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Sharp
07-25-2022, 09:22 PM
Netcees SOL Season II
Week 5

Due Thursday, July 28th at Midnight PST

Minimum: 8 Lines
Maximum: 12 Lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
You MUST check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls
CtrlF4 Incredible

Incredible
07-25-2022, 10:14 PM
10-12

Incredible
07-28-2022, 07:20 PM
Was going 10 but he probably won't show so here's 8


He said "I was Holding it down" when its just the nickname he was given
Turns out NC no different than prison, from A block - D block he wasn't known for spittin
Rittenhouse his fam, turn the chants to screams
litter out this clip, AK all custom, this an active shooter scene
I'm miles ahead of this clown and that's nothin but facts
"Ran the yard" yeah ok pussy, we know you was just runnin up laps
Talk all this tough shit but ur named after a computer shortcut...just stop it
I push ctrl w/ the shotty no alt but to delete him, Task manager reads "end his whole process"

Wanderer
07-29-2022, 12:26 PM
Inc

First bar was cool (don’t know if dude’s actually been to prison but if he has, makes it nicer)
I honestly don’t get the second bar
Wasn’t feeling ran the yard
Can see the potential in the whole ctrl alt delete thing but it’s a tad cliche and was too choppy for the execution to come off

Opener was your best,

Shame about the no show
Keep doing your thing

Adverse
07-29-2022, 11:20 PM
I remember incredible as having dope concepts but not executing them, was definitely the case here, opener was decent, the middle bars weren’t great and closer had potential but Is really low hanging fruit that’s probably been done a dozen times .

That being said, a W is a W so good looks on that

Sharp
07-31-2022, 10:28 AM
Opener is wild. Idk if you were here for finding his mugshot, researched it in discussion, or just guessed right, but it's a great personal. The second bar is confusing. I feel like that's the kind of bar to someone else ahead of time like 'does this work'. Ran the block is really basic and I believe has been done. Can't remember a specific instance so I won't say for sure. I think the closer was cool. Ambitious, execution def needed some more work

Solid NS verse. I'm not looking to harp on wording issues cause it sounds like you knew he was no showing. Concepts are generally cool. Looking forward to you getting an opponent who shows