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namix
09-11-2013, 05:21 PM
Mi amigos massive, each blows only priemo grasses
In tuxedo fashion getting flamingo ass in casino bathrooms
Slang that Nino crack cut back with amino acids
G Code past Vito stats reloading three chrome magnums
My adrenals equal that of a week old mastiff
Or a sleak slow assassin doing evil magic hopkido backflips
When we roll past its as thick as the ass on my last bitch
after kegal classes spread eagle over my mandingo aspects
Im Frank Zito’s last kin involved in illegal actions
who's genome matches ba baracius with green hulk fragments
We talkin Greek god status when we bought Athens
tongue deep in a bad bitch thunder clappin deluged Baptists
Hit with the leadoff back fist and eat raw catfish
with a team all bat shit and guano where that deep draw cash is


I don't read much S&F - but c'mon -- that is illasfuck


link me to something better

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 05:23 PM
U can't be srs

namix
09-11-2013, 05:24 PM
U can't be srs

I thought you'd be the first to respond - impressive


show me yours PB, I haven't read any but I hear that's what you do.

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 05:25 PM
None saved on my new laptop and they were all on old nc :(

Pent uP
09-11-2013, 05:25 PM
Why dont u go vote on me vs geno in the ba namix

Diode
09-11-2013, 05:27 PM
rawn has secretly been dynamix this whole time

amg

namix
09-11-2013, 05:30 PM
rawn has secretly been dynamix this whole time

amg

he's much iller at flow and poorer at contextual setup than me lol

Pent uP
09-11-2013, 05:31 PM
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lsichgAXEv1qfjhgro1_400.gif

Pent uP
09-11-2013, 05:33 PM
Also to be fair that is a simple string of syllables to make rhyme alot. Not knocking the verse but I don't consider the writingto be as difficult then some other sNf verses

StarFaggot
09-11-2013, 05:33 PM
Rawn that's dope.

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 05:35 PM
Any long string of rhymes based on a-i sounds is ez mode

veritas
09-11-2013, 05:36 PM
You ain’t seeing me like Mr. T’s neck:

VERITAS:

The psychological, the metaphysical, the warrior:
And any obstacle neva stops the pinnacle’s thought euphoria.

I whip a Challenger, so rip the calendar, cuz I’m outside of space and time,
400 horse traveler, clip every caliber, come collide with the great Divine.

To flex on the net aint shit son, I mastered life by the time I was thirty,
The 9th diffusion of consciousness: Motherfucker VERITAS aint earthly

Inter-dimensional warlord equipping plasma swords, lavish words, and phantom hordes;
These average bores can’t fathom wars I ravage boards with a savage Lord’s master force

The Last Star-fighter-carbon-fiber-Hemi-driver-rhyme provider:
The flow of my saliva pipes a preggo bitch with it’s dick dipped in Godiva.

I got that Iron man, call me Cal Ripken the survivor, givin dirt naps in Peruvian lava,
Peep my Nasdaq’s in a sauna amidst exotic fauna, making ya bitch sing Hakuna Matata.

Bet my dick stretch her in pleasure, skeet on her eyepatch, make her wait to taste treasure
My Swagnum P.I. mustache rubs her clam’s hatch, b squirts until u need a tub to measure

parasite worms spread germs and brains squirm, my Psych-Ops turn oceans to rain drops
Real life Psychologist, so know I got cash to burn, and “I won” like the face of Cyclops.

Drip divine drops of sun spots, electroswagnetic pulses implode terrestrial infrastructures,
Make her thirsty till my cum stops, V stay in a bitch mind like extraterrestrial abductors.

