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Kaeo Seru
09-23-2013, 12:58 PM
Kaeo Seru
How you gone tell me how to tie my shoes but can't afford em
I sold my soul for these soles, but I bought em
A hard road I walk but at least a nigga comfortable
since I've paid for my time I'm just tryna stay punctual
its not what you know that makes a nigga functional
but how you apply it. keep ya mind on the science
if my appliance is violence, then what you will find is
a grind thats inclined to get you to buy this
Keep in mind its, supply and demand
it feeds on the need of supplies I command
if your need should rely on my brand
would it be awry of your stand to deny that I am
Integral to this part of the plan. a vinyl clutched
the final touch of an artist's hand
remember this during this judgement your passing
If you did your own killing would you need an assassin?



Vulgar
I'm a fiend for this passion but it comes with withdrawal symptoms
and equal detachment for the tongue that absolves with women
AR-15's do the yappin' amidst the hunger to rob the system
Mobbin' pilgrims wear the lauded emblem; souls are accosted kindred
seems you've become a damned breed, insanity has you
Who'd have thought we would be in debt for crooked family values?
In the land of the slouched moon, where Hell's shares vex
while mankind's bankrupt, the sun's energy's collecting welfare checks
so what if it melts their flesh? Tell em even though it's feeling pointless
The truth burns... nobody said it was a healing ointment

Wise Wiggles
09-23-2013, 01:03 PM
In the land of the slouched moon, where Hell's shares vex
while mankind's bankrupt, the sun's energy's collecting welfare checks
so what if it melts their flesh? Tell em even though it's feeling pointless
The truth burns... nobody said it was a healing ointment

^ coolness bro

Read the other one y'all did. Gave it a nod.

PancakeBrah
09-23-2013, 01:59 PM
This reminds me of 'Roar' by Katy Perry

Kaeo Seru
09-27-2013, 09:54 AM
bump

Kaeo Seru
10-17-2013, 05:44 AM
...again.
prolly drop some new shit today tho

kys0
10-17-2013, 10:01 AM
dope

CopyPat
10-17-2013, 03:20 PM
yes its good, you guys have proven this over and over... for me though i just find it boring.. sorry dudes just tryna be honest. there was just nothing there content wise to keep me interested..and the schemes werent over the top enough to offset that. feel me? again i know i put out alot of the same material too, and most ppl do in their own way actually to be honest.. but if its kinda more serious like this i just have no interest in it.. at least if its funny or random i want to see what happens but this just gives me no incentive. haha not hating. u guys know that. i just think ur too good to post stuff like this. try something different, weird, exciting. or at least mess around with waaay more syllables and intensify ur scheming, stay up fuckers

Mr. J
10-17-2013, 07:42 PM
I was feeling Kaeo's beginning...the beginning of the beginning
that felt very well written, the rest was smooth too
your style is pretty cool but then it started bouncing around
Vulgar your verse was pretty sick as well, you always drop something dope
this was short and sweet, your second, third, fourth line?...
I forget but I liked how you built up towards the ending
I enjoyed the lines that Whys quoted as well...dope collab drop fellas