Champ Match: Dominate vs Dave - DOMINATE WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 7

Due Thursday, August 11th at Midnight PST

Minimum: 10 Lines
Maximum: 14 Lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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Dominate evaD

[Dominate]

G/luck man

[evaD]

G’day dommo

[Sharp]

Dominate I have 12 from Dave

[Dominate]

Cool cool. Lemme get an 8hr ext. Deadline is 5pm Friday for me which is a bit awkward.

[Dominate]

Fuck text I’m catchin bodies and leavin em in vacants
You’re here to cement your place in the playoffs.. I’m here to cement your place beneath my basement

Nothing but trash that ur flexin’… But I had to laugh at that mention -
I nicknamed your bitch cement - found her wet, put a hand in & left a lasting impression
I’d never seen a wider snatch … like she allowed five guys at a time to smash
Had trains run through that British tunnel. Now she spread her legs like “Mind The Gap”
Pull up next to you in the whip... The crew got got 4s to unload
My dogs sweeping your car - you get sent to the other side like border control
Anyone I’m in a bout with, I’ll outwit. You should sense the danger & leave
Bro my bars the same as your mouth is – realllll creative angles with teeth
And I killed you in our last match. You can’t STILL think your writing is tight
With that approach, Ima ring your bell again... At this point it’s like riding a bike
Got the Uzi for your bitch ass. Trigger squeezing, heat pop
Keep acting Camp David... Ima let that Middle Eastern Piece Talk

[Sharp]

Dave's Verse

I’m like Rocky in a movie when the vodkas runnin through me
So this Aussie boot-licker’s getting smashed without me offering a shooey
If he discussing his gat we know he’s just bluffing the facts
When his shit hit hardest it’s like mr marcus - fuckin nothing but cap
Im rolling out in the SUV if I’m gonna be cruising with friends
When This bogan ride in the Ute.. he’s been fuckin his students again..
Hot tub and spa days for Dave’s wife, it doesn’t phase you when you paid right
Dom and his girl pool together too: for a McDonald’s saver menu date night
So try and dress it up - you ain’t fuckin with the reaper
Cinderella story: I’ll see you at midnight when things get ugly with this sweeper
Im feelin like a vulture in this league, picking off these losers is tragic
If Dominate circle prey from above that’s just his view from the casket



RIP Dominate, Lou Carpenter, Merv Hughes, Gary Ablett & Rolf Harris

[Hush]

Good battle


Dom opener was good
Cement was fire
Border control was good but the setup had a typo or a error


Not my fav Dave first and he usually in my top 3 to read

McDonald’s and casket was cool but nothing woo,d me



V dom

[Sinacog]

GOOD BATTLE..

/DOMINATE

[Adverse]

Dominate:
Nothing but trash that ur flexin’… But I had to laugh at that mention -
I nicknamed your bitch cement - found her wet, put a hand in & left a lasting impression
^ dope flip here bro

I’d never seen a wider snatch … like she allowed five guys at a time to smash
Had trains run through that British tunnel. Now she spread her legs like “Mind The Gap”
^ lol this was good

Pull up next to you in the whip... The crew got got 4s to unload
My dogs sweeping your car - you get sent to the other side like border control
^ alright here. See the concept but felt like it could use some retweaking I guess?

Anyone I’m in a bout with, I’ll outwit. You should sense the danger & leave
Bro my bars the same as your mouth is – realllll creative angles with teeth
^ lmao I fucked with this

And I killed you in our last match. You can’t STILL think your writing is tight
With that approach, Ima ring your bell again... At this point it’s like riding a bike
^ decent to me.

Got the Uzi for your bitch ass. Trigger squeezing, heat pop
Keep acting Camp David... Ima let that Middle Eastern Piece Talk
^ decent had to Google

Dave:
I’m like Rocky in a movie when the vodkas runnin through me
So this Aussie boot-licker’s getting smashed without me offering a shooey
^ connection was okay but was something an American audience isn’t really going to know without googling

If he discussing his gat we know he’s just bluffing the facts
When his shit hit hardest it’s like mr marcus - fuckin nothing but cap
^ this is one I hate to admit that I get lol I’m not sure if everyone will know though. Decent connection


Im rolling out in the SUV if I’m gonna be cruising with friends
When This bogan ride in the Ute.. he’s been fuckin his students again..
^ lol alright decent

Hot tub and spa days for Dave’s wife, it doesn’t phase you when you paid right
Dom and his girl pool together too: for a McDonald’s saver menu date night
^ lol nice bro

So try and dress it up - you ain’t fuckin with the reaper
Cinderella story: I’ll see you at midnight when things get ugly with this sweeper
^ cool connection

Im feelin like a vulture in this league, picking off these losers is tragic
If Dominate circle prey from above that’s just his view from the casket
^ this was alright imo not the most vicious closer but serviceable

Overall thought there was a lot of good lines exchanged here, Dave was a little more flamboyant with concepts than I thought he would be. I guess the audience could always Google the reference, but I’m not sure how they’d feel about it. Overall Dom was just cleaner and hit harder so he gets my vote

V/Dom

[Wanderer]

Dom

Feeling this whole verse..
First 2 bars were great. Cement was dope as was mine the gap. The bad teeth/british angle gets kinda old but delivered too well not to enjoy. Everything else was decent & hit

Dave

I love me a Dave verse but Preferred some of your previous ones this season which is a shame as this was a champ match. U still came swinging with Cinderella story and your closer was cool too.

Overall, Dom gets my vote

[Blue Bayou]

Cool battle friends .. fun read

Cement flip was dope... and I think it was smart to attack this because it was Dave's only subpar bar last week
Train / tunnel was funny and delivered well
The gun bars were cool concepts
Lol teeth punch was a cool fresh twist on the concept
Camp David is fire to me

Vs

Opener cool concept worded well
Mr Marcus cool
I'm sorry man I don't get this third
Pool together lol my kind of bar... jokes
Cinderella okay
Closer ehh


Dom took this one for me props to both

[Fracture]

Dave’s intro was clever and well written, he took some risk throughout the verse and I didn’t think it paid off this time. Cinderella was cool, and closer was good but the wording in the punch felt off for me


Kind of opposite with doms verse. I wasn’t big on his opening bars, but creative angle, ringing your bell again were Heat and the closer banged

Good battle. I fully expect Dave to hit the creative stride he’s become known for in the playoffs, but as for this one


Vote Dom

[evaD]

Congrats Dom verse was fire start to finish especially closer