Ahriman vs Saint - SAINT WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 2

Due Thursday, July7th at Midnight PST

Minimum - 8 lines
Max - 12 lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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Ahriman Saint

[Saint]

8 or 10

[Ahriman]

8

[Ahriman]

Ext

[Saint]

wow you beat Sin. & we overlooked punches were really horseshit
somehow shakily moved on up when those swings didn't hit Jack like Wendy Torrance
no-one congratulated your return to write or gave respect to that
last time hands came together for a pin to the pad you lost an armwrestling match
& bae love going topless YELLING: 'put that long D between here'
Rod n Cones; my titty fucks left her eye makeup so smeared she couldn't see clear
ima gun butt em there. extension hang lower than rapunzels hair
Neuralink IPO.. leave part of the stock in ya brain so big Elon Musk would share
Ahriman

[Ahriman]

Saint aka Doc Savage aka the suicidal pussy


Check check yoyo


Yo check


Say you bust gats with lasers, stop the gang front!
Only beam on your mind is in your basement to hang from
Suicide? Ahr clip kid if I hear that sob season
Nigga life come to a KwikStop & detectives find dawg bleeding
My guns on kill streak, blood clots form in groups
I don’t use these arms in vein, so cut yours b4 I shoot
I spit game off the top, rope your bitch & give her dick
She hate when you randy, savage…your sex game deader than macho & Elizabeth

[Sharp]

wow you beat Sin. & we overlooked punches were really horseshit
somehow shakily moved on up when those swings didn't hit Jack like Wendy Torrance
dope, but I feel like 'shakily moved on up' is more than needed
no-one congratulated your return to write or gave respect to that
last time hands came together for a pin to the pad you lost an armwrestling match
pen/pin sounds the same with some accents so I get that this kinda works, but when I think arm wrestling I really don't envision a pad like an actual pro arm wrestling match
& bae love going topless YELLING: 'put that long D between here'
Rod n Cones; my titty fucks left her eye makeup so smeared she couldn't see clear
is Rod your penis and cones her tits? This is confusing to me and doesn't really hit
ima gun butt em there. extension hang lower than rapunzels hair
Neuralink IPO.. leave part of the stock in ya brain so big Elon Musk would share
simple but works



Say you bust gats with lasers, stop the gang front!
Only beam on your mind is in your basement to hang from
cool
Suicide? Ahr clip kid if I hear that sob season
Nigga life come to a KwikStop & detectives find dawg bleeding
I don't get it. I Google kwikstop and find nothing that helps
My guns on kill streak, blood clots form in groups
I don’t use these arms in vein, so cut yours b4 I shoot
works but light
I spit game off the top, rope your bitch & give her dick
She hate when you randy, savage…your sex game deader than macho & Elizabeth
works


I think Inf hit harder, unless I'm missing something big with kwikstop I think he got it

V/inf

[Dominate]

wow you beat Sin. & we overlooked punches were really horseshit
somehow shakily moved on up when those swings didn't hit Jack like Wendy Torrance
Been too long since I saw the movie and I can't find a detailed enough plot summary easily on google to know what to make of this. Does she hit him with the baseball bat and then leave him in a basement sort of area? Hence the 'moving on up' part of the wp? If so and I'd seen it recently I think this would be fire. As is it's kind of like, objectively good? but didn't give me that wow factor
no-one congratulated your return to write or gave respect to that
last time hands came together for a pin to the pad you lost an armwrestling match
I didn't get it fully til I read Sharp's vote and saw the pin/pen thing which I was missing. Agree about the 'pad' part. It's OK overall.
& bae love going topless YELLING: 'put that long D between here'
Rod n Cones; my titty fucks left her eye makeup so smeared she couldn't see clear
LoL rod n cones wp is fresh. I don't know if I've heard titties called cones before but I guess it works. I like this.
ima gun butt em there. extension hang lower than rapunzels hair
Neuralink IPO.. leave part of the stock in ya brain so big Elon Musk would share
Cool close
Ahriman

