Bags vs Sn00p - {Snoop wins}

[Orc]

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@Bags Sn00p

[Ghost1]

Sup. Lets do somethin light.... 12-14?

[Sn00p]

sure.

[PancakeBrah]

Check.

[Orc]

U keep posting in this thread ill deadmin and ban u. Uve nice hair but dont fuck with me

[PancakeBrah]

Lol

[Ghost1]

I got 14

[Ghost1]

Sn00p

Sent 14 to orc

[Sn00p]

sorry. forgot to ask for an ext. if u're cool w/ me still posting, i'll do so in a cpl hours.

[Ghost1]

Word. Ur good.

[Sn00p]

bags aka jim blaze

faggot.

i call my girl goddess in bed. making her moan & then cry out loud
u call ur girl god/des too. depends on which triforce member u fantasize about.
& i pack a flamethrower, so this motherfucker won't die at ease
the way 'j. blaze's head'll burn to the bone' cud serve as a plot for ghost rider 3.
everyone said ur induction was shameful. & the banter is right
i mean the hoff couldn't look worse eating a burger while hammered & high.
plus w/ ya wording, it ain't hard to make this guy fold.
ur drops are choppy as fuck. saying u'll come clean, it's all Lys,ole.
i'm going IN here. send lines ur way like gun spray
& the way i Merk'll earn me more votes than she's gonna get on sunday.
telling us about u're sexual preferences in a mag ain't decent, son
so how u blame tyson?! u're fucking kids before they even leave their mom.
& when i hunt down this bitch, i do it right
i'm 'going to Mark Antony for death' like cleopatra w/ her suicide.

[Orc]

BAGS VERSE:



This nazi'd get beat in the city, an i aint bitter
But after Everytime he try to flag a cab down he screams HEIL HITLER
Trynna lead ur followers into the gas is wrong
U bein a german sheppard? GOTCHU. Ill feed u to a rabid pack of dogs
measure me nekkid? A bitch in astonishment
If they measure ur neckid be longer then rawns list of accomplishments
U in traffic? Ill hop in ur whip to spit bars on u...
An body u on beat to the car tune dog.....an i aint talm bout Marmaduke
U an swerve in the tag? Ur lines were prehistoric
They left u extinct & w/his spine & ur neck ya coulda been a brontosaurus
Nvr won nbl on the real NC & u mad u cant pay to
wanted to be a contender but even as a raging bull denero couldnt save u
See ur girl w/ a champ? Ud prolly yell in her face
& suspender over ur shoulders....cuz u nvr had a real belt around ur waste

[namesake]

i call my girl goddess in bed. making her moan & then cry out loud
u call ur girl god/des too. depends on which triforce member u fantasize about.
& when i hunt down this bitch, i do it right
i'm 'going to Mark Antony for death' like cleopatra w/ her suicide.
vs
See ur girl w/ a champ? Ud prolly yell in her face
& suspender over ur shoulders....cuz u nvr had a real belt around ur wast
This nazi'd get beat in the city, an i aint bitter
But after Everytime he try to flag a cab down he screams HEIL HITLER


Oooh this was close, liked both verse's... both had misses but picked out best of both...... snoop, that god/des line was niceee... and the mark anthony shit was a clever lil punch/personal even if the wording was a lil sloppy in my opinion...... bags, that suspenders line was a dope take on such a played concept.... the heil line weren't bad at all but by the time i got to taxi i knew what was coming.... really man, this could go either way tbh but i'm giving it to snoop because out of the 2 quote each, I found his were slightly better than his counterpart's... no hate, honest vote is in. vote snoop

[Sn00p]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=18263
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=18266
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=18272
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=18271

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

i call my girl goddess in bed. making her moan & then cry out loud
u call ur girl god/des too. depends on which triforce member u fantasize about.
everyone said ur induction was shameful. & the banter is right
i mean the hoff couldn't look worse eating a burger while hammered & high.
telling us about u're sexual preferences in a mag ain't decent, son
so how u blame tyson?! u're fucking kids before they even leave their mom.

good verse, Lysol line was kinda forced tho...
triforce line and Tyson were dope...
HOF line was so true...

Trynna lead ur followers into the gas is wrong
U bein a german sheppard? GOTCHU. Ill feed u to a rabid pack of dogs

this was decent, so was the closer...
the rest of verse had no direction, the lines didn't connect...
Its like you wrote it drunk...

Sn00p was better all around...

vote- Sn00p...

Bye...

