SEMIFINALS - God of War/Alvin Karpis vs. Orc/Hush - ORC/HUSH WIN

[PancakeBrah]

Due Date: Monday, 9/23, Midnight.
Line Limit: 16 Mininum/24 Max.
Extensions by Request

God Of War
Alvin Karpis
Orc
Hush

[Alvin Karpis]

checkkkkk

[Orc]

30

[PancakeBrah]

Orc/Hush's Verse
GOW aka Country & Karpis aka fucker of indians

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Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers
I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs
U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure
If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir'
GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger?
if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger
Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut
If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up
Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly.,
I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies.
This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless
God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives
Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot
.. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top
Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about
The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house

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[PancakeBrah]

GOW/Karpis's Verse
hush aka orc aka redrydinghood


It’s a shame, look. How his past is the reason why yall stay shook
ORC you are a son of a bitch….that slept w/ 20 guys thanks to facebook
She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost
Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast
Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win
I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in
Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails
Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales
I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts
I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track
Yes we get it vic you hit it big, props on the dumb luck
But if you try pushing Kar buttons and start shit, you’ll get fucked up
& why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown
You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes
35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear
Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr

[Hush]

Up

[Hush]

Upper

[Sn00p]

Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers
I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs
^solid open
U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure
If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir'
^seems kinda familiar. giving u the benefit of the doubt tho. not bad
GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger?
if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger
^yep
Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut
If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up
^aite
Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly.,
I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies.
^not bad
This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless
God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives
^aite. god of war/kratos concept kiiinda old
Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot
.. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top
^aite
Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about
The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house
^good closer

vs.

It’s a shame, look. How his past is the reason why yall stay shook
ORC you are a son of a bitch….that slept w/ 20 guys thanks to facebook
^hmm, too simple for my liking
She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost
Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast
^better. still kinda simple (the blow wp), but it's better
Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win
I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in
^lol. funny, but not too clever
Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails
Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales
^again wp is simple, and the line's decent
I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts
I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track
^aite
Yes we get it vic you hit it big, props on the dumb luck
But if you try pushing Kar buttons and start shit, you’ll get fucked up
^not bad
& why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown
You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes
^nice
35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear
Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr
^lol dece

so yea. neither had crazy standouts to me, but neither had too many misses either. all really consistent. but orc & hush's concepts were just more clever to me. karp and gow had some very simple connections that just didn't do anything for me. that's why i gotta give it to orc & hush. it was a cool little read tho. props to both.
v/orc&hush

[hotdogvendorman]

drive in
playstation
muffin top
tee pee was ok

vs

silencer
pound cake
motown lotb tbh
closer was good


nice battle. ..basically even on quotes. ..difference is gow n karp had more humor in they lines and didn't miss as big imo first 6 lines in orc/hush verse were boring and mad ineffective especially with their caliber. ...close battle but i got gow n ak with better ideas n execution overall

v/akgow

[Frank Metts]

Tote em line was ill and everything after that was fairly strong ... started slow not misses but soft hits closer was illy

Vs

Potato line was great Maybe lotb and from kar buttons down was strong with another ill closer felt the start of the verse was slower then the opp and stalled right at red tales then picked back up and finished strong .. shits close I like the potato line was shit was smooth simple and relevant ... last 3 lines hit just as hard as thiers

but I think hush/orc edge it out

[Dominate]

Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers
I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs
OK... decent...
U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure
If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir'
lollllll good. funny
GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger?
if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger
hahaha. wp is simple but more wasn't needed, the punch was strong enough on its own. Set up well, too
Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut
If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up
heh, cool... not bad
Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly.,
I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies.
nice. swag & flowish but the punch/wp were still pretty strong
This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless
God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives
ehhh nah... generic 'box' wp
Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot
.. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top
heh, cool... not bad
Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about
The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house
lmao @ chieftan spouse ... that extra detail of the flip made this line
.[/QUOTE]




vs



It’s a shame, look. How his past is the reason why yall stay shook
ORC you are a son of a bitch….that slept w/ 20 guys thanks to facebook
heh, cool personal flip
She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost
Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast
cool, not bad np
Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win
I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in
Not bad... I think a line like this needs more of a swag/flow element to it to really hit. Points for creativity but didn't hit that hard
Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails
Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales
not bad... didn't know that alias but OK, cool
I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts
I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track
good... esp cuz Orc is known as a Drake fan
Yes we get it vic you hit it big, props on the dumb luck
But if you try pushing Kar buttons and start shit, you’ll get fucked up
Nice personal/self np combo. This was clever
& why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown
You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes
LOL. Good
35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear
Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr
[B]eh this line didn't do much for me. I'm down with the diss on him blowing the money on BS but felt the line was too statementish


