[Round 1] 1. Stamps vs 12. Defiant/Spoken [Stamps advances]

[Answer]

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Blue Bayou UPN Zuch Defiant Spoken

[Defiant]

Alright

OGs to the scene but they bookin the cheap gates
We see yall and its hotel rwanda of 94 back on replay.
Get rolled on bitch. zuch suck a dick. Yall through...
leave everyone Thinking of them Retro 1s with the way we black on blue.
u faggots number 1 seeds is a scene I might snub
only time stamps on the way through, is when getting into a nightclub
Zuchs public breakup last year sucked, no doubt it went south
didn't just give you blue balls, she left cause u couldn't get them outta ya mouth

[Blue Bayou]

Sup Def? Still Fat?!


apologize for your gluttony & cop some penance
family dinner for you's a bigger fight over seconds than the plot of Tenet
i took your bitch on vacation. shit was amazin. views insane
she said "you really have to take it all in"...i responded 'tonight you do the same'
fucked Spoken's girl too..she sucked us dry through that dimpled frown
had that hoe hitting the kind of splits that would have won her the Triple Crown
both y’all trash for real. Stamps ain’t gotta be friendly
if Defiant is ‘laying down in the booth’ then Spoken must be robbin’ the Denny’s

[uh-oh]

OGs to the scene but they bookin the cheap gates
We see yall and its hotel rwanda of 94 back on replay.

sucks

Get rolled on bitch. zuch suck a dick. Yall through...
leave everyone Thinking of them Retro 1s with the way we black on blue.

black on this fooolllll

u faggots number 1 seeds is a scene I might snub
only time stamps on the way through, is when getting into a nightclub

aighttt

Zuchs public breakup last year sucked, no doubt it went south
didn't just give you blue balls, she left cause u couldn't get them outta ya mouth

word zuch loves blue they're gay as hell


apologize for your gluttony & cop some penance
family dinner for you's a bigger fight over seconds than the plot of Tenet

never seen it

i took your bitch on vacation. shit was amazin. views insane
she said "you really have to take it all in"...i responded 'tonight you do the same'

fill her up

fucked Spoken's girl too..she sucked us dry through that dimpled frown
had that hoe hitting the kind of splits that would have won her the Triple Crown

whooooo

both y’all trash for real. Stamps ain’t gotta be friendly
if Defiant is ‘laying down in the booth’ then Spoken must be robbin’ the Denny’s

i dig it

alright so yea i don't know anything about defiant or spoken. i don't text. thought this battle sucked. but in your guys defense text battles suck. i thought defiance and spoken were ok. i'd like to know who's who. i thought blue and zuch had better concepts i guess. the stuff that worked for defiance and spoken didn't hit it just worked. kind of the same with zuch and blue tho but theirs was better so vote- stamps

[Sharp]

OGs to the scene but they bookin the cheap gates
We see yall and its hotel rwanda of 94 back on replay.
setup is weird. Not even sure what the punch is
Get rolled on bitch. zuch suck a dick. Yall through...
leave everyone Thinking of them Retro 1s with the way we black on blue.
I don't understand what you mean by black on him
u faggots number 1 seeds is a scene I might snub
only time stamps on the way through, is when getting into a nightclub
cool concept, punch could use some meaner wording but I like it
Zuchs public breakup last year sucked, no doubt it went south
didn't just give you blue balls, she left cause u couldn't get them outta ya mouth
old flip on blue but I like how you made it relevant. Not bad




apologize for your gluttony & cop some penance
family dinner for you's a bigger fight over seconds than the plot of Tenet
good bar, but user did it better with interstellar.
i took your bitch on vacation. shit was amazin. views insane
she said "you really have to take it all in"...i responded 'tonight you do the same'
lol. Light but funny, I fuck with it
fucked Spoken's girl too..she sucked us dry through that dimpled frown
had that hoe hitting the kind of splits that would have won her the Triple Crown
nice
both y’all trash for real. Stamps ain’t gotta be friendly
if Defiant is ‘laying down in the booth’ then Spoken must be robbin’ the Denny’s
I understand it, but I'm not a fan

Stamps had more bars I liked.

