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trap.
01-28-2013, 02:51 PM
02-01-2002

Atomic's verse

Slap back fags....L.S. suck and ya claim ya crews special
D your punches are weak...couldn’t even ''duke'' it out being a blue devil
Wreck profiles and dent rhymes....punches that bend spines wit just 14 lines
Your verses are like people who ''collect watches''....you never spend time!!
Bullets’ll exit the chamber....Splitting Crowds.....Shells are Blown
Now Your ''Single Handed''....cause I'll Break ya Fist that's Thrown
I'm in the Mix wit rage....when I blaze every single Written Page
Intertwine Ya 'Destiny with Pretzels'.....give you a Twist of Fate
This Semi-Vet death comes Abruptly when my Pen Blesses Pages
Bring "Pencil and Paper" to my Hospital...since Ya want to "Test" My Patients*
Vibrant lips on my Mouth spit Intimidatin...Ya Scared as Hell Now
Begin Using Ya ''Skin as a Jacket'' because you Wear yourself Out
Fast when I throw and Lasso ya Throat....ya Heads Pulled Back
Atomic ''Show you the way to ya Next-El'' like some Cell Phone Maps


*Mid-terms..he was studying for it..need a pencil or a pen and paper to take a mid term...well thats what we use


Da Storm's verse

Here we go

You little heartless fool~look what you started dude~tear you apart in two/
Because Storm's on a "Ram-page" like "St Louis" articles~im sparkin you/
Thought u was beatin me~like "unearned grades" from teachers~all ya votes is "Free-B's"/ (freebies)
180 degrees~you will turn~when i grab ya rap book~and smack you wit it/
You envy me bitch~slicin my pictures in half~is the only way i will have a "splitting image"/
Watch me rip this~wit one of my sick spits~seen my verse and simply "gave up" like kids is "orphanages"/

Sickness right now time to come wit it

I'll expose ya brain~when i "pop" ya Thoughtz~like "rusted bike chains"/
Like XFL players Atomic need to give up tha game~cause ya demo gets "denied" like rubbin on a "dikes frame"/
Ya "type's plane"~like "laptops" on "aviation devices"~u on my level~well i guess ur equal to Christ bitch/
Ya lack "sense"~that's the only reason u can claim that you not "feelin" me/(senses-touch)
Cause I "chuck" lyrics wit "flava" so Im labeled as the "Public's Enemy"/(Chuck D and Flava Flav are the group Public Enemy)

FinaL WordS

Why thoughtz poppin shit like he cant get hurt~get his white t turned to a "tye dye" shirt/
Witness tha worse~ya bout to get put in a hearse~you'll never "show ya face" again like "islamic girls" after birth/


First to 5 no b/s votes or d/r votes



It was 3-2...my lead..up