Got carrots like extra-vegetable lovers, dressing cleaner than your funeral’s ushers
Eye contact ya bitch and bring beautiful blushes, while u focus on writing pitiful punches,

With the minimal functions, while V shines and feeds u the law like Levitical luncheons
VERITAS is Voltron formed from Galactus, my flows anoint, on point like a ***tus

But the point is I’m matchless, smoke a joint and ash on what ever cash hatches
Conceptual master wit complex patterns, lines full of more dope than Mexican caverns,

Hit ya bitch like Lexington stabbing, till her nose looks like Owen’s in wedding crashers
While exposing my woody wearing Treyvon’s hoodie in front of some Klan pastors.

VERITAS: The infinity exhibit, never fitna see a limit, your thoughts are all my minions
VERITAS: the physics of cybernetic wizards’ visions of your dollar menu decisions

Swim in loot like Scrooge McDuck, my guns called whammies triggers press your luck
Make any competitor suck, My life makes change, you talk cash, but just passin the buck

Wise Wiggles
09-11-2013, 05:36 PM
Grasses doesn't rhyme with bathrooms.

namix
09-11-2013, 05:37 PM
Also to be fair that is a simple string of syllables to make rhyme alot. Not knocking the verse but I don't consider the writingto be as difficult then some other sNf verses

I don't read much sNF - link me to some dope ones

week old mastiff + kegal classes = tight shit

literally lol

Pent uP
09-11-2013, 05:39 PM
I don't read much sNF - link me to some dope ones

week old mastiff + kegal classes = tight shit

literally lol

Kegal classes segment was dope.

Im on my phone and dont stockpile links to things I liked

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=148340#post148340
Why dont u go vote tho

Hush
09-11-2013, 05:51 PM
Been tryna tell niggas my boy Rawnie is dope

Hush
09-11-2013, 05:52 PM
You ain’t seeing me like Mr. T’s neck:

VERITAS:

The psychological, the metaphysical, the warrior:
And any obstacle neva stops the pinnacle’s thought euphoria.

I whip a Challenger, so rip the calendar, cuz I’m outside of space and time,
400 horse traveler, clip every caliber, come collide with the great Divine.

To flex on the net aint shit son, I mastered life by the time I was thirty,
The 9th diffusion of consciousness: Motherfucker VERITAS aint earthly

Inter-dimensional warlord equipping plasma swords, lavish words, and phantom hordes;
These average bores can’t fathom wars I ravage boards with a savage Lord’s master force

The Last Star-fighter-carbon-fiber-Hemi-driver-rhyme provider:
The flow of my saliva pipes a preggo bitch with it’s dick dipped in Godiva.

I got that Iron man, call me Cal Ripken the survivor, givin dirt naps in Peruvian lava,
Peep my Nasdaq’s in a sauna amidst exotic fauna, making ya bitch sing Hakuna Matata.

Bet my dick stretch her in pleasure, skeet on her eyepatch, make her wait to taste treasure
My Swagnum P.I. mustache rubs her clam’s hatch, b squirts until u need a tub to measure

parasite worms spread germs and brains squirm, my Psych-Ops turn oceans to rain drops
Real life Psychologist, so know I got cash to burn, and “I won” like the face of Cyclops.

Drip divine drops of sun spots, electroswagnetic pulses implode terrestrial infrastructures,
Make her thirsty till my cum stops, V stay in a bitch mind like extraterrestrial abductors.

Got carrots like extra-vegetable lovers, dressing cleaner than your funeral’s ushers
Eye contact ya bitch and bring beautiful blushes, while u focus on writing pitiful punches,

With the minimal functions, while V shines and feeds u the law like Levitical luncheons
VERITAS is Voltron formed from Galactus, my flows anoint, on point like a ***tus

But the point is I’m matchless, smoke a joint and ash on what ever cash hatches
Conceptual master wit complex patterns, lines full of more dope than Mexican caverns,

Hit ya bitch like Lexington stabbing, till her nose looks like Owen’s in wedding crashers
While exposing my woody wearing Treyvon’s hoodie in front of some Klan pastors.

