XI WK 1: Sinacog (0-0) vs. Cereal (0-0) (CEREAL WINS)

[Frank]

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Season 11 XI


VERSES: Thursday, December, 1st, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 24 Hour Ext: Mod/Opponent Discretion

VOTES: Sunday, December, 4th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 3 Vote Requirement Enforced/Penalty

MAXIMUM: 48 Lines: 64 IF AGREED UPON!

Goodluck! Sinacog Cereal

TOPIC:http://media2.giphy.com/media/cmHIuUripuRrpzutQt/giphy.gif?cid=ecf05e47gxu7nxmu38ye5gdj6ewvpxlkme4c xiahlis115rq&rid=giphy.gif&ct=g

[Cereal]

check in

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TKZVUtvjBdM

[Sinacog]

THE PRINCE OF EGYPT

INcoherent as thieves in the night -- shinning bright
ALABASTER STONE THE CHROME THIEF AZONE THIEF
I am moses -- baby first born were slaughtered with the serpent
THE SERPENT OF EDEN -- ascursed as demon
I am nothing but bone and flesh -- mahagony wood
SOLEMN AND GOOD -- the hook of what could
I play with snakes and serpents in the area of slaves
DARE YOU TO BE BRAVE when the pharoah has waved
I am the secod coming of christ -- not RAMSES
DAM THIEF -- I come from the sphinx shattered nose
BATTLE PROSE AD LIHGTING -- ENTICIG
Battlig demi-gods and ghosts -- battling goes
I am the night/knight in shinning armor -- battling karma
BATTLING STRONGER -- cattle and armor
I am the ECHELON THIEF -- ESSENCE STRONG SERENE
THE BATTLE DRAGON KILLING SERPENTS IN THE DESSERT --
I am ORGAIZED KONFUSION -- MORTIFIED ILLUSION --
I AM THE DENSE GOD -- INTENSE FOG
FOR WHO AM I but -- MOSES THE PRINCE OF EGYPT
A HEBREW GOD!?? SEA THROUGH FOG
I MURDERED RAMSES WITH FIRE AND BRIMESTOE!?? WATER
WATER WILL SLAUGHTER THE BLACK BOOK OF AQUA..

[Cereal]

the hip hop jungle bunny

..

One step to the right and one jump to the left
The pride lands divide in the silence of its breath
Two friends now foes exchange blows for their own rep
Exposed the bi stander hops to their safety net
To stay or go, once they home with coverage
Dusting off the shrubage like lovers
By the watering hole they ponder all things
Who will survivor this twisted battle in which springs
Brings.. brrring.. the water ripples - the rock still shrieks
Natures call as the olympians break for a feast

its a story as old as tyme..
A copper coin worth the lyme
disease verses props ducking the true meaning of life
to proove who is more dominant in the nigger field - made of men and mice
the fighters subsides
one dies
the day is long but it goes on..

as an unsung song of valor
the nights sun sung the peanut palor clamers

sports in general is a spectacle for the oysters and no more - and should be watch from afar

as it eats my last jaffar - thinking why did i do it to myself - im such a silly gallah

[Quill]

Vote - Cereal

Both were horrible pretty underwhelming. The only thing I can honestly give credit for is that Cereal stayed on topic for the first few lines. In that sense, he was less bad?

[Master Rock]

Cereal for obviously reasons Sinacog went on another tangent of irrelevancy to the topic. Candy opened up straight on the topic making the visuals come alive. This was an easy win he didn't even need to try. Sin I hope you step up your game and quit with the nonsense. I know you just want to write but at least try to write to the topic in some kind of way that at least resonates or connects to the topic somehow.

[Dope girl]

Both vs need work
Both vs not strong enough

Vote- Cereal

[brokenhal0]

THE SERPENT OF EDEN -- ascursed as demon
I am nothing but bone and flesh -- mahagony wood
SOLEMN AND GOOD -- the hook of what could
I play with snakes and serpents in the area of slaves

vs

its a story as old as tyme..
A copper coin worth the lyme
disease verses props ducking the true meaning of life
to proove who is more dominant in the nigger field


i consider these entity's as equals.. they both got skills
sometimes i think they are the same person'' sinacog cereal and candy''
they are like a brain a form of ''krang'' that being said
even tho many readers get frustrated by there lack of coherence to a story driven narrative///both these writers are dope-- i call a TIE
but since a vote is necessary - CereAL GOT IT
cause he brought more imagery in terms of conceptual tie-in to the picture


mvgt- cereal

[Frank]

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