2. evaD vs 7. Wanderer - DAVE WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees SOL Season II
Playoffs Round 1

Due Friday, August 19th at Midnight PST

Minimum: 8 Lines
Maximum: 12 Lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
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Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls
evaD Wanderer

[Ghost1]

checking in for my battle with wanderer

[Dominate]

Check

[Sharp]

evaD I have 8 from Wanderer

[evaD]

Ext

[evaD]

Is Resin actually showing or what?


SQU SQU SQU SQU

Playoffs supposed to be elite, I’m surprised this shook clown has lasted
Even his best quips read like vet trips - every put down is tragic
Get took out with the magic; my circle have him crying in despair
Deathly hallows 2: when we reach for Draco’s Wand flying through the air
With some original content he could go far. It’s an incredible dream
But he’s the Alex Jones of rapping clones - all his texts already been seen
Writing a verse gives me a thirst - hit 7-11 then back to disgracing these neeks
This tasteless geek only came out with a Big Gulp when he saw who he was facing this week

[Sharp]

Wanderer's Verse

Beat User but copied his flair.. u two make an adorable pair
Got lucky taking his scalp.. all u ever wanted was a lock of his hair
& ya final odds - 1 in 20 million..? but we still fuckin’ get our thrills in
That ozzy heavyweight squeezed the life outta u worse than a hug from Rebel Wilson
So lose that false confidence or u bound to fuck it up, please..
u been put back in ya place more times than an OCD sufferer’s keys
If u act cagey & shifty that heavy round’s penetrating u swiftly
Chappelle show alternate ending.. there’s no way Dave walks away from this .50

[Adverse]

Dave:
Playoffs supposed to be elite, I’m surprised this shook clown has lasted
Even his best quips read like vet trips - every put down is tragic
^ nice connection here man. Good opener

Get took out with the magic; my circle have him crying in despair
Deathly hallows 2: when we reach for Draco’s Wand flying through the air
^ Harry Potter clips have been done to death on Wand but I feel like this was a cool enough one to make it fresh with the dracos piece, not a heavy hitter though

With some original content he could go far. It’s an incredible dream
But he’s the Alex Jones of rapping clones - all his texts already been seen
^ had to Google but this was nice.

Writing a verse gives me a thirst - hit 7-11 then back to disgracing these neeks
This tasteless geek only came out with a Big Gulp when he saw who he was facing this week
^ okay for me here

Wand:
Beat User but copied his flair.. u two make an adorable pair
Got lucky taking his scalp.. all u ever wanted was a lock of his hair
^ I get it and it was cool for what it was but wasn’t crazy by any means

& ya final odds - 1 in 20 million..? but we still fuckin’ get our thrills in
That ozzy heavyweight squeezed the life outta u worse than a hug from Rebel Wilson
^ believe this is referring to Dom beating him, thought the execution was a little off but i do like the rebel Wilson hug aspect of it

So lose that false confidence or u bound to fuck it up, please..
u been put back in ya place more times than an OCD sufferer’s keys
^ this was cool

If u act cagey & shifty that heavy round’s penetrating u swiftly
Chappelle show alternate ending.. there’s no way Dave walks away from this .50
^ thought this was your best line. Maybe even LOTB

This was a little closer than I expected and Wand’s last four were pretty decent but I felt like he stumbled coming out of the gates. Dave had nothing insane but his swagger and consistency carried him here and he took care of business

V/Dave

[Dominate]

Nice battle guys. Props on having the only real battle this round haha.

Is Resin actually showing or what?


SQU SQU SQU SQU

Playoffs supposed to be elite, I’m surprised this shook clown has lasted
Even his best quips read like vet trips - every put down is tragic
Solid
Get took out with the magic; my circle have him crying in despair
Deathly hallows 2: when we reach for Draco’s Wand flying through the air
its OK. Seen the Draco wp before. With the Wand flip it’s alright (I’m sure Wand name flips are done but I haven’t seen one personally).
With some original content he could go far. It’s an incredible dream
But he’s the Alex Jones of rapping clones - all his texts already been seen
OK current event line here
Writing a verse gives me a thirst - hit 7-11 then back to disgracing these neeks
This tasteless geek only came out with a Big Gulp when he saw who he was facing this week
@Blue Bayou did this wp already, because of course he did. You know that South Park episode with “Simpsons did it! Simpsons did it!”? It’s the equivalent of that with wordplays lol. HOWEVER, I liked how you flipped it better - the punch still hits to me. What’s a neek though?