VERITAS: The infinity exhibit, never fitna see a limit, your thoughts are all my minions
VERITAS: the physics of cybernetic wizards’ visions of your dollar menu decisions

Swim in loot like Scrooge McDuck, my guns called whammies triggers press your luck
Make any competitor suck, My life makes change, you talk cash, but just passin the buck

Lol not one person feeling this dogshit

Rawn M.D.
09-11-2013, 06:02 PM
=)

dull boy
09-11-2013, 06:10 PM
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?p=148711#post148711

Pent uP
09-11-2013, 06:19 PM
Lol not one person feeling this dogshit

Bro he said

Elctroswagnetic

dull boy
09-11-2013, 06:34 PM
How do those work?

Miracles.

Geno
09-11-2013, 07:08 PM
Eyo namix... go peep me and pent ups snf battle in the ba. A vote isn't necessary, but I think me and pent both murked this vs in qoutes tbh. Nothing against my man rawn tho

Pent uP
09-11-2013, 07:23 PM
Eyo namix... go peep me and pent ups snf battle in the ba. A vote isn't necessary, but I think me and pent both murked this vs in qoutes tbh. Nothing against my man rawn tho

Rofl I already plugged us twice in here. We're worse than Mormons

Geno
09-11-2013, 07:24 PM
Blahaha. Wtf. I didn't even notice hahaha. Good shit

Chyeahhh!!!
09-11-2013, 07:27 PM
Rawn is a formidable foe in the S&F arena. Dude's inner multis, structure, flow, transitions all combined in an almost short/medium bar format not to mention some damn good word placement has him on my hit list for sure. Speaking of which, I need a rematch :)

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 07:27 PM
HEY Pent uP AND Genocide IF YOU VOTE ON A TAG MATCH YOU'LL GET A VOTE.

Geno
09-11-2013, 07:36 PM
Lol. I know, I gotta put my votes in. There coming.

I got you cake, its pretty mandatory anyway. So I don't expect a vote in ba. But that would be cool

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 07:39 PM
word. i actually read this already, tough vote. you guys are swell at rhyming.

Seyance
09-11-2013, 07:43 PM
lotta shit didn't work, was forced in.. maybe would rhyme in real life better though. lacked witt and wordplay, plus the wording used didn't feel very natural so the swag factor didn't come through much. quite a few of the "multi syllable rhymes" weren't even multi's as there were words in that didn't rhyme, so it throws the whole multi off.

a few references didn't work, seemed like they were put there to just rhyme. knowing people are idiots and don't actually read verses properly, they just skim and miss it. things like the week old mastiff line, surely a week old mastiff wouldn't have that much adrenalin yet.. as it has only just opened its eyes and probably can't even walk. maybe i'm missing something with that one.

shit was alright yeah, but not thread worthy.. if you want to look at good snf.. go find championship matches. it's like when people ask questions on here and facebook, when googling it would be waaay easier, faster and more accurate.

2c.

Chyeahhh!!!
09-11-2013, 07:45 PM
Genocide

snf match whats good?

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 07:45 PM
Genocide

snf match whats good?

30 day pink slip swag and flow. 20 lines.

Chyeahhh!!!
09-11-2013, 07:51 PM
30 day pink slip swag and flow. 20 lines.

fair nuff. Would you mind setting the thread?

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 07:55 PM
let me handle pryde. then ill set it.

Chyeahhh!!!
09-11-2013, 08:00 PM
coo

Rawn M.D.
09-11-2013, 08:15 PM
Word chyeahhh handle cake n then I got u

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 08:16 PM
....


you cant be serious. i'd fucking ruin you rawn. once i take care of chyeah, permanent pink slip offer.

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 08:17 PM
I bet Rawn literally got sexually aroused that a topic was made about him

Chyeahhh!!!
09-11-2013, 08:25 PM
ahh man we really need an SnF league to pop off

StarFaggot
09-11-2013, 08:32 PM
Vote: Rawn

Pent uP
09-11-2013, 08:34 PM
HEY Pent uP AND Genocide IF YOU VOTE ON A TAG MATCH YOU'LL GET A VOTE.

