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Bobby D
09-30-2021, 03:28 PM
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=149737

I appreciate all the thoughts you have to dedicate something to me, I'd normally say I am flattered. But in this case it fuckin sucked so I responded with how you should be able to write.

You can thank me later

I won't be held accountable for your actions after you read your eulogy. Maybe you can make YouTube video about it so no one can watch it

Incredible
09-30-2021, 04:11 PM
I mean honestly man not a single punchline connected. LGI Trolling, just gassing you up.

Punches are structured way different now. Might have to switch some stuff up a little bro. Most of, if not all, honestly would have to double check, your punches are way too much of a statement punch. And unless it's a super Haymaker the voters don't go for it and it's too simple. Has to have complex schemes to complete with the best here.

Lars didn't do much better. And I am no top tier expert but I can tell you that verse would get zero votes in a battle here. I'd like to see if you can develop a new style, structure better, etc. Good luck

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 04:20 PM
I have no idea who you are man

Nor do I care for whether anything connected lmao, I've seen the lvls here and your gassing yourselfes, I am not looking for constructive feedback on something wrote up literally off the top of my head in 20 mins.

So unless you're referring to yourself and this a baron or Lars alias trying to be smart plz just stfu

sral
09-30-2021, 04:22 PM
Nah, he’s def right.

I won that exchange too. 2-0

Diablo
09-30-2021, 04:24 PM
Bobby D trash

this the guy claiming Prowlers?

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 04:24 PM
What you're agreeing that you suck?

2 and 0

Yes you keep typing out the shape of your body and head together it's great way to abbreiviate

Thumbs up for you baron

Clutbuck
09-30-2021, 04:25 PM
lmao Bobby went off at the end.. on a complete nonsensical tangent

hot garbage

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 04:25 PM
Bobby D trash

this the guy claiming Prowlers?

I would trash your existence if I ever I saw such a deadbeat persona

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 04:26 PM
Lmao how many aliases do you have baron?

Dank
09-30-2021, 04:26 PM
absolutely god awful response by Bobby D

lol @ claiming he wrote in 20 mins

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 04:26 PM
Now we know how you won all your battles, by copying cane and creating aliases


Lmao you're the worst

White LGI
09-30-2021, 04:27 PM
I mean honestly man not a single punchline connected. LGI Trolling, just gassing you up.

Punches are structured way different now. Might have to switch some stuff up a little bro. Most of, if not all, honestly would have to double check, your punches are way too much of a statement punch. And unless it's a super Haymaker the voters don't go for it and it's too simple. Has to have complex schemes to complete with the best here.

Lars didn't do much better. And I am no top tier expert but I can tell you that verse would get zero votes in a battle here. I'd like to see if you can develop a new style, structure better, etc. Good luck


Man I haven't read a text verse since 2007

But bobby definitely won

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 04:27 PM
Baron 6 alises over 6 years ?


You're literally the saddest of all men ive come across on a message board

I'm literally dying in laughter

sral
09-30-2021, 04:31 PM
lmao they were just throwaways i had from the night before tbh

i won’t use them elsewhere so just dropped them for you anyway

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 04:31 PM
Man I haven't read a text verse since 2007

But bobby definitely won

Just baron talking to himself lgi I wouldn't even sweat it

UPN Zuch
09-30-2021, 04:49 PM
Lol just realized everyone in here is Lars

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 04:50 PM
Lol just realized everyone in here is Lars

Lmao Is this behaviour normal for him or have I finally made him crack!? Lmao

UPN Zuch
09-30-2021, 04:51 PM
Lmao Is this behaviour normal for him or have I finally made him crack!? Lmao

Hard to say. Every time I try to find out who someone is it ends up being Lars, though.

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 04:54 PM
LMAO

netcees is 3 active guys


The rest just baron aliases, he probably giving himself feedback on his own verses and replying to his own threads on a distant internet board far away

White LGI
09-30-2021, 05:02 PM
Lol just realized everyone in here is Lars

I'm starting to think I'm larz to


I'm off to write a poem about the tragedy of not using proper grammar

White LGI
09-30-2021, 05:02 PM
Hold on

Incredible is larz?

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 05:07 PM
Hold on

Incredible is larz?

Lmao yes it couldn't be anymore obvious how he just logged in and out of those accounts made all those posts in 10 15 mins

I mean it doesn't take long to figure out only stupid dickhead would write something as pretentious as that.