V/stamps

[Mac]

Zuchs public breakup last year sucked, no doubt it went south
didn't just give you blue balls, she left cause u couldn't get them outta ya mouth

vs.

apologize for your gluttony & cop some penance
family dinner for you's a bigger fight over seconds than the plot of Tenet
fucked Spoken's girl too..she sucked us dry through that dimpled frown
had that hoe hitting the kind of splits that would have won her the Triple Crown
both y’all trash for real. Stamps ain’t gotta be friendly
if Defiant is ‘laying down in the booth’ then Spoken must be robbin’ the Denny’s

lol'd ad defiant/spoken closer.. but I got stamps here comfortably with more consistency

[Saint]

Alright

OGs to the scene but they bookin the cheap gates
We see yall and its hotel rwanda of 94 back on replay.

unless im missing something, seems too straightforward

Get rolled on bitch. zuch suck a dick. Yall through...
leave everyone Thinking of them Retro 1s with the way we black on blue.

cool for a flex/snf type line, i get the black part smack rappers use, but this is not really a hit

u faggots number 1 seeds is a scene I might snub
only time stamps on the way through, is when getting into a nightclub

thought time stamps couldve used a revision, but ok

Zuchs public breakup last year sucked, no doubt it went south
didn't just give you blue balls, she left cause u couldn't get them outta ya mouth

blue balls been done alot but these personal angle added a bit imo, so so

not sure who did what but some seemed rushed


apologize for your gluttony & cop some penance
family dinner for you's a bigger fight over seconds than the plot of Tenet

enough context for me here to get it.. w/o seeing it. cool opener

i took your bitch on vacation. shit was amazin. views insane
she said "you really have to take it all in"...i responded 'tonight you do the same'

light. i feel the phrase a bit expected but decent still

fucked Spoken's girl too..she sucked us dry through that dimpled frown
had that hoe hitting the kind of splits that would have won her the Triple Crown

this hit.. solid. liked the wording too

both y’all trash for real. Stamps ain’t gotta be friendly
if Defiant is ‘laying down in the booth’ then Spoken must be robbin’ the Denny’s

i get it, not my cup of tea but good enough closer & u won lol

didnt detect zuch but were better off


vote Stamps

[evaD]

Stamps on the way through was cool, the rest was ok, some personal angles at least

Fight over seconds was fire, take it all in was ok and triple crown was nice

Vote - blue/zuch

[Answer]

OGs to the scene but they bookin the cheap gates
We see yall and its hotel rwanda of 94 back on replay.

not really seeing the punch or wordplay in this

Get rolled on bitch. zuch suck a dick. Yall through...
leave everyone Thinking of them Retro 1s with the way we black on blue.

cool

u faggots number 1 seeds is a scene I might snub
only time stamps on the way through, is when getting into a nightclub

i like the idea. i think you couldve done more with it. something about getting these hands with stamps and nightclubs

Zuchs public breakup last year sucked, no doubt it went south
didn't just give you blue balls, she left cause u couldn't get them outta ya mouth

eh its been done before but it's alright



apologize for your gluttony & cop some penance
family dinner for you's a bigger fight over seconds than the plot of Tenet

cool

i took your bitch on vacation. shit was amazin. views insane
she said "you really have to take it all in"...i responded 'tonight you do the same'

kinda funny but not super hard. ok

fucked Spoken's girl too..she sucked us dry through that dimpled frown
had that hoe hitting the kind of splits that would have won her the Triple Crown

i dont really know equestrianism well enough to get this. I googled 'triple crown splits' and got no results, so this one is a miss for me

both y’all trash for real. Stamps ain’t gotta be friendly
if Defiant is ‘laying down in the booth’ then Spoken must be robbin’ the Denny’s

idea is okay, execution couldve been better


i thought this battle came off as closer than the votes show. tenet bar was probably lotb and the tipping point that leaned me in favor of blue/zuch

v/ stamps

[Answer]

stamps advances