Im banking on the fact u have a battle in the BA and youd rather read our battle for ur votes then others' battles.
That goes hand and hand with the fact that im banking on no one voting today on tag team shit

namix
09-11-2013, 08:36 PM
lotta shit didn't work, was forced in.. maybe would rhyme in real life better though. lacked witt and wordplay, plus the wording used didn't feel very natural so the swag factor didn't come through much. quite a few of the "multi syllable rhymes" weren't even multi's as there were words in that didn't rhyme, so it throws the whole multi off.

a few references didn't work, seemed like they were put there to just rhyme. knowing people are idiots and don't actually read verses properly, they just skim and miss it. things like the week old mastiff line, surely a week old mastiff wouldn't have that much adrenalin yet.. as it has only just opened its eyes and probably can't even walk. maybe i'm missing something with that one.

shit was alright yeah, but not thread worthy.. if you want to look at good snf.. go find championship matches. it's like when people ask questions on here and facebook, when googling it would be waaay easier, faster and more accurate.

2c.

your critique was solid until the analogy of google searching

it was waaay easier for me to create this thread than making a fruitless attempt at searching through archives of nothingness yo ;)

Rawn M.D.
09-11-2013, 08:56 PM
Cake I've ignored u without using the feature

this began a while ago tho

Not to mention I was speaking to chyeahhh not to pancakecerealbowl

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 08:59 PM
Cake I've ignored u without using the feature

this began a while ago tho

Not to mention I was speaking to chyeahhh not to pancakecerealbowl

I offered a truce.

Don't let namix's quote fool you. You use the A and I vowel schemes that have been done a thousand times without saying a damn thing.

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 08:59 PM
Vote: Rawn

Problem, little guy?

StarFaggot
09-11-2013, 09:03 PM
None at all you big bear faggot.

Rawn is dope at S & F...

You're good at what you do but I'd advise you to stay in your lane.

Rawn M.D.
09-11-2013, 09:04 PM
I say mucho

and the scheme sounds dope which is what snf is in my eyes

audibly to me it sounds very dope bc of the vowels

and I didn't make the thread...

StarFaggot
09-11-2013, 09:07 PM
Seyance you're a faggot. Namix asked you to provide a better swag n flow verse not be a bitter bitch and breakdown a verse that no one asked you to.

namix
09-11-2013, 09:10 PM
as a whole i typically view swag & flow as an excuse to be conceptually lazy

but i liked rawn's verse - and am interested in reading others that are of equal or greater caliber


Pent & Geno - will check your battle out tomorrow for sure.

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 09:12 PM
Aero want me to send you nudes? Or sex pics? I will.

Rawn I'll admit the scheme and flow was dope. But A-I based verses are done to death, and it wasn't what I look for in a sanfor verse.

veritas
09-11-2013, 09:16 PM
Rawn got skillz.

veritas
09-11-2013, 09:19 PM
Hush

Hush when you exit your current co dependent mom live in life partner situation then you may have a chamce of mattering in the realm of opinion you insect faced beetle larvae.

Seyance
09-11-2013, 09:19 PM
the back flips past is hat tricks black lips scheme has been done to death. probably one of known as one of the easiest multi sets around, very much like the similar take this fake is basic lame shit scheme.

when critiquing a verse.. one of the things i take into account is the difficulty of the craft. how hard was that to write? in similar way the judges critique say a diving competition, an easy dive would be safe and register a score, but would never be able to get a high score. a harder to complete dive has the possibility for a higher score.. but has it's own pitfalls when being so ambitious.

edit: stfu aero, me/pan vs you/rawn pinkslip forever?

Rawn M.D.
09-11-2013, 09:23 PM
I've already said why I elect to utilize that SC heme

and besides the two of u it seems to have been appreciated in general

u can't please everyone tho

Zen
09-11-2013, 09:24 PM
This is pretty dope. Props

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 09:26 PM
the back flips past is hat tricks black lips scheme has been done to death. probably one of known as one of the easiest multi sets around, very much like the similar take this fake is basic lame shit scheme

QFT 2x

One of the few times I agree with Sey.

