Week 2: Saint (1-0) vs. Defiant (1-0) - SAINT WINS

[Zuo]

Rules

You know the drill.

Due Dates:
Verses this week are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ



Saint Defiant

[Saint]

In 8, 10 at most

[Defiant]

Ext

[Zuo]

Saint Defiant

I swear on everything

[Saint]

Posting 8 soon

[Defiant]

ain't seeing models, never a slim chick you'll call ya wife
If we asked u to trim the fat, you'd be single all ya life
Overrated for fucking ages, shit would bring ya to tears
there isn't just no room for improvement, youve been stuck in that bedsit for years
a gay prick, always men when it's ya sex plan
career isn't just in the rear view, ya do the same when looking for ya next man
Forced wordplay, terrible wording, for fuckin years u been in a fine rut
The way u butcher the language so bad I could slice, dice or leave u as a prime cut

[Saint]

i stay w/

Fam connects: This fatass in bed atta 1,000 pounds
His uplifting support system's a crane & harness to get 'em out the house
Mr sixpack abs vs Mr never seen his dick in ages
spent My Own Summer on beaches....if Deftones up thats on his alt. playlist
You'd fail copying my style. Brooo start taking a lesson
Try'ta mirror a flex it'd be fucking upside down like Patrick Batemans reflection
Scenic on my mansions balcony feeling SO. AT. EASE
only views you take in that're refreshing is on the page of ur OM piece

[Lyfzaa Gamble]

Defiant
ain't seeing models, never a slim chick you'll call ya wife
If we asked u to trim the fat, you'd be single all ya life

Nice opener

Overrated for fucking ages, shit would bring ya to tears
there isn't just no room for improvement, youve been stuck in that bedsit for years

Cool play. Wording could've been a lil better.

a gay prick, always men when it's ya sex plan
career isn't just in the rear view, ya do the same when looking for ya next man

Lol aight.

Forced wordplay, terrible wording, for fuckin years u been in a fine rut
The way u butcher the language so bad I could slice, dice or leave u as a prime cut

Nice closer.

Overall pretty solid verse.

Saint

i stay w/

Fam connects: This fatass in bed atta 1,000 pounds
His uplifting support system's a crane & harness to get 'em out the house

Lol okay cool opener.

Mr sixpack abs vs Mr never seen his dick in ages
spent My Own Summer on beaches....if Deftones up thats on his alt. playlist

Nice nameplay.

You'd fail copying my style. Brooo start taking a lesson
Try'ta mirror a flex it'd be fucking upside down like Patrick Batemans reflection

Very creative. Delivery was okay.

Scenic on my mansions balcony feeling SO. AT. EASE
only views you take in that're refreshing is on the page of ur OM piece

Good personal. Solid close.

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Overall pretty solid battle, tough decision here as I feel both were good and lacked in certain areas. Gonn a be a toss up here, but I gotta re read it and come back and make a final decision.

Think Saint might've edged this one but great battle fellas.

V- Saint

[Zuo]

ain't seeing models, never a slim chick you'll call ya wife
If we asked u to trim the fat, you'd be single all ya life
nah man
Overrated for fucking ages, shit would bring ya to tears
there isn't just no room for improvement, youve been stuck in that bedsit for years
hmm I’m not sure I’m feelin it
a gay prick, always men when it's ya sex plan
career isn't just in the rear view, ya do the same when looking for ya next man
another miss for me
Forced wordplay, terrible wording, for fuckin years u been in a fine rut
The way u butcher the language so bad I could slice, dice or leave u as a prime cut
I’ll just say it’s decent


Vs


i stay w/

Fam connects: This fatass in bed atta 1,000 pounds
His uplifting support system's a crane & harness to get 'em out the house
lol nice
Mr sixpack abs vs Mr never seen his dick in ages
spent My Own Summer on beaches....if Deftones up thats on his alt. playlist
this was pretty slick
You'd fail copying my style. Brooo start taking a lesson
Try'ta mirror a flex it'd be fucking upside down like Patrick Batemans reflection
nah
Scenic on my mansions balcony feeling SO. AT. EASE
only views you take in that're refreshing is on the page of ur OM piece
decent at best


Props to both for showing up, wasn’t sure if that was gonna happen or not but I’m glad it did. Defiant I don’t think this was the strongest showing from you, I’ve seen you drop better material. It’s your first verse in a while though, shake off some rust is all. Saint had two good lines in this battle and easily sealed the win imo.


Vote Saint

[Ryno]

Prime cut was pretty cool from Def.
Alil underwhelming on some ideas though.

Uplifting and OM piece were the standouts from Saint.
Even the things I didn’t quote were put together & delivered alil better

Decent lil read

V. Saint

[Pharaohs Army]

initial instinct had me really wanting to say it's a tie. next. because

defiant even if he's rusty
certainly swung hard enough here to challenge saint's usually quality dropz, as this is

but fuck a tie - i really enjoy both and it's a different kinda simpleHARD jab-style which I enjoy after reading other ppls more flowery multis

really love the {sigh} Simple Smoothness on these punches of both but
u know the tie-breaker is just SLIGHTLY MORE DEGREE OF DIFFICULTY ON SAINT'S END RHYMES, i mean both flowed fine I just felt like Saint required like 5-8% more effort to execute the 8 than Defiant's nice attempt here

thx for drops; gl next wk; Saint by a bit, likely due to experienced/warmed up

interesting that both opened with a Fat-playShame!

[he (saint) woulda loved my long technical breakdowns of dy/blu] alas,
next~

[Blue Bayou]

Trim the fat made me lol
Closer a dece idea

Vs

Saint was pretty consistent here... Deftones was dope, uplifting support system was funny.. american psycho a cool idea and closer hit


Saint takes it props to both

[Zuo]

Saint Wins 5-0