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Frank
01-21-2023, 06:50 PM
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Season 11 XI


VERSES: Friday, January, 27th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 24 Hour Ext: Mod/Opponent Discretion

VOTES: Monday, January 30th, 11:59 P.M. Western / 2:59 A.M. Eastern / 7:59 A.M. UK. 3 Vote Requirement Enforced/Penalty

MAXIMUM: 48 Lines: 64 IF AGREED UPON!

Goodluck! ACTIVATE SELF Pharaohs Army

TOPIC:

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Pharaohs Army
01-29-2023, 12:22 AM
(Been told I’m)dark and aggressive.
hardly guessing,so let’s start with the lesson(s),
pardon the question,harbor my message,
stark & i'm edgy
diligent w/ my art ‘n im pesky
smartly investing.
i'm a Writing machine
who fights Mean.
Got a loyal team, every1 w/ a green -laser-beam!

your girls @ a club
Right w/ Me w/a vodka-mixed-Drink.

[I]allegory? had a story answer for me
(this is the) warm up; (it) shor sucked; (na)i am the shore shot
[FIREBOMBED CAR LIKE-
Damage on the scene, ashes on the scene, car-bombed like Danny Green
Irish mobsters. Car bombing. Carburetor. car next to ya.cya lata.
(Car)Starter / ignition/ (put the) switch 'n (mercury), ignite the piston, for the spark-fer thee explosion
(‘ta)endtha snitchin
bitchin bout a loan ‘e Owed-me/
only the cash he gave was phony that’s why he’s ashes
expulsion/ emcees givme revulsion
&This ain’t Cleveland but we’ll blow you up, outside tha cluub. With a bomb - or a gun...


These days I walk around in a Manic Phase.
Happy days (Passive gains)-I hope Things Don’t Change!
(I will not stand 4these micro aggressions.
Got me stressin' -w/ my Hand on my weapon!
Rap is tha essence, [SO]-
I’m ambitious. Kick it. Hit it.
I’m not Bad 4an amateur!
Not the same.(I’m)On top-of-my-game.
My place at the front is firmly in place. But you’ve made me irate. Until I tear up the place. No more smile on your face.
Maybe you’ll say
- that I Copied Say Drilly,
but I’m sui-cidal if ‘e Wants ‘e can Kill me.
(‘Cuz)’m on the Track w/ Willie & Sharif…we got tha MacMille countin’sheep - (so) we don’t Fall asleep (so) ifya Act Silly? - ya Can’t Kill me!
Choppers .357s all over West Philly.
Code 'a the Streets
-You cheat!where’d ya Get that Beat?!
What a feat.
It’s complete - when we eat. With the heat - we will creep.
Make-a-Hit; Taylor Swift!
Make-a-Hit;Taylor Swift!
…Roll sticky w/ Nicki. Poursome bacardi w/ Cardi
’s How-we start the-party.
Winnin’ like Lombardi, ‘n neva sayin’ sorry!

We pick it. We choose it.
We listen to music.
So re-examine this. Fathom this. Put ’n asterisk.
“It’s Masochism,for a math’matician”*,but you have’ta listen,cuz i had a vision..
Ta make a Rap Track 4 Fast Stacks. Buy shit w/ Cash App cuz my Lines ‘r like Anthrax!

I’m a Top Tier rapper droppin’ tracks this year
‘n the year after! - w/higher standards.
I’m a unicorn. With symbolic texts that date back taCuneiform.
Soldiers in uniform, ready fer Duty-‘n the morn’…
Combine some Dance, w/ New Rap, & Boom-bap.
Move back;
Last second adjustments
4-any1 who’s frontin it’s the Lead that I’m Dumpin’
Her First Born;she didn’t know’e started Turf Wars—[Ain’t that Somethin’!]
-
Adds Up ta Bad Luck.
Get your Cash Up -‘n drop bars on the next Mash-up.
Make-a-Hit; Taylor Swift!
Make-a-Hit;Taylor Swift!
[mainSTREAM- make-me Sick!]

…Roll sticky w/ Nicki. Poursome bacardi w/ Cardi
’s How-we start the-party.
Winnin’like Lombardi - ‘n neva sayin’ sorry!

*Chaos

Frank
01-29-2023, 09:07 AM
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Pharaohs Army
WINS!

Dope girl
01-29-2023, 09:10 AM
This vs was sick

Multies illy

Flow nicely done

Keep up the good work!

Pharaohs Army
01-29-2023, 01:46 PM
Got a loyal team, every1 w/ a green -laser-beam!

Kill Spree
Rip this written, man.

corleone
This is true audio brotha. Enjoy. Sinacog Neighbor

You guys gonna battle?
Or make up?


Choppers .357s all over West Philly.
Code 'a the Streets
White Earl

Dope girl
Thanks hun. I'm glad you like the gems, when I try. (It's the next track..heh heh.)

big baby peep this man,
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=152388
when you get time. show it to your prose buddies too.
This "article" last week had your influence written all over it BB...But mainly that opener sentence. That's years of seeing your style. (Plus partly influenced by a fellow writer pissing me off&[motivating me]...Enjoy it bud! Or don't?. lol, eitha way. hagd.
Edit:
Oats "sewed the seed" of the idea 6 yrs ago....

brokenhal0
01-30-2023, 08:47 AM
versatility is the key
slick word play ,abstractions,subjections, ...very different
then your usual style it has more charisma then what you normally write
some bars came off a bit '' a.i :ish::'; a few momentum breaks
but I could hear this being recorded enjoyable read slick style of writing ..