That shit is so easy to rhyme. Challenge yourself.

namix
09-11-2013, 09:29 PM
i'd like to join the Aero/Rawn team vs. Seyance/Pancake in a permanent pinkslip? can you guys pick up another dude?

lets make it crazy as fuck for a dope perma ban match.

like literally - perma IP bans and subsequent bans if aliases are identified... let's make it hurt

Eŋg
09-11-2013, 09:30 PM
the back flips past is hat tricks black lips scheme has been done to death. probably one of known as one of the easiest multi sets around, very much like the similar take this fake is basic lame shit scheme.

when critiquing a verse.. one of the things i take into account is the difficulty of the craft. how hard was that to write? in similar way the judges critique say a diving competition, an easy dive would be safe and register a score, but would never be able to get a high score. a harder to complete dive has the possibility for a higher score.. but has it's own pitfalls when being so ambitious.

edit: stfu aero, me/pan vs you/rawn pinkslip forever?

don't talk about craft until you learn how to use the possessive apostrophe, plz.

and what you're basically saying is you sit there and look at how long the guy must have lamented over contrived rhyme schemes. awesome, noble pursuit.

verse was tight.

Nigma
09-11-2013, 09:32 PM
oXus we should be friends.

Seyance
09-11-2013, 09:44 PM
sad weirdo scrub, you know grammar policing is literally the most played to death pathetic way of replying to posts ever. is that what constitutes as a noble pursuit for you?

obviously it's liked in general, so is 2 chains and wocka.

Cashius
09-11-2013, 09:48 PM
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=16706

~RustyGunZ~
09-11-2013, 09:52 PM
it was dope tbh

been listening to bronson today and it would be dope on his type beats

Seyance
09-11-2013, 09:52 PM
i had just read that when i stepped into this thread, which is why i couldn't understand the difficulty of finding something better. will feed it later Cashius

Eŋg
09-11-2013, 09:53 PM
it's ok guy, really. i'm not going to sit here and discuss craft with my florid analogy then immediately take the defensive when called out on a grammatical fundamental. like i could gaf, really (shoulda used a question mark and didn't need the word 'as' in your last post).

it's not you, it's me. always. and forever.

Seyance
09-11-2013, 10:01 PM
wait a minute, are you not the same person I caught biting verses? it seems like grammar policing has taken over from stealing other peoples verses as your newest noble pursuit. post another track to get ridiculed or tell me how many capital letters i'm missing, you freak.

Eŋg
09-11-2013, 10:07 PM
uhm. what?!

i'm not as think as you drunk i am.

i'm pretty sure my sex-ed teacher wasn't a virgin. y'know.

Hush
09-11-2013, 10:17 PM
You ain’t seeing me like Mr. T’s neck:

VERITAS:

The psychological, the metaphysical, the warrior:
And any obstacle neva stops the pinnacle’s thought euphoria.

I whip a Challenger, so rip the calendar, cuz I’m outside of space and time,
400 horse traveler, clip every caliber, come collide with the great Divine.

To flex on the net aint shit son, I mastered life by the time I was thirty,
The 9th diffusion of consciousness: Motherfucker VERITAS aint earthly

Inter-dimensional warlord equipping plasma swords, lavish words, and phantom hordes;
These average bores can’t fathom wars I ravage boards with a savage Lord’s master force

The Last Star-fighter-carbon-fiber-Hemi-driver-rhyme provider:
The flow of my saliva pipes a preggo bitch with it’s dick dipped in Godiva.

I got that Iron man, call me Cal Ripken the survivor, givin dirt naps in Peruvian lava,
Peep my Nasdaq’s in a sauna amidst exotic fauna, making ya bitch sing Hakuna Matata.

