NBL Spotlight Battle: Unfukwitable vs. ill nik-A - OPEN FOR VOTES

[Zuo]

20 Lines Due by Thursday. All votes welcome.

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Unfukwitable ill nik-A

[Unfukwitable]

I’m down lol I ain’t even know we was battlin

[ill nik-A]

Wait. I ain’t sign up to battle lol. Man I just wanted to read some stuff

[ill nik-A]

I’ll post tomorrow

[ill nik-A]

Saw ya video & u sound like u down-south just on flow alone
As in u not a mumble rapper…. words just don’t fully come out due to an extra chromosome
Old jokes expected but u got no shot my mental state’s a weapon
cuz I’m at an age wise enough to know this win is automatic… AK-47
& we know underdogs go to heaven… so u don’t wanna clash
1 punch & ya gender’s questioned… not like the boxer this is more of a chihuahua scratch
This punk is trash. I’ll explain it in sports terms u not fit for this, wit
Ya career’s a flop… imagine Lebron playin soccer & someone near him whiffed on a kick
Don’t need to be hip, my slang’s dated but why the fuck do I need a set up
My shit is tight… sorta like that wardrobe faggots like u made acceptable in ya era
Dumbass switched to audio like ya text’s exactly what the hood needs
Shit is such a Giant mistake… u make Daniel Jones’ pick-sixes look like good reads

[Zuo]

Unfukwitable it’s on you baller.

[Unfukwitable]

Penny pinchin’s a art, got a Cheap-suit for ya dead body when i rip u apart,
& A caskets where “Nik’ll End, I’m” putting my 2cent in from the start.
U and ya Secret society of perverts ain’t gon be safe in NO field ,
I’ll Catch ‘ILL loomin naughty’ thoughts of trafficking & make’em road kill
Champ? They hear ya Bars and meltdown.. against me it’s a burial,
Got the Dirt dimmin light on ya shine but no “one Care-It’s” to Treasure you
Age is nothing but a number bro.

This one’s for the Ages, U act young but got issues w/ cardiac forsure
Even ya Bars are for people 50+ who don’t get Carded at the door
Another one for the Ages?… a compact 9 to leak his scalp
I don’t gotta put two & two together I’m spinnin Ballerina style,
U ain’t decode the message? I said “1,4 Ages?”, the Drake near,
& The Dot w/ The Scope got a Supervision better than Daycare


U ashy with Acne and everything about ya health’s damn pitiful,
So I’ll pamper’em with gunpowder, I’m teachin Self care rituals
Looks like he went 12 so u can cancel this line out as a throwaway fuck it lol

[Unfukwitable]

10 days 0 votes lol

[sral]

Damn, the two of you are rusty for sure.

I effed with Nik's extra chromosome, liked the idea of the AK-47 line but the execution was baddddd. Probably one of the worst I've seen from Nik-A. Chihuahua was meh, needed more, Lebron I wasn't overly keen on, acceptable in your era was okay, not keen on the closer either.

Unfukwitable - I wasn't keen on the opener, Ill Loomin Naughty is so terrible it's almost funny. Yikes. Care-It's / karats? It isn't pronounced like that for me, but I get it. Not the worst, but not the best. Carded at the door was meh, Ballerina style was another absolutely awful line IMHO and doesn't give the impression you think it would. It makes you sound gay lmao. Daycare was meh. Pamper 'em with gunpowder was a nope from me too.

Not a lot to like, really, but Un had more I definitely thought were huge misses.

I got Nik-A

[xDimand Emreldx]

Ill nik-a's Platnum Lines:
1.) As in u not a mumble rapper…. words just don’t fully come out due to an extra chromosome
2.) My shit is tight… sorta like that wardrobe faggots like u made acceptable in ya era


Unfuckwitable's Platnum Lines:
1.) & A caskets where “Nik’ll End, I’m” putting my 2cent in from the start.
2.) I don’t gotta put two & two together I’m spinnin Ballerina style



Vote: Unfuckwitable


Dimand Emreld Comment:
I need a Beer.
I know there is something out there.
I must keep SEEKING.
I can't queef.

[fraze]

Saw ya video & u sound like u down-south just on flow alone
As in u not a mumble rapper…. words just don’t fully come out due to an extra chromosome
nice concept. flow is a lil choppy but still cool
Old jokes expected but u got no shot my mental state’s a weapon
cuz I’m at an age wise enough to know this win is automatic… AK-47
swag bar but not worded amazing
& we know underdogs go to heaven… so u don’t wanna clash
1 punch & ya gender’s questioned… not like the boxer this is more of a chihuahua scratch
didn't like this
This punk is trash. I’ll explain it in sports terms u not fit for this, wit
Ya career’s a flop… imagine Lebron playin soccer & someone near him whiffed on a kick
i get it. but its not that good
Don’t need to be hip, my slang’s dated but why the fuck do I need a set up
My shit is tight… sorta like that wardrobe faggots like u made acceptable in ya era
this is cool
Dumbass switched to audio like ya text’s exactly what the hood needs
Shit is such a Giant mistake… u make Daniel Jones’ pick-sixes look like good reads
nice concept. feels a little rushed but i liked the punch


Penny pinchin’s a art, got a Cheap-suit for ya dead body when i rip u apart,
& A caskets where “Nik’ll End, I’m” putting my 2cent in from the start.
pretty forced
U and ya Secret society of perverts ain’t gon be safe in NO field ,
I’ll Catch ‘ILL loomin naughty’ thoughts of trafficking & make’em road kill
also kind forced but cool concept and the wordplay flows to a certain extent
Champ? They hear ya Bars and meltdown.. against me it’s a burial,
Got the Dirt dimmin light on ya shine but no “one Care-It’s” to Treasure you
forced.
This one’s for the Ages, U act young but got issues w/ cardiac forsure
Even ya Bars are for people 50+ who don’t get Carded at the door
this is cool. a little light but i like the concept
Another one for the Ages?… a compact 9 to leak his scalp
I don’t gotta put two & two together I’m spinnin Ballerina style,
liked the flow here
U ain’t decode the message? I said “1,4 Ages?”, the Drake near,
& The Dot w/ The Scope got a Supervision better than Daycare
not feeling it
U ashy with Acne and everything about ya health’s damn pitiful,
So I’ll pamper’em with gunpowder, I’m teachin Self care rituals
Looks like he went 12 so u can cancel this line out as a throwaway fuck it lol
got it


feels a little rusty on both sides but there were some nice lines. nika had chromosome, tight/your era, and giant mistake. Unfukwitable had illuminati and ballerina. Some of this is just on style preference for punches over wordplay when it's forced but gotta give it to nik.

Vote: ill nik-A

[Zuo]

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