxes are stealing profits, there's no justice
Businesses are underpaying, it's injustice
We fighting politics, tryna exercise our rights
It's like a maze, is it left or right
Tryna understand it all, what does it all mean
Everything's complex like the vaccine

[corleone]

dooooooppppeeee... I really enjoyed reading this, it was short and sweet.. another classic verse Ive read from someone on this board.. keep up the amazing work and keep writing! God gave you a gift my man, dont lose it!!

peace,


- Cor

[Alice]

Thought this was ok for what it is. A bit short but succinct at times. Not sure maybe you could’ve elaborated on some of the references you had in your lines like the stealing profits part. It felt simple at parts too but I enjoyed the underlying concept.

[Cereal]

i loved the personalities like star signs line..
dope tight precise and flowed nice drop

[Adverse]

Ehh was alright. A lot of the rhyming was basic, and a lot of times you were rhyming the same word twice. (Rhyming rights with right, justice with injustice etc) but I dig the sentiment behind it. There’s some real life content here, just work on finding better ways to say the things you’re saying, flesh it out, dig through the thesaurus, get creative

Keep spitting