Tragic vs Neighbor - {Neighbor wins}

[Orc]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League



Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due FRIDAY,
Voting ends Tuesday July 23rd at 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are at the mercy of your opponent



Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
[I]The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.



Voting:

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You will not like the punishment, so just vote.



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2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
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means you will disqualified.
A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a verse.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


tragic Neighbor

[tragic]

in

[Neighbor]

Are you the Asian kid w/ the small biceps?

Check

[tragic]

is there another tragic?

how many lines you want?

[Trag.]

I'm thinking 12 and the voting date in the rules are wrong.

[Trag.]

12


I lay down cold tracks like hiking through cold snaps in valleys
Navigating to victory... while u need a GPS, Android App and Rand McNally.
Bags sucked u off in the mag so sadly that bias is hard to sway
Take it to a bar brawl n i'd break off every wine bottle to leave a chardonnay.
I see Hens, Kung n Butler in ur style, takin backseat to true emcees
u reinvented the wheel...family vacation, whiny kids AND the booster seat.
I give a shit a/b ya record. say ya nice w/ no quotes to prove it
I'm on the fences lookin my nose down to neighbor like Wilson in Home Improvement.
So keep it a 100...u cant fuck with tragic, cut the antics b
You pussy- i swing on one serious word like Math at Summer Madness 3
A sheltered white kid, outside he's never one to be alone
So neighborhood watch.. cuz he's prime candidate to get robbed when he leaves his home.

[Orc]

Trag.

[Trag.]

yeah post up or send to orc.

[Neighbor]

AYO

You came back on some sucka shit.. way to keep it discreet
Tragic let the cat outta the bag & now his family won't eat for a week
You live w/ ya parents on some ninja assassin shit
This faggot got a Pan face that'd make Cake slit his wrists in embarassment
& all that snake shit jus' makes me wanna beat you incessantly
I wish you showed up late for the due date & ya mom fuckin DQ'd the pregnancy
You Asians are retards, so how you good in the streets?
He thought fish scale was fish scale & Waka Flocka Flame was a cooking technique
Tragic's a misfit - always showin his grandma resistance
S'why you went against the grain.. threw ya apron on the floor & quit the family business
So fuck w/ me, that buck fifty'll get you split by ya cheek
Step outta line & die for the game faster than Grand Theft Auto's midnight release

[namesake]

Bags sucked u off in the mag so sadly that bias is hard to sway
Take it to a bar brawl n i'd break off every wine bottle to leave a chardonnay
nicee
I give a shit a/b ya record. say ya nice w/ no quotes to prove it
I'm on the fences lookin my nose down to neighbor like Wilson in Home Improvement.
solid

You came back on some sucka shit.. way to keep it discreet
Tragic let the cat outta the bag & now his family won't eat for a week
i lol'd at this man, dope
You Asians are retards, so how you good in the streets?
He thought fish scale was fish scale & Waka Flocka Flame was a cooking technique
nicee

best battle i've read in nbl thus far... trag that chard wp was nice man.... neigh that cat bar was fire ... yeah ot neigh taking this one. solid showing from both.

Vote Neigh

[Cashius]

Chardonnay

Vs.

Wack flacka, out of line


I was picky with quotes. Tragic was decent but I've seen some of those Neighbor concepts before. Neigh was consistant. Almost quoted pan face but wasn't crazy about the execution. He still got it, tho.

Neigh.

[Beyond]

I lay down cold tracks like hiking through cold snaps in valleys
Navigating to victory... while u need a GPS, Android App and Rand McNally.
I see Hens, Kung n Butler in ur style, takin backseat to true emcees
u reinvented the wheel...family vacation, whiny kids AND the booster seat.
So keep it a 100...u cant fuck with tragic, cut the antics b
You pussy- i swing on one serious word like Math at Summer Madness 3

vs

You came back on some sucka shit.. way to keep it discreet
Tragic let the cat outta the bag & now his family won't eat for a week
You Asians are retards, so how you good in the streets?
He thought fish scale was fish scale & Waka Flocka Flame was a cooking technique
Tragic's a misfit - always showin his grandma resistance
S'why you went against the grain.. threw ya apron on the floor & quit the family business


Cool battle. Tragic had opener which was cool. Chardonnay had good wording, but been done too much. Don't agree with him having Hens, Kung or Butler in his style as he's been doing this longer than all of them except maybe butler and always had that style, but quoted it 'cause I thought it was another cool list line. Wilson lines been done on Neighbor and thought the flip was rather sloppy. Should of been on the fense and looking down my nose at Neighbor or something. Engrish, rutherfucker. Ru you speak it? Just seen a Math line, this one wasn't bad though. Neighborhood watch been done a bit too. Zack had his opener which was a lol race personal. He had Pan which I almost quoted, but decided against it to make the battle look more even and on virtue that the multie wasn't very good when it should be in a Neighbor verse. Guess we can't all be so technical, eh? Almost quoted DQ as well, but idk. Fuck it. Cooking flowed smooth. Apron was smooth as well, which s'why I quoted it you ol' swagger jacker you. Didn't quote closer even though GTA is dope as fuck 'cause I haven't personally heard of anyone dying for the game, but I could be wrong? R.I.P. Ronald. Overall best battle I've read so far, but Tragic didn't come fresh enough to take this. Too many old name flips. Should of steered away from those. Props to both.

/v mrs. swag & flow

[Trag.]

thanks for the vote, but 'looking my nose down' is a phrase/idiom of condescension, so i left it worded that way...

[Dominate]

Tragic was good, didn't know his name before so a pleasant surprise. Opener was solid, Chardonnay I was gonna do when I battled neigh last week but apparently strikta already did it, wheel was cool, seen too many math/serious lines now but it was alright, opener was the only one I was blah about

DQ pregnancy and wocka flocka flame were LOL, pan face cat out bag and against the grain were all sliiiightly familiar ... Lot of Asian jokes been done... But like how u delivered all of them. Gta line was just OK


Neigh had the 2 standouts to me and the overall feel of the verse was more aggressive and disrespectful, not a landslide though


Neigh

[Sn00p]

damn. tragic could've made this reeeally close. cause he had nice concepts with pretty good wording. unfortunately, the best ones (chardonnay & home improvement) have been done multiple times on neighbor. i, too, have sooo many chardonnay lines lying around, fully worded lol. but yea, that decided it in the end. neigh had a good verse. wacka flocka was lolz, asian lines were funny too, especially the opener. tragic had the lines that were played unfortunately and his opener was cool too. but yea,
v/neigh

[Sn00p]

Neighbor wins. Don't vote anymore.