Close. I need to re-read.


Edge to Orc/Hush. Their wording was stronger and funnier throughout the whole verse. Gow/Karp had the motown line which was hilarious and pound cakes was good as well, but even the rest of the stuff that was good just wasn't delivered in as much of a belittling manor as Orc/Hush, so overall I enjoyed Orc/Hush a little more


v/ Horc

[Lucos]

Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers
I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs
[cool opener]
U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure
If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir'
[yeah]
GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger?
if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger
[nice]
Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut
If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up
[naaah]
Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly.,
I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies.
[ok]
This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless
God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives
[feels played or just obvious, nah]
Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot
.. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top
[k]
Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about
The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house
[lol]



It’s a shame, look. How his past is the reason why yall stay shook
ORC you are a son of a bitch….that slept w/ 20 guys thanks to facebook
[and the rest? decent]
She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost
Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast
[aigh]
Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win
I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in
[lol'd]
Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails
Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales
[ok]
I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts
I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track
[not for me]
Yes we get it vic you hit it big, props on the dumb luck
But if you try pushing Kar buttons and start shit, you’ll get fucked up
[needed a better setup]
& why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown
You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes
[yes]
35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear
Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr
[cool]


orc/hush got this one, punches had a harder sting and because the setups weren't as plain imo..

[DLB]

Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers
I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs
U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure
If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir'
GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger?
if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger
Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about
The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house

vs

Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win
I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in
& why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown
You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes
35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear
Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr

v - orc/hush. they had consistency in this battle, 4 vs 3. most of their lines just were coming out stronger too due to better wording. most of the concepts weren't played but i've seen them done before in this battle on both sides, u guys did word it better tho and some made me lol like the motown line and the chieftan spouse

[Allen Knight]

GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger?
if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger
Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut
If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up
Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly.,
I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies.
This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless
God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives
Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot
.. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top

vs

She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost
Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast
Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win
I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in
Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails
Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales
I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts
I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track

V/orc n hush, another dope battle this was cool i thought both brought some heat
but i felt orc an vic had harder hits here tbh but def a dope battle ak n gow wasnt as consistent here imo but nice read props to both

[ill nik-A]

There's a lotta wack shit being quoted I'll be back later smh

[StarFaggot]

Horc

Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers
I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs
ehh just ok
U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure
If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir'
kinda funny but being wealthy isn't really a diss to me
GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger?
if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger
Standard stuff here, cool
Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut
If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up
Cool
Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly.,
I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies.
like the inner multis here. bar is ok
This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless
God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives
this is just lazy
Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot
.. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top
basic
Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about
The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house
ha ok.. this is cool

Overall I think you guys may be trying to get by on arrogance alone... Seemed like you didn't really try but still had some decent stuff



Garp

It’s a shame, look. How his past is the reason why yall stay shook
ORC you are a son of a bitch….that slept w/ 20 guys thanks to facebook
I was thinking there'd be more to this but it ended in an obvious way
She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost
Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast
good bc of the actual name
Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win
I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in
ehhh... ok
Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails
Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales
aiiiight
I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts
I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track
LOL...
Yes we get it vic you hit it big, props on the dumb luck
But if you try pushing Kar buttons and start shit, you’ll get fucked up
ha, Kar nameplay is done but this works bc Vic's thread
& why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown
You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes
this is cool
35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear
Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr
lol sting

started off slow but then got good towards the end




Decent little battle here. Seemed a bit rushed on both ends.. Garp had the lines that appealed to me so MVGT

GARP