Saint aka Doc Savage aka the suicidal pussy


Check check yoyo


Yo check



Say you bust gats with lasers, stop the gang front!
Only beam on your mind is in your basement to hang from
Simple but cool. He does do gun bars and I've seen depression/suicidal lines done on him before so I guess that's a personal?
Suicide? Ahr clip kid if I hear that sob season
Nigga life come to a KwikStop & detectives find dawg bleeding
Kwikstop is a convenience store I think? Kwikstop is presented as a wp here but it's missing a flip from what I can see
My guns on kill streak, blood clots form in groups
I don’t use these arms in vein, so cut yours b4 I shoot
Damn hitting this suicide angle again. I hope this personal is being greatly exaggerated. Inf buddy I love you, text is better with you around. Please stay with us. The arms and in vein wps have been done Ahr, wasn't digging this one.
I spit game off the top, rope your bitch & give her dick
She hate when you randy, savage…your sex game deader than macho & Elizabeth
Nice name flip


Inf was a little more consistent here.

[Adverse]

Ahirman:

Say you bust gats with lasers, stop the gang front!
Only beam on your mind is in your basement to hang from
^ I don’t get the suicidal connection but this bar was cool

Suicide? Ahr clip kid if I hear that sob season
Nigga life come to a KwikStop & detectives find dawg bleeding
^ this is going over heads but I get the connection. Kwikstop is that powder shit that keeps dogs nails from bleeding if you cut too deep right? It was decent for what it was

My guns on kill streak, blood clots form in groups
I don’t use these arms in vein, so cut yours b4 I shoot
^ wasn’t too clever and you’re beating the suicidal horse to death

I spit game off the top, rope your bitch & give her dick
She hate when you randy, savage…your sex game deader than macho & Elizabeth
^ decent I suppose.

Saint:

wow you beat Sin. & we overlooked punches were really horseshit
somehow shakily moved on up when those swings didn't hit Jack like Wendy Torrance
^ nice!

no-one congratulated your return to write or gave respect to that
last time hands came together for a pin to the pad you lost an armwrestling match
^ okayish I guess

& bae love going topless YELLING: 'put that long D between here'
Rod n Cones; my titty fucks left her eye makeup so smeared she couldn't see clear
^ this was a deep cut that left me perplexed before googling. Didn’t really dig it maybe just me

ima gun butt em there. extension hang lower than rapunzels hair
Neuralink IPO.. leave part of the stock in ya brain so big Elon Musk would share
^ this was dope

Ahirman is on the right track, he came out swinging but 6/8 of his lines were focused on the same thing that I think is kind of a deep cut personal in the first place to people like me that don’t know INF’s depression issues. Nonetheless, I think had he spread his attacks right he would have won but INF had more variety and some harder hits. So I’ll give it to him

V/Saint

[Resin M-I-C]

wendy torrence was tight
armwrestling ok
didnt like cones
closer was cool

vs

fucked with beam, nice
kwikstop is a convenience store for me, didnt get it
vein is simple
closer was just decent, inf was a doc savage? lol



yeah there were some wording issues on both parts but Saint took it.. 2-1 on lines i liked, ahriman hung tough was feelin that opener but fell off after that

v saint

[NYCSPITZ]

wow you beat Sin. & we overlooked punches were really horseshit
somehow shakily moved on up when those swings didn't hit Jack like Wendy Torrance
This was fire, I love stephen king/Stanley K. like I’d fuck him
no-one congratulated your return to write or gave respect to that
last time hands came together for a pin to the pad you lost an armwrestling match
Seems soft. Armwrestling? Clever wording though
& bae love going topless YELLING: 'put that long D between here'
Rod n Cones; my titty fucks left her eye makeup so smeared she couldn't see clear
Very funny, titty fucking aha, rod and cones LOL, rod and cones must also be references to ppl I don’t know! 7.8/10
ima gun butt em there. extension hang lower than rapunzels hair
Neuralink IPO.. leave part of the stock in ya brain so big Elon Musk would share
Slick concept, could have been worded better

Ahriman

Say you bust gats with lasers, stop the gang front!
Only beam on your mind is in your basement to hang from
pretty dope nice beam flip
Suicide? Ahr clip kid if I hear that sob season
Nigga life come to a KwikStop & detectives find dawg bleeding
Not sure what kwik stop is and I’m not gonna google it. 4/10
My guns on kill streak, blood clots form in groups
I don’t use these arms in vein, so cut yours b4 I shoot
Played
I spit game off the top, rope your bitch & give her dick
She hate when you randy, savage…your sex game deader than macho & Elizabeth
No


V/ Saint