Vicodin (0-0) vs. Joe Boston (0-0) JOE WINS

[Vicodin]

10 lines
due w/e
first to 5 votes wins

[Joe Boston]

Check gl Vicodin

[Vicodin]

u2, check

[Joe Boston]

Vicodin


Your not a thug but when we tell you ur ass don't listen
If I was to pop Vicodin it wouldn't be me addicted to that prescription
Just lay down n play dead u don't want a sharp right to the back of the head
When Joe whip that ass it'll be more Strikta then that nigga was in ur callout thread
I'm fucking his bitch and I know he thinks that isn't cool
She be like Joe don't u Everest while ur poor and black enrolled in that school
1 minute in the ring trust me u won't fucking last
Every time u talk we CBS and fucking with Joe will have ur face on that news broadcast
I'm straight hitting u with these shots it's more then u can handle
Once I catch him with the K have em thinking he watching the telemundo channel

Links:

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?1384-Camp-Bell-(1-0)-vs-Jo-E-Murder-(0-0)-OPEN-FOR-VOTES

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?1642-2triple0-vs-flo-real-OPEN-FOR-VOTES

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?513-bleak-(0-0)-vs-Diasik-(0-0)-DIASICK-WINS

[Joe Boston]

Vicodin gonna drop my dude??

[Vicodin]

forgot about this, I'll drop within the hour

[Vicodin]

this clown's joys? crack, round toys, ass...
yall about to see a JBL, while this faggot slams men in a cowboy hat
JUST noticed u dropped.. what did u even bring kid?
ur lines are kinda coo' Joe, except older that Stephen King flick
bitches? ur tryin, but every chick is defiant
if u ever Cayman a pussy, it had to be at least the width of the Islands
this is murder, but even ur own fam ain't bothered B
if I got ur mom's panties in a Nott, I timed how fast she took em off for me
n let's be honest.. prepare urself, softy
we'd only talk about Boston Bruin fire if more ppl cared about hockey

[Joe Boston]

Good drop Vicodin yo@Sik there's a vote on the poll must of hit by mistake on my phone can u fix it my bad. Uppin for votes yall

[bleak]

ALL THE WORDPLAYS!!!

Joe- something about your wording is off to me. Each bar by itself was nice, but when the flow chops up it makes it hard to read. That being said, your punches still hit hard while feeding off the WP's. Even while it was a difficult read, the punches still had the sting that is required in a verse. Some of the WP's were corny, btw. e.g. the CBS and the Everest. The only line I didn't like was the latter of the two. I didn't love the rest, but still a decent drop.

Vicodin- I could give you the same feedback, as far as the wordplays being corny. I don't feel like your concepts saved the lack of intensity, go for the throat and your verses will come together. You could have taken this easily with a few tweaks here and there, but as it stands-

v/Joe

[Geno]

Good battle.

Joe had some pretty cool flips. The strikta line was cool. The last bar was a total miss to me thouggh.

Vicodin. You had the coo joe line and the rest seemed off to me. Gotta bbring more material like that for the win here but didnt

I got..
V -joe b

[Sharp]

Just lay down n play dead u don't want a sharp right to the back of the head
When Joe whip that ass it'll be more Strikta then that nigga was in ur callout thread
I'm fucking his bitch and I know he thinks that isn't cool
She be like Joe don't u Everest while ur poor and black enrolled in that school

Opener was almost

this clown's joys? crack, round toys, ass...
yall about to see a JBL, while this faggot slams men in a cowboy hat
JUST noticed u dropped.. what did u even bring kid?
ur lines are kinda coo' Joe, except older that Stephen King flick
n let's be honest.. prepare urself, softy
we'd only talk about Boston Bruin fire if more ppl cared about hockey


I do feel like there were a few awkardly worded spots in both verses, but all in all, pretty good drops from both. Felt like it was pretty close, but I have to edge it to Vicodin here. Lot of wordplay and nameflips here, and I felt like his were stronger overall. Feel like both are pretty much going to be powerhouses once their wording's a little more polished.