He even tried to make it look legit giving himself feedback lmao

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 05:21 PM
I'm laughing most at that he's so stupid his first 2 lines actually diss himself...and he's still too dumb to realise he had a great concept and used it against himself lmao

Then says it's throw away ....no kidding lmao

Elfo
09-30-2021, 05:25 PM
I thought Incredible lived in Tampa or some shit

Ghost1
09-30-2021, 05:27 PM
Imagine the ultimate shock when zook realizes booby d is lars too

sral
09-30-2021, 05:28 PM
I've always been more creative off the top
You just literally ate shit off the top
And you ain't shit off the drop
Whereas I'm gunning dark
So who gives a fuck dude what you missing


roflzzzzz

no wonder you waved the white flag wanting me to leave you be

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 05:28 PM
Baron wishes he could have a day in my shoes

He'd probably drown though

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 05:29 PM
roflzzzzz

Glad you enjoyed your demise

Good night baron enjoy chatting to yourself

Clout
09-30-2021, 06:08 PM
This a weird convo

White LGI
09-30-2021, 06:15 PM
I'm completely lost

Incredible
09-30-2021, 07:38 PM
I have no idea who you are man

Nor do I care for whether anything connected lmao, I've seen the lvls here and your gassing yourselfes, I am not looking for constructive feedback on something wrote up literally off the top of my head in 20 mins.

So unless you're referring to yourself and this a baron or Lars alias trying to be smart plz just stfu


Bro are you kidding me? I only gave my opinion because you said

"so I responded with how you should be able to write"

And you are way off by a huge margin for how you should write. I literally just gave my thoughts on it.

But figures another textcee who gets offended when you say something bad about their verses.

Barc is that you?


P.S. everyone on this website knows that I'm not Lars.

Ouch
09-30-2021, 09:54 PM
I know you dudes are like kinda old riends but this is is mad gay... its alrough thoiugh

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 10:01 PM
My writings are masterpieces

Ungrateful fuck

Ouch
09-30-2021, 10:08 PM
its pivotal...
i'll drop bobby... d DIGITAL!.... RZAAA ORIGNAL

AHH CHECK THAT OUT

Ouch
09-30-2021, 10:13 PM
yeah i'm pretty sure i'm fine/ crazy some peple talking ish to me but those pei-le really know... but yeah middle of nowhere michigan...

Bobby D
09-30-2021, 10:38 PM
I just laid all out fire on this drip and you're talking to yourself ouch

Ouch
09-30-2021, 10:45 PM
keep goin... some tyson type shit


got now i'll match you

Bobby D
10-01-2021, 06:23 AM
P.S. everyone on this website knows that I'm not Lars.

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=142606

what really? here's you talking to yourself in the mag acting as if you're best friend with Lars, and there is Lars asking as Diablo his alias, which he's made known in this thread then asking to tag himself in it as Lars as he was the one being interviewed. LMAO wtf?

So either lars is constantly using aliases to build his credibility

Or you two are actually best of friends in which case the same still applies stfu

Bomb Bard
10-01-2021, 08:46 AM
Inc isn’t lars… he’s posted videos of himself.

Ghost1
10-01-2021, 08:49 AM
Booby definitely making me respeck upn way more than I did before

Elfo
10-01-2021, 12:34 PM
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=142606

what really? here's you talking to yourself in the mag acting as if you're best friend with Lars, and there is Lars asking as Diablo his alias, which he's made known in this thread then asking to tag himself in it as Lars as he was the one being interviewed. LMAO wtf?

So either lars is constantly using aliases to build his credibility

Or you two are actually best of friends in which case the same still applies stfu

You have some of the weirdest trust issues I’ve ever seen on a text forum.

Incredible isn’t Lars idiot

Why are you so paranoid? Drugs or do you have legit mental problems

Bobby D
10-01-2021, 01:11 PM
You have some of the weirdest trust issues I’ve ever seen on a text forum.

Incredible isn’t Lars idiot

Why are you so paranoid? Drugs or do you have legit mental problems

Shut up baron

As I said either you're best buddies or its you

It doesn't even matter I am enjoying myself writing bars

sral
10-01-2021, 01:25 PM
lmao I’m glad to hear one person is at least

Elfo
10-01-2021, 01:58 PM
Shut up baron

As I said either you're best buddies or its you

It doesn't even matter I am enjoying myself writing bars

This is pathetic lol

Ghost1
10-01-2021, 02:07 PM
EARTH THESE SHREWS BOOBY

Bobby D
10-01-2021, 02:18 PM
Baron you having fun logging in and out on these accounts? Lmao

sral
10-01-2021, 02:35 PM
LMAO I PICKED MY FIVE A DAY FROM THE KITCHEN BOWL THIS MORNING

IT WAS A FRUIT-FULL DECISION

ROFLZZZ

SO BAD

Incredible
10-01-2021, 04:50 PM
It doesn't even matter I am enjoying myself writing bars


This is what it's all about. Have a good day sir.

Elfo
10-01-2021, 05:10 PM
I think the D in Bobby D stands for Dementia

dull boy
10-01-2021, 05:12 PM
Imagine the ultimate shock when zook realizes booby d is lars too

lolll

Or when he realizes he’s Lars

Bobby D
10-01-2021, 05:32 PM
Wow this circle jerk got heavy quick


Baron acting like he ain't talking to himself and then calling me paranoid

What a world you live in

Elfo
10-01-2021, 05:37 PM
Ok Bobby Dementia

Ghost1
10-01-2021, 05:37 PM
lolll

Or when he realizes he’s Lars

Looooool his kid looks over an starts speaking with a British accent while his hair slowly disintegrates and his height declines gradually

He been a figment of lars imagination for so long he became sentient. Terrible nose choice but impressive nonetheless.

