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Zuo
04-30-2023, 09:45 PM
Rules

You know the drill.

Due Dates:
Verses this week are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ


Blue Bayou Diablo

Diablo
05-01-2023, 02:43 AM
Sup, Jetson Maid?

Blue Bayou
05-01-2023, 10:37 AM
Nice of you to flip my put on a clinic and dark passenger concepts

What are we thinking?

Diablo
05-02-2023, 12:58 PM
Answer vs Neighbor:

It's bitch season; creep in ur house; Where's the TEC's you keep speaking about?
Rosie Jetson.. Your whole chest gettin opened up once the sweeper comes out

Blue Bayou vs Dynamicz last week:

you're facing certain death and it is hopeless
Jetsons Maid...when the Sweeper Comes Out your Chest is getting Opened


lmao can’t believe that this faggot bit just to seal the Dynamicz win
this moron a legend? rhetorical question - bitch u shouldn’t have needed to Answer it
You have a kid too, teaching ‘em bitings acceptable makes you a horrible dad
ur kid lifts arms to be picked up. bitch if I lift arms, his 1st birthday gon be his last
NBL plus toddler stress as well? bruh, you must to be shattered
all the crying, wailing and sleepless nights. & that’s just every time you lose when it matters
Fuck you and your faggot son. Blue Da 4’9” truly a loser
with you parenting takes a back seat cuz ur so short your wife sits you in the booster

Blue Bayou
05-02-2023, 03:23 PM
Lars Lars Lars.....

Lars vs. Pharoah’s Army Week 1
this faggots nutzo, and racist. it’s worse then you think
he hid his dark passenger cuz he could never be seen giving a black person a lift

Blue Bayou vs LARS
your ‘dark passenger’ is a fake evil persona & i’m done w/ the crap
my Dark Passenger is a shooter named Marcus with a gun in his lap


claim you don’t flip my shit, but yet again my sick flows get mimicked
the only Bigger Stretch is the Limo you had to rent just to fit those chicks in it
keep my concepts out your verse next time you write a wack key
Play off these Bars again, you’re Catching Hands after the Flip like a Trapeze
& take your ass to the dentist bro your molars are fried
they’re coated in slime. Tartarus so bad Hades himself keeled over and died
this Brit has got NO hands so a fist-fight is barely a thrill
if i told em "put your Dukes up", he'd post pictures of Harry and Will

Barcotic
05-02-2023, 07:57 PM
Diab
Dope opener
Lift arms had potential but it needed far different wording & another tie-in imo
Next misdirection fell flat. Error in the setup didnt help
Closer is ok. Seen the idea done a handful of x

Blue
Forgot a 'to' before 'fit' and added an extra 's' in the setup, otherwise this would be a cool opener
Trapeze punch is lotb, very dope
Tartarus lol cool
Closer is extremely average, almost under

Vgt bayou

I wish yall took more time with the verses n went max, not min

Wordz AhGod
05-02-2023, 09:15 PM
* opener was nice,
* 1st birthday was cool.. I liked it
* sleepless nights made me laugh
* closer was alright, nothing crazy

vs

* trapeze was a good concept, the wording didn't feel right to me tho

This felt one sided to me. I've never read anything from Diablo before but his verse was pretty consistent and just vibed with me more. Blues verse didn't really stand out too much to me.

v/Diablo

Dope girl
05-03-2023, 06:17 PM
Tough choice
This battle was alright to me, bars could have been better
both closer and opener was nice
I felt like Diablo had better concepts.

Vote-Diablo

Zuo
05-04-2023, 12:57 AM
lmao can’t believe that this faggot bit just to seal the Dynamicz win
this moron a legend? rhetorical question - bitch u shouldn’t have needed to Answer it
a good concept and personal angle here but the wording/execution wasn’t the best, took away from the impact. Decent overall
You have a kid too, teaching ‘em bitings acceptable makes you a horrible dad
ur kid lifts arms to be picked up. bitch if I lift arms, his 1st birthday gon be his last
nah not feelin
NBL plus toddler stress as well? bruh, you must to be shattered
all the crying, wailing and sleepless nights. & that’s just every time you lose when it matters
this was good, I liked this
Fuck you and your faggot son. Blue Da 4’9” truly a loser
with you parenting takes a back seat cuz ur so short your wife sits you in the booster
ok closer, wording hurt a bit


Vs



claim you don’t flip my shit, but yet again my sick flows get mimicked
the only Bigger Stretch is the Limo you had to rent just to fit those chicks in it
ehh decent opener
keep my concepts out your verse next time you write a wack key
Play off these Bars again, you’re Catching Hands after the Flip like a Trapeze
nice here
& take your ass to the dentist bro your molars are fried
they’re coated in slime. Tartarus so bad Hades himself keeled over and died
took me a few mins to get the wordplay but this was pretty cool
this Brit has got NO hands so a fist-fight is barely a thrill
if i told em "put your Dukes up", he'd post pictures of Harry and Will
nah I hated this


Damn this is tough, really close battle. Both had 1 clear miss each but I feel like blue had the heavier hitting bars overall. Like barc said, kind of doing yourselves a disservice by posting the minimum, I think I’m going to increase it to 10 lines to make voting easier. Overall a cool little battle here but I have blue slightly edging it.


Vote Blue Bayou

Zuo
05-04-2023, 12:40 PM
BLUE BAYOU IS DQ’ED FOR EDITING HIS VERSE/CHANGING A BAR AFTER VOTES CAME IN.

DIABLO WINS!