Bet my dick stretch her in pleasure, skeet on her eyepatch, make her wait to taste treasure
My Swagnum P.I. mustache rubs her clam’s hatch, b squirts until u need a tub to measure

parasite worms spread germs and brains squirm, my Psych-Ops turn oceans to rain drops
Real life Psychologist, so know I got cash to burn, and “I won” like the face of Cyclops.

Drip divine drops of sun spots, electroswagnetic pulses implode terrestrial infrastructures,
Make her thirsty till my cum stops, V stay in a bitch mind like extraterrestrial abductors.

Got carrots like extra-vegetable lovers, dressing cleaner than your funeral’s ushers
Eye contact ya bitch and bring beautiful blushes, while u focus on writing pitiful punches,

With the minimal functions, while V shines and feeds u the law like Levitical luncheons
VERITAS is Voltron formed from Galactus, my flows anoint, on point like a ***tus

But the point is I’m matchless, smoke a joint and ash on what ever cash hatches
Conceptual master wit complex patterns, lines full of more dope than Mexican caverns,

Hit ya bitch like Lexington stabbing, till her nose looks like Owen’s in wedding crashers
While exposing my woody wearing Treyvon’s hoodie in front of some Klan pastors.

VERITAS: The infinity exhibit, never fitna see a limit, your thoughts are all my minions
VERITAS: the physics of cybernetic wizards’ visions of your dollar menu decisions

Swim in loot like Scrooge McDuck, my guns called whammies triggers press your luck
Make any competitor suck, My life makes change, you talk cash, but just passin the buck

Hush

Hush when you exit your current co dependent mom live in life partner situation then you may have a chamce of mattering in the realm of opinion you insect faced beetle larvae.


I bet u posted that terrible verse in here thinking someone would give a fuck

Seyance
09-11-2013, 10:25 PM
biters go on ignore, you don't deserve to be heard scrub.

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 10:31 PM
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=17244

veritas
09-11-2013, 10:34 PM
I bet u posted that terrible verse in here thinking someone would give a fuck

Break down your future plan for your living arrangements please

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 10:41 PM
i'd like to join the Aero/Rawn team vs. Seyance/Pancake in a permanent pinkslip? can you guys pick up another dude?

lets make it crazy as fuck for a dope perma ban match.

like literally - perma IP bans and subsequent bans if aliases are identified... let's make it hurt

Haven't read the topic past this point, but I'm a bit hurt. I know I trolled you previously, but I respect you. You're not my cup of tea as an OM writer, but this is a bridge too far. This is almost out of character for you. And lumping me in with Sey (as a boarder) is a bit much.

We should collab. Srs.

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 11:01 PM
The King is mathematically affixed; no man has a known plan or schematic that's equipped
to throw hands, I'm Gohan; I'll throw one death stare that'll snap your femur in half with a twitch
My whole team is nabbing at the bit, I'm the touch of God as a weapon of no remorse
Leave you slumped in the yard with a queen attached to my hip while we're stepping over your corpse
Close range, the bullet's frame rate slows when the scope is aimed and leaves a hole when it's done
And as your soul escapes I'll watch it elevate at the same pace as the float off the smoke of the gun
I'll sidestep Pryde's death. Let's talk about me. Sovereign, the King, netcee's Charlie Kaufman indeed
Taking the site over, type cold I stole the deed while GoW tried to breathe coughing off the smoke of his weed
I pen gully tacks, dubbed as rap, writing better than you with something new everyday, slammed
Clear the deck, I say fuck a tap, I'll power clean a whole keg and make the brew do a Cakestand
I said; I'M TYPE COLD I...I'll...I'll a write a verse of the week spazzin', voter's a clown dude's type
I'm bipolar, I reek havoc. Both of my personas speak in third person and rhyme diameters around you like
"Pan a merk you. I'm a 4chan commercial, bezerk, seeing blue spots off of the strands of herbals
Pan is yelling at this imaginary buzzsaw, PAN CANNOT WORK YOU, so instead Pan will just use Pan's hands to hurt you
while talking to Spanish gerbils. Pan will jam his thumbs into your eyes until your glands are purple,
PAN IS CRAZY PAN JUST RHYMED WITH PUR-" "Cake is serious. Cake thinks Pryde's game is broke,
Cake will kick Pryde's wack ass with enough backlash that Pryde'll be back to the time when his typo name was dope
Cake's going to race troll. Pryde will go apeshit and all, Cake will shoot off when dude rages in typeface,
Then Cake's going to shapeshift through walls and moonwalk over Pryde's black self in Michael Jackson whiteface."
Pancake is a King, like Pancake said. You're a raging faggot going through his hype phase.