Bobby D
10-01-2021, 05:40 PM
Bags I know who you are now

And I hear you're a pussy on the discord so wait till I find you

Ghost1
10-01-2021, 05:48 PM
BOOBY PLEASE DONT

don't...

Earth me

Bobby D
10-01-2021, 05:49 PM
I've been burning shopping bags since I went green

Don't make me come at you bags

Ghost1
10-01-2021, 05:51 PM
That doesn't sound very environmentally healthy at all my guy

Bobby D
10-01-2021, 05:53 PM
Neither is your face by all accounts

Ghost1
10-01-2021, 05:54 PM
...

Bobby D
10-01-2021, 05:54 PM
...

UPN Zuch
10-01-2021, 10:07 PM
Fuckin 1999 all over again I can’t get enough

Dope girl
10-02-2021, 07:14 PM
Bobby lost bet
he's salty bout it

White LGI
10-02-2021, 08:42 PM
Bobby lost bet
he's salty bout it


Hope you aren't larz to....I showed you my dick

Fracture
10-03-2021, 02:26 AM
Looooool his kid looks over an starts speaking with a British accent while his hair slowly disintegrates and his height declines gradually

He been a figment of lars imagination for so long he became sentient. Terrible nose choice but impressive nonetheless.

im ded af luv

Geno
10-03-2021, 04:19 AM
Imagine the ultimate shock when zook realizes booby d is lars too

Lmao. Was just thinking this

Bobby D
10-03-2021, 05:48 AM
LLB army United

sral
10-03-2021, 10:09 AM
so when does my win get added?

and more to the point, when does Bobby’s L get added?

Bobby D
10-04-2021, 03:24 AM
so when does my win get added?

and more to the point, when does Bobby’s L get added?

You should be banned

Only lls I take are the ones belonging to Brian camarac

sral
10-04-2021, 08:14 AM
lmao doesn’t matter which of my alias did or didn’t vote

you still lost by all accounts

NoetiC
10-05-2021, 03:07 AM
Not that it matters, but thats not Bobby D


lol the fuck is going on

kungfugrip
10-05-2021, 03:08 AM
There he is

NoetiC
10-05-2021, 03:10 AM
maybe it is, who knows


kung, hows life?

kungfugrip
10-05-2021, 03:15 AM
I mean, after 7-8 lines and beers i come here to talk shit, and despite my hilarious comments everyone here is on full alert. The other day they tried to tell me UPN wasn't the mecca of text. I don't know man, at this point im just fucking with people for my own entertainment

NoetiC
10-05-2021, 03:18 AM
you railing coke still or did you move on to meth and pills yet


some of the conspiracy talk you use to ramble were def on a meth level


either way, whens the next time youre in the USA, we can get together, you can come over and fuck my sister while i sit in the corner and get a haircut

kungfugrip
10-05-2021, 03:21 AM
I only do expensive drugs ok

I ran out of smokes so now i have to uber to the store and back and im in no shape to be in public, I'll be arrested on sight.

Never confuse me for a meth head again ok. I'm a coke head. Get it right.

NoetiC
10-05-2021, 03:22 AM
whats wrong with meth? i think meth used responsibly like an adult can be an enjoyable evening for both friends and family

kungfugrip
10-05-2021, 03:25 AM
I used to bang this girl and she'd just crush a huuuuge haul of meth and i don't judge but there's no way I'd hit that the same way I've been offered a crack pipe 7-10 times and was like 'no thanks bro, you guys have a good time'

NoetiC
10-05-2021, 03:29 AM
smoking any synthethic drug is bad in general.


dont smoke anything that isnt weed.


doing a line or a bump of blow is classy and elegant and ladies will want to fuck you


smoking a line or a bump of blow is trashy and gaudy and men will suck your dick


so just choose your own adventure wisely there

kungfugrip
10-05-2021, 03:33 AM
Oh ive chosen wisely persian

Perhaps you should have done the same

You come to my city gates carrying the crowns of conquered kings

You threaten my women 'this is madness'

'MADNESS?'

THIS

IS

SPARTAAAAAA

kungfugrip
10-05-2021, 03:33 AM
I cant figure this fucking Uber stop out tho wtf

kungfugrip
10-05-2021, 03:39 AM
How u dealing with vaccinations is the question

I've lost about 20gs from it

NoetiC
10-05-2021, 12:49 PM
im fully vaccinated, the military gave me so many fucking shots, you think im scared of any shot?


im fully vaccinated from anthrax bro, lol. im super fucked if there are any long term effects