V/ Vicodin

[Joe Boston]

Good looks on the feed everyone uppin

[Defiant]

2-1 TO JOE

UPPING

[RPK]

Your not a thug but when we tell you ur ass don't listen
If I was to pop Vicodin it wouldn't be me addicted to that prescription
Okay concept, but wording is off
Just lay down n play dead u don't want a sharp right to the back of the head
When Joe whip that ass it'll be more Strikta then that nigga was in ur callout thread
Okay, but again, wording issues
I'm fucking his bitch and I know he thinks that isn't cool
She be like Joe don't u Everest while ur poor and black enrolled in that school
Meh
1 minute in the ring trust me u won't fucking last
Every time u talk we CBS and fucking with Joe will have ur face on that news broadcast
Ok
I'm straight hitting u with these shots it's more then u can handle
Once I catch him with the K have em thinking he watching the telemundo channel
k que is a played concept

vs.

this clown's joys? crack, round toys, ass...
yall about to see a JBL, while this faggot slams men in a cowboy hat
Okay
JUST noticed u dropped.. what did u even bring kid?
ur lines are kinda coo' Joe, except older that Stephen King flick
Okay, but you used two nps in a row which hurts its impact
bitches? ur tryin, but every chick is defiant
if u ever Cayman a pussy, it had to be at least the width of the Islands
Forced wp hurts this punch
this is murder, but even ur own fam ain't bothered B
if I got ur mom's panties in a Nott, I timed how fast she took em off for me
Meh...
n let's be honest.. prepare urself, softy
we'd only talk about Boston Bruin fire if more ppl cared about hockey
Okay

This was a decent battle. Joe has certainly elevated since I last saw him on RB. Both of you have decent concepts, but have wording issues. Overall I have to give it to joe because he had better hits and came slightly more consistently.

V/Joeboston

[SiK]

Joe had some solid lines....nothing spectacular to me tho....the Vicodin was ok...broadcast was cool

Vicod I wasnt really feeling anything from tbh....The JBL was a decent concept but the way you worded it made it miss bad to me

pretty one sided here with nothing that wow'd me

V/Joe Boston

[Utmost]

Joe
*CBS

Vicodin
*JBL

Pretty close to be honest. Both had some wording issues here, i would say Joe came with fresher material. Ive seen the wp Vicodin came with, done a bit cleaner

v/Joe

[Dominate]

Vicodin


Your not a thug but when we tell you ur ass don't listen
If I was to pop Vicodin it wouldn't be me addicted to that prescription
OK. Bit obvious of a nameplay.
Just lay down n play dead u don't want a sharp right to the back of the head
When Joe whip that ass it'll be more Strikta then that nigga was in ur callout thread
Ehhh nah. Idk if you can have a stricter ass whipping
I'm fucking his bitch and I know he thinks that isn't cool
She be like Joe don't u Everest while ur poor and black enrolled in that school
Cool. Idk of that school but I like the wp and I'm surprised I haven't seen it before
1 minute in the ring trust me u won't fucking last
Every time u talk we CBS and fucking with Joe will have ur face on that news broadcast
Naw. See BS/CBS is super played. This isn't quite the same but it's still a really tired concept
I'm straight hitting u with these shots it's more then u can handle
Once I catch him with the K have em thinking he watching the telemundo channel
K/que... Okayish. Actually haven't seen that wp before but the punch was soso

Links:

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?1384-Camp-Bell-(1-0)-vs-Jo-E-Murder-(0-0)-OPEN-FOR-VOTES

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?1642-2triple0-vs-flo-real-OPEN-FOR-VOTES

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?513-bleak-(0-0)-vs-Diasik-(0-0)-DIASICK-WINS

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[Dominate]

this clown's joys? crack, round toys, ass...
yall about to see a JBL, while this faggot slams men in a cowboy hat
OK. Letter nameplays are rarely good these days. This wasn't but, but nothing wow
JUST noticed u dropped.. what did u even bring kid?
ur lines are kinda coo' Joe, except older that Stephen King flick
Cool, good nameplay
bitches? ur tryin, but every chick is defiant
if u ever Cayman a pussy, it had to be at least the width of the Islands
Good. Dug the set up, and the wp and flip were nice. Bar of the battle.
this is murder, but even ur own fam ain't bothered B
if I got ur mom's panties in a Nott, I timed how fast she took em off for me
Cool. Creative.
n let's be honest.. prepare urself, softy
we'd only talk about Boston Bruin fire if more ppl cared about hockey
I don't care about hockey so I have no idea what Boston bruin is lol. But I get the brewin flip and assume bruin links with hockey. Guess it's cool

I got Vicodin taking this with better creativity and a bit better execution

[Hollywood]

opener, CBS

vs.

Cujo, Cayman, panties in a nott

V/Vicodin

[Dope girl]

This battle a good battle, Joe had some solid bars.
I'm going with Vic for more creative.