Pent uP
09-11-2013, 11:02 PM
Id ask to join the ranks of that 3v3 but I dont want half the ppl involved banned so theres that

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 11:03 PM
PENT WOULD BE ON MY TEAM BECAUSE ME AND PENT ARE DRUNK NETCEE'S FRIENDS.

Pent uP
09-11-2013, 11:07 PM
Its true but your recent sobriety is detrimental to our collaboration

PancakeBrah
09-11-2013, 11:15 PM
im drunk currently

Neighbor
09-12-2013, 03:20 AM
I AM SWAG & FLOW

Boredom
09-12-2013, 03:35 AM
twas dope Rawn

Seyance
09-12-2013, 05:38 AM
lets do it no perma ban then, me, pent and pan vs rawn, aero, nam.

Maximus
09-12-2013, 06:48 AM
Rawn that shit was tight..
Veritas i wasnt feeling ur piece at all, wtf is electroswag??. And btw all rhyme schemes are played, texting wasnt born last year fellas

namix
09-12-2013, 08:16 AM
Haven't read the topic past this point, but I'm a bit hurt. I know I trolled you previously, but I respect you. You're not my cup of tea as an OM writer, but this is a bridge too far. This is almost out of character for you. And lumping me in with Sey (as a boarder) is a bit much.

We should collab. Srs.

i just been in battle mode because of the PR tourney

you somehow made me feel bad now, you're good at what you do, pancake lol

namix
09-12-2013, 08:29 AM
The King is mathematically affixed; no man has a known plan or schematic that's equipped
to throw hands, I'm Gohan; I'll throw one death stare that'll snap your femur in half with a twitch
My whole team is nabbing at the bit, I'm the touch of God as a weapon of no remorse
Leave you slumped in the yard with a queen attached to my hip while we're stepping over your corpse
Close range, the bullet's frame rate slows when the scope is aimed and leaves a hole when it's done
And as your soul escapes I'll watch it elevate at the same pace as the float off the smoke of the gun
I'll sidestep Pryde's death. Let's talk about me. Sovereign, the King, netcee's Charlie Kaufman indeed
Taking the site over, type cold I stole the deed while GoW tried to breathe coughing off the smoke of his weed
I pen gully tacks, dubbed as rap, writing better than you with something new everyday, slammed
Clear the deck, I say fuck a tap, I'll power clean a whole keg and make the brew do a Cakestand
I said; I'M TYPE COLD I...I'll...I'll a write a verse of the week spazzin', voter's a clown dude's type
I'm bipolar, I reek havoc. Both of my personas speak in third person and rhyme diameters around you like
"Pan a merk you. I'm a 4chan commercial, bezerk, seeing blue spots off of the strands of herbals
Pan is yelling at this imaginary buzzsaw, PAN CANNOT WORK YOU, so instead Pan will just use Pan's hands to hurt you
while talking to Spanish gerbils. Pan will jam his thumbs into your eyes until your glands are purple,
PAN IS CRAZY PAN JUST RHYMED WITH PUR-" "Cake is serious. Cake thinks Pryde's game is broke,
Cake will kick Pryde's wack ass with enough backlash that Pryde'll be back to the time when his typo name was dope
Cake's going to race troll. Pryde will go apeshit and all, Cake will shoot off when dude rages in typeface,
Then Cake's going to shapeshift through walls and moonwalk over Pryde's black self in Michael Jackson whiteface."
Pancake is a King, like Pancake said. You're a raging faggot going through his hype phase.