Wanderer's Verse

Beat User but copied his flair.. u two make an adorable pair
Got lucky taking his scalp.. all u ever wanted was a lock of his hair
I didn’t like this that much on first read but it’s grown on me bc getting a lock of hair would be like a bad scalping job actually. This was cool, and set up/worded well
& ya final odds - 1 in 20 million..? but we still fuckin’ get our thrills in
That ozzy heavyweight squeezed the life outta u worse than a hug from Rebel Wilson
this was cool, creative flip. I think it could have hit harder with a set up that was more like… super disrespectful trash taking his verse last week. That would also set up the second line better conceptually
So lose that false confidence or u bound to fuck it up, please..
u been put back in ya place more times than an OCD sufferer’s keys
lol, liked this
If u act cagey & shifty that heavy round’s penetrating u swiftly
Chappelle show alternate ending.. there’s no way Dave walks away from this .50
Cool nameflip here. Probably Chappelle flips are done on him but I haven’t seen one. Cancels out with the Wand bar Dave had


Really close to me. I’m gonna have to let it sit with me for a bit. Sorry guys! I’ll be back.

[Dominate]

Ok, I’m back.

I’m voting for Wanderer. Liked the OCD keys line the most and maybe slightly preferred the Chappelle one to the Draco one. Really tough call though.

[Resin M-I-C]

vet trips is aight
seen these draco potter bars, still ok
alex jones aight
solid big gulp, had doms phew bar feel


vs

scalp ok
is dom fat? cuz rebel wilson skinny now right, it was ehh
man that ocd concept is fire, execution was ok tho
closer was aight



it is close, for me it was ocd vs big gulp.. like i said execution coulda made that ocd line a true banger and prob put wand over the top.. next best lines i think the alex jones was just slightly better than 50 closer

could go either way but

v dave

[Ghost1]

Is Resin actually showing or what?


SQU SQU SQU SQU

WIGGLE WIGGLE SQUUUUU

Playoffs supposed to be elite, I’m surprised this shook clown has lasted
Even his best quips read like vet trips - every put down is tragic

oh ur actually good? ok ok

Get took out with the magic; my circle have him crying in despair
Deathly hallows 2: when we reach for Draco’s Wand flying through the air

oh word ur wack

With some original content he could go far. It’s an incredible dream
But he’s the Alex Jones of rapping clones - all his texts already been seen

dece, like it

Writing a verse gives me a thirst - hit 7-11 then back to disgracing these neeks
This tasteless geek only came out with a Big Gulp when he saw who he was facing this week

wat in the fuck lmaooooo



Wanderer's Verse

Beat User but copied his flair.. u two make an adorable pair
Got lucky taking his scalp.. all u ever wanted was a lock of his hair

harold

& ya final odds - 1 in 20 million..? but we still fuckin’ get our thrills in
That ozzy heavyweight squeezed the life outta u worse than a hug from Rebel Wilson

she lost wild weight. punch was meh regardless.

So lose that false confidence or u bound to fuck it up, please..
u been put back in ya place more times than an OCD sufferer’s keys

concepts there wordings trash

If u act cagey & shifty that heavy round’s penetrating u swiftly
Chappelle show alternate ending.. there’s no way Dave walks away from this .50

little better. wording still sucks.



I got dave here with squ squ squ and I liked when he flexed for disgracing neeks.

v dave

[Sharp]

Can elaborate if needed but I have dave with one more bar I liked. His opener was lotb. Really fucked with Wanderers verse especially the closer, shit is close for me

V/dave

[Mac]

Playoffs supposed to be elite, I’m surprised this shook clown has lasted
Even his best quips read like vet trips - every put down is tragic
With some original content he could go far. It’s an incredible dream
But he’s the Alex Jones of rapping clones - all his texts already been seen

vs

Beat User but copied his flair.. u two make an adorable pair
Got lucky taking his scalp.. all u ever wanted was a lock of his hair
If u act cagey & shifty that heavy round’s penetrating u swiftly
Chappelle show alternate ending.. there’s no way Dave walks away from this .50

I got dave here. when it comes to a close battle I feel like I liked dave's misses more. good shit tho