[Blue Bayou]

i call my girl goddess in bed. making her moan & then cry out loud
u call ur girl god/des too. depends on which triforce member u fantasize about.
everyone said ur induction was shameful. & the banter is right
i mean the hoff couldn't look worse eating a burger while hammered & high.
i'm going IN here. send lines ur way like gun spray
& the way i Merk'll earn me more votes than she's gonna get on sunday.
telling us about u're sexual preferences in a mag ain't decent, son
so how u blame tyson?! u're fucking kids before they even leave their mom.

vs.

U in traffic? Ill hop in ur whip to spit bars on u...
An body u on beat to the car tune dog.....an i aint talm bout Marmaduke
Nvr won nbl on the real NC & u mad u cant pay to
wanted to be a contender but even as a raging bull denero couldnt save u
See ur girl w/ a champ? Ud prolly yell in her face
& suspender over ur shoulders....cuz u nvr had a real belt around ur waste



Resally liked this battle. both of you guys had some cool ideas and nice standouts but ive gotta give this one to snoop... really liked the creativity with the god/des and angela merkal lines and thought the hoff hit hard... Bags had some dope shit and really closed out his verse nicely but overall i feel snoop was more consistent here and enjoed his concepts more... good shit fella's

Vote - sn00p

[Apex]

i call my girl goddess in bed. making her moan & then cry out loud
u call ur girl god/des too. depends on which triforce member u fantasize about.
everyone said ur induction was shameful. & the banter is right
i mean the hoff couldn't look worse eating a burger while hammered & high.
i'm going IN here. send lines ur way like gun spray
& the way i Merk'll earn me more votes than she's gonna get on sunday.
telling us about u're sexual preferences in a mag ain't decent, son
so how u blame tyson?! u're fucking kids before they even leave their mom.

vs.

U in traffic? Ill hop in ur whip to spit bars on u...
An body u on beat to the car tune dog.....an i aint talm bout Marmaduke
Nvr won nbl on the real NC & u mad u cant pay to
wanted to be a contender but even as a raging bull denero couldnt save u
See ur girl w/ a champ? Ud prolly yell in her face
& suspender over ur shoulders....cuz u nvr had a real belt around ur waste



This was a coo ass battle both came with some good shit but snoop took this 1 fucked with ur concepts wording n all bags came coo but just wasn't enough to take this

V. Snoop

[hotdogvendorman]

lysol n goddes were hilarious imo.. mark anthony was a nice jab as well...hoff line was funny too.. overall a cool lil verse from snoop.. i see ur wording has gotten better. ... vs shepard and marmaduke were funny but both about dogs which kind a seemed odd but none the less cool...suspender was flames tho.. prob the most creative line of the battle imo.. close shit.. i feel like bags was good but not as consistent like he didn't bring full effort here n it hurt him... good stuff but snoop got it by a hair...v/snoop

[Boredom]

i call my girl goddess in bed. making her moan & then cry out loud
u call ur girl god/des too. depends on which triforce member u fantasize about.
everyone said ur induction was shameful. & the banter is right
i mean the hoff couldn't look worse eating a burger while hammered & high.
telling us about u're sexual preferences in a mag ain't decent, son
so how u blame tyson?! u're fucking kids before they even leave their mom.

vs

U in traffic? Ill hop in ur whip to spit bars on u...
An body u on beat to the car tune dog.....an i aint talm bout Marmaduke
Nvr won nbl on the real NC & u mad u cant pay to
wanted to be a contender but even as a raging bull denero couldnt save u

all in all sn00p had better/more quotable's, hoff and triforce lines were daf. his misses had more connection as well.

[Neighbor]

i call my girl goddess in bed. making her moan & then cry out loud
u call ur girl god/des too. depends on which triforce member u fantasize about.
everyone said ur induction was shameful. & the banter is right
i mean the hoff couldn't look worse eating a burger while hammered & high.
telling us about u're sexual preferences in a mag ain't decent, son
so how u blame tyson?! u're fucking kids before they even leave their mom.

vs.

measure me nekkid? A bitch in astonishment
If they measure ur neckid be longer then rawns list of accomplishments
U in traffic? Ill hop in ur whip to spit bars on u...
An body u on beat to the car tune dog.....an i aint talm bout Marmaduke
See ur girl w/ a champ? Ud prolly yell in her face
& suspender over ur shoulders....cuz u nvr had a real belt around ur waste

Wow, Bags got fucked up lol.. I'll be honest, Sn00p's hard to write for (unless it's a pic battle), so I'll give Buff Bagswell the benefit of the doubt.. I had a tough time coming up w/ lines for the Gentle German when we battled.. but not to take away from Sn00p, he went the fuck in here.. really clean & creative bars, only had 1 or 2 misses.. Bags wasn't terrible, just seemed thrown together & a lot of his connections were kinda iffy.. Still a good read, I enjoyed

v/ Sn00p