Dominate vs NYCSPITZ - DOM WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 2

Due Thursday, July7th at Midnight PST

Minimum - 8 lines
Max - 12 lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

Dominate NYCSPITZ

[Dominate]

G'day mate.

[NYCSPITZ]

Hello

[NYCSPITZ]

I’ll take an ext my fren

[Dominate]

Works for me

[Dominate]

This guy?

I gave him a list of personals but his writing is obvious dookie
If some shit I brought up goes far w/ Spits, it’s cuz I’m hocking a loogie
Lost a topical to the warthog. Four-zero. Wowsers dude.
Y’all went toe to toe w/ rhymes and that little piggy went to town on you
Act like women like you but your methods are shady and sinister
If a girl is well disposed to you, you hid the body after raping and killing her
One minute in your topical league and I got props that’s bigger than you
Step here and I’m a strict parent: you can get spanked w/ this Discipline too

[NYCSPITZ]

Look

No showed me in the aowl, i thought this guy was a vet…
Had him sooo shook he ducked HARD - you’d think he felt a seismic event
It makes sense that killed u. We all think u should retire
When the semi spit, this Aussie got way too close to that ring of fire
He fondles students, baits em w grades…so this herb is done to me.
I mean those marks ain’t even real anymore like German currency
Traumatizes them w his dick. Whole class calls genitals “dominate places”
No Saw I turn molesters into jigsaw puzzles, police’ll find dom in eight places

[evaD]

NYC was pretty good but Dom was just a level above here. Well disposed and discipline cool concepts and loogie a good name play all worded nicely too.

Vote Dom

[Saint]

I gave him a list of personals but his writing is obvious dookie
If some shit I brought up goes far w/ Spits, it’s cuz I’m hocking a loogie
Ha.. reminds me of my spit line @rb. Liked what you did here setting it up.
Lost a topical to the warthog. Four-zero. Wowsers dude.
Y’all went toe to toe w/ rhymes and that little piggy went to town on you
I didn't this one much at first. It grew on me, still ok
Act like women like you but your methods are shady and sinister
If a girl is well disposed to you, you hid the body after raping and killing her
Well executed. Coo
One minute in your topical league and I got props that’s bigger than you
Step here and I’m a strict parent: you can get spanked w/ this Discipline too
Well for a personal, I don't follow the aowl but I Iiked the personal angle flip

No showed me in the aowl, i thought this guy was a vet…
Had him sooo shook he ducked HARD - you’d think he felt a seismic event
Ha, thought it was slick
It makes sense that killed u. We all think u should retire
When the semi spit, this Aussie got way too close to that ring of fire
Aight, bit basic here
He fondles students, baits em w grades…so this herb is done to me.
I mean those marks ain’t even real anymore like German currency
Been done, I saw what you did w the teaching angle.. so it helped
Traumatizes them w his dick. Whole class calls genitals “dominate places”
No Saw I turn molesters into jigsaw puzzles, police’ll find dom in eight places
These plays been done on Dom..your flip wasn't too origin imo

NYC not a bad showing, Dom was too much here for 8 lines. Vote Dom

[Adverse]

Dom:

I gave him a list of personals but his writing is obvious dookie
If some shit I brought up goes far w/ Spits, it’s cuz I’m hocking a loogie
^ decent, good connection in the set up

Lost a topical to the warthog. Four-zero. Wowsers dude.
Y’all went toe to toe w/ rhymes and that little piggy went to town on you
^ lol this was alright

Act like women like you but your methods are shady and sinister
If a girl is well disposed to you, you hid the body after raping and killing her
^ haha alright I see what you did there

One minute in your topical league and I got props that’s bigger than you
Step here and I’m a strict parent: you can get spanked w/ this Discipline too
^ think I’m missing something here. I get it on a basic level but not if there’s a deeper meaning

NYC:
No showed me in the aowl, i thought this guy was a vet…
Had him sooo shook he ducked HARD - you’d think he felt a seismic event
^ this was decent but not a hard hit by any means

It makes sense that killed u. We all think u should retire
When the semi spit, this Aussie got way too close to that ring of fire
^ the ideas decent feel like there’s probably a better way to word this though?

He fondles students, baits em w grades…so this herb is done to me.
I mean those marks ain’t even real anymore like German currency
^ yeah that’s okay.

Traumatizes them w his dick. Whole class calls genitals “dominate places”
No Saw I turn molesters into jigsaw puzzles, police’ll find dom in eight places
^ this was a decent flip but I think the set up was kind of meh. Punch isn’t exactly something new

Dom outboxed NYC here, don’t think Spitz is a bad battler but you can see that he’s out of his element a bit here. Like coming from strictly topical writing it’s hard to know exactly how to word shit to have the strongest impact but as I’ve been told a hundred times you’ve got to go for blood, make your lines sting, sometimes a clever reference isn’t enough. You got to hurt em. Decent battle fellas

V/ Dominate

[NYCSPITZ]

This guy?

I gave him a list of personals but his writing is obvious dookie
If some shit I brought up goes far w/ Spits, it’s cuz I’m hocking a loogie
Played
Lost a topical to the warthog. Four-zero. Wowsers dude.
Y’all went toe to toe w/ rhymes and that little piggy went to town on you
Y’all think this is dope? LOL
Act like women like you but your methods are shady and sinister
If a girl is well disposed to you, you hid the body after raping and killing her
This was fire
One minute in your topical league and I got props that’s bigger than you
Step here and I’m a strict parent: you can get spanked w/ this Discipline too
Honestly not feeling

No showed me in the aowl, i thought this guy was a vet…
Had him sooo shook he ducked HARD - you’d think he felt a seismic event
Absolute fire…
It makes sense that killed u. We all think u should retire
When the semi spit, this Aussie got way too close to that ring of fire
not feeling
He fondles students, baits em w grades…so this herb is done to me.
I mean those marks ain’t even real anymore like German currency
This was dope as fuck
Traumatizes them w his dick. Whole class calls genitals “dominate places”
No Saw I turn molesters into jigsaw puzzles, police’ll find dom in eight places
Literally swooned at how sexy this bar is

V/ NYC easily

[Resin M-I-C]

spit was corny to me
toe to toe was solid
well disposed, really like it.. my typa line, clever
discipline ok

vs

seismic was ok at best
ring of fire felt like just a statement
german was cool
another statementish line

nyc wasnt bad at all.. i liked some concepts but i’m all for cleverness and redirection.. Dom had lotb and did his thing

v dom