Karaoke vs Allen Knight - KAR WINS

[Orc]

NBL
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Karaoke Allen Knight

[Allen Knight]

Wattup dawg

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Whats good...
10...
Ready when you are...

Bye...

[Allen Knight]

Might need ext or ima drop late night

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

its cool...
i'll post in the am...

Bye...

[Allen Knight]

10 sent to orc
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=164722#post164722
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=20132
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=20134http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=20146

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

You work at a dealership? Well, my credits good enough to get them all
U couldn't spend money like there's no tomorrow if u were a hostage in that Kenyan mall
Your verses are getting redundant & when u drop, we rarely see a nice gem
Guess it's hard to reinvent the wheel when u spend the day trying to realign them
I would run up on you and let shots from the hammer hit your lid
But you're a lightweight, one jab'll get rid of this Rican faster than Strikta did
Hit you with the backhand and spin, both of my fists crackin' your chin
How the fuck do you work in an auto shop and still lack the mechanics to win
I joined your crew for the respect and the crew votes, you know the bonuses
We're supposed to be a band of brothers but u got us looking like the Jonas'

Bye...

[Allen Knight]

on the real theres no proof that ur black dawg

u wanna be black bad, but u don't sell drugs or let metal blast
this cracker literally went on ticketmaster to see if he could buy a ghetto pass
u suck at hittin on bitches, they laugh at this slow queer
shit every line u pitch, strikes out more than mariano riveras whole career
u got bodied bad in the tag, shit niggas trashed u serious
dom fuckin ripped n gutted kar faster than a motor swap in the fast & furious
u dropped weak as fuck in that, this niggas a fag
ironic u got carried by mael, man when u shoulda had that shit in the bag
u try every position wit ur b/f, u aint slaying whores
the way this faggot lacy helmet to helmets the only spot hes aiming for


no namesake votes

[DLB]

You work at a dealership? Well, my credits good enough to get them all
U couldn't spend money like there's no tomorrow if u were a hostage in that Kenyan mall
Your verses are getting redundant & when u drop, we rarely see a nice gem
Guess it's hard to reinvent the wheel when u spend the day trying to realign them
I joined your crew for the respect and the crew votes, you know the bonuses
We're supposed to be a band of brothers but u got us looking like the Jonas'

vs

u wanna be black bad, but u don't sell drugs or let metal blast
this cracker literally went on ticketmaster to see if he could buy a ghetto pass
u dropped weak as fuck in that, this niggas a fag
ironic u got carried by mael, man when u shoulda had that shit in the bag

v- karaoke. I got kar winning this with more quotables, 3 vs 2 but a lot of his lines had a lot of better wording imo than AK's. a lot of the car dealership lines were getting played af tho but some hit strong enough i had to quote them. AK didn't come bad here, just not hard enough to compete.

[Tic]

Not bad from either emcee. Kar came with more personals it seems, and executed them better. He worded the punches effectively and they hit. AK came with some personals as well, but I felt like his wording hurt him here. His execution was poor compared to the machine with a mic. Most of his punches were relevant, but he didnt really have that same sting that Kar had, and wording is most of the reason why.

Vote - Kar

[Dominate]

Hi...

You work at a dealership? Well, my credits good enough to get them all
U couldn't spend money like there's no tomorrow if u were a hostage in that Kenyan mall
cool recent event flip, not bad
Your verses are getting redundant & when u drop, we rarely see a nice gem
Guess it's hard to reinvent the wheel when u spend the day trying to realign them
good. worded well for the punch, good use of personal material
I would run up on you and let shots from the hammer hit your lid
But you're a lightweight, one jab'll get rid of this Rican faster than Strikta did
eh, boring
Hit you with the backhand and spin, both of my fists crackin' your chin
How the fuck do you work in an auto shop and still lack the mechanics to win
pretty good personal & diss
I joined your crew for the respect and the crew votes, you know the bonuses
We're supposed to be a band of brothers but u got us looking like the Jonas'
lol good
Bye...


vs


on the real theres no proof that ur black dawg

u wanna be black bad, but u don't sell drugs or let metal blast
this cracker literally went on ticketmaster to see if he could buy a ghetto pass
LoL, good punch and personal
u suck at hittin on bitches, they laugh at this slow queer
shit every line u pitch, strikes out more than mariano riveras whole career
OK bc of recent event, baseball wp's have been done tho
u got bodied bad in the tag, shit niggas trashed u serious
dom fuckin ripped n gutted kar faster than a motor swap in the fast & furious
I SURE FUCKIN DID... this was OK bc of the personal however both of those nameflips have been done. Still liked it but it wasn't heavy
u dropped weak as fuck in that, this niggas a fag
ironic u got carried by mael, man when u shoulda had that shit in the bag
nice. Good np/wp combo plus carrying on the personal. Good line
u try every position wit ur b/f, u aint slaying whores
the way this faggot lacy helmet to helmets the only spot hes aiming for
the wp had potential but just didn't really come out right. Didn't dig this one



no namesake votes



Both had 2 dope, 2 OK & 1 miss.... but Kar's 2 OK bars were closer to dope than Allen's were. Cool little battle, should be one of the best of this round... wish u guys had gone more


v/ Kar

[Sentex]

Thought this battle was a good one, quite evenly matched. I liked the openers from both of the verses. I think Kar's verse read a little better to me overall.

So in the end I think that I'll give this one to V/ Karaoke. Good battle!

[StarFaggot]

Karaoke:

You work at a dealership? Well, my credits good enough to get them all
U couldn't spend money like there's no tomorrow if u were a hostage in that Kenyan mall
Current event is a plus, concept has potential but this is just ok
Your verses are getting redundant & when u drop, we rarely see a nice gem
Guess it's hard to reinvent the wheel when u spend the day trying to realign them
LOL
I would run up on you and let