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Orc
09-16-2013, 04:29 AM
NBL
Netcees Text Battle League



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Voting ends Tuesday July 23rd at 11:59 PM PST.
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Karaoke Defiant

Defiant
09-16-2013, 03:00 PM
hello

voted on

allen vs death
deon vs des
blue vs pie
cake vs geno

King Karaoke
09-17-2013, 03:40 PM
Hi...

In...
10...

Bye...

King Karaoke
09-21-2013, 12:33 AM
Hi...

Ill post tomorrow...

Bye...

King Karaoke
09-21-2013, 10:43 PM
Hi...

Fuck writing a text battle, I'm about to go out drinking bro
Besides u've ducked me 2x, u don't wanna face a brother like Frank & Joe
Your girl's a slut but you obviously don't understand, Def
Cuz the bitch is quick switch dudes and she's not even playing grand theft
That says a lot about the kind of sluts you pull
Plus, the gray areas in your verses would make Em's album cover look colorful
Fuck the fake personals, I could post a pic that would ruin half your scheme
I'm no slouch when it comes to this, u on the other hand are a chiropractor's dream
Ask peeps in the hall of fame, they'll tell you Karaoke's not soft
While ur struggling ass been coughing enough L's around here to piss Deon off

Bye...

Orc
09-22-2013, 08:29 AM
dudes got potential but drops like the worse line
only time he's even close to clinical, is after he had sex for the first time
U AINT BLACK U FAGGOT, any movie'll sack this actor
such a tryhard, he bought GTA when they said u can be a black character
gonna die a virgin and live without a spouse bet.
his development took such a backward step, hes homeless, lifeless n a house pet
if anyone says you'll champ, it'll take a blow as i win
cause his charge at the top will be shorter than bags role as admin
bring ya old shit back n watch as the whole site converses
that i dont just throwback lines, il stamp, spit n burn everyone of them verses

Sintro
09-22-2013, 02:09 PM
Kar. Face a brother and chiropractor were nice. Def was so so n didn't hav any stand outs

namesake
09-22-2013, 06:02 PM
Ask peeps in the hall of fame, they'll tell you Karaoke's not soft
While ur struggling ass been coughing enough L's around here to piss Deon off
nice... saw the thread
Fuck writing a text battle, I'm about to go out drinking bro
Besides u've ducked me 2x, u don't wanna face a brother like Frank & Joe
again, relevant. nice
i enjoyed this verse... one of the better ones dropped so far........
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if anyone says you'll champ, it'll take a blow as i win
cause his charge at the top will be shorter than bags role as admin
amazing,...... compared to your other bars



even more one sided then my loss to cashius... although to be fair i just clowned that verse in 20 mins max

KAR win

Cashius
09-22-2013, 09:38 PM
Karaoke was ok. I thought his opener was his best. The rest was kind of simple but not bad.

Wasn't feeling Def too much. House pet was prolly my favorite but still pretty underwhelming.

Karaoke took this.

Sn00p
09-23-2013, 09:09 AM
kar had a very solid verse. liked the opener & closer. chiropractor was lotb. def had a lot of lines that weren't misses, but didn't do anything for me either. most of 'em coulda been good with a little better wording i think. as is, they just didn't sting enough. so yea. not a bad verse from def, but kare had all the lines that stood out to me. that's why he gets my vote.
v/kar

Dominate
09-23-2013, 09:31 AM
Grand theft and slouch

Vs

House pet

Rest of Kar's were OK. Rest of Deaths was also OK but less so. Overall death was OK, Kar was cool/pretty good


Kar

King Karaoke
09-23-2013, 11:03 AM
Hi...

voted on Aero/Diode, Cashuis/Namesake, Blue Bayou/PiE and Sn00p/Bags...

Bye...

Destroyer
09-23-2013, 02:00 PM
lol @ you both having gta lines
I got karaoke here though
Metts and gta lines were hilarious
def wording kind of killed him as usual

v/karaoke

Allen Knight
09-23-2013, 03:22 PM
Gta, frank & joe, gray areas

Vs

House pet, gta

V/kar, this was a good read, i liked both gta bars tbh, i tthink kar was more consistent
Def had some nice shit i liked the house pet joint
but i think verse was hit an miss,
kar had the lotb frank an joe bar that was nice.
Cool battle props yah'll

Sn00p
09-23-2013, 03:23 PM
Karaoke wins. Don't vote anymore.

hotdogvendorman
09-24-2013, 05:18 AM
chiropractor line!! i inspire