it was worth the read and showed flashes of strong imagery (e.g. soul elevate at the pace of the float off smoke) and then sometimes your scheme was dope i thought --- when setup strong inners and have like call backs a couple lines down (if thats what they're called), there are a couple times you did that really dope... sometimes the flow wasnt as dope to me as others, but its S&F and i mean the flow never falls off that bad --- good concepts though for a S&F - your concepts are actually more developed than most snf verses i read, but again, i havent read many.

good shit man... i still think rawn's shit was dope though, surprised you dont kinda

Split
09-12-2013, 08:44 AM
not a fan of Rawns concepts. feels like im reading Wikipedia with the language set to multis

Rawn M.D.
09-12-2013, 09:17 AM
Lol @wiki at least u consistent

Diode
09-12-2013, 09:18 AM
feels like im reading Wikipedia with the language set to multis

leaned me

except that page would be the detour page and full of ~ after ~

Dominate
09-12-2013, 08:13 PM
Only s&f verse that I remember was Neigh's... therefore that one was the best. He said something about a dulled worn dagger will turn ur ribcage into a pulled pork sandwich... and something like I'm undying/defying all research lying asleep in a cryogen freezer... I'd like to read that verse again if he still has it.. Neighbor?

Neighbor
09-12-2013, 08:41 PM
Dominate, I don't think I have it.. I never save anything I write

I think it was something like:

Cause full-force damage like Bulletstorm's graphics; gun shots like a bullhorn blastin
Put in work w/ switchblades -
But this dulled, worn dagger'll turn ya rib cage to a pulled pork sandwich

Dominate
09-12-2013, 08:44 PM
that sounds right

what was the set up to the cryogen freezer line?

Neighbor
09-12-2013, 08:52 PM
Icy demeanor.. 28 Days Later, I'm Vitamin Ether
Undying, defyin all research lying asleep in a cryogen freezer

Thanks for rememberin that, warms my heart <3

Dominate
09-12-2013, 09:05 PM
that's it. dope

write more s&f

Geno
09-12-2013, 09:06 PM
Neigh. Hope ur working on our s&f collab.

I will actually spend some time on it if this goes down, gonna be soooo fucking illmatic

The youngest boss.
09-12-2013, 09:15 PM
COOL STORY BRO

Neighbor
09-12-2013, 09:17 PM
COOL STORY BRO

hahaha

My nigga

You need to pick up that pen, boy

Neighbor
09-12-2013, 09:17 PM
Neigh. Hope ur working on our s&f collab.

I will actually spend some time on it if this goes down, gonna be soooo fucking illmatic

Yeah, I got you

Beyond
09-12-2013, 09:18 PM
Nice usertitle Neigh

Don't know where I saw that before

Neighbor
09-12-2013, 09:20 PM
Hmmm

You can be Mrs. Swag & Flow or Swag & Flow, Jr.

Geno
09-12-2013, 09:21 PM
Would like to see berretta in this as well, neigh.

Geno
09-12-2013, 09:21 PM
Gone @mrs or jr though. Lmfao

Rawn M.D.
09-12-2013, 09:22 PM
Y'all suck for leaving or boy out these collabs

Frank Metts
09-12-2013, 09:22 PM
Its called swag and flow ... verse had both ... good show old chap

Rawn dope as fuck

Geno
09-12-2013, 09:28 PM
Haha. Sry rawn.
I will have something for you soon to.. I'm about to go on a ffucking collab spree again. Fuck it

detour
09-16-2013, 03:59 PM
leaned me

except that page would be the detour page and full of ~ after ~

they-were-dashes u racist-faggot
not squiggly-lines u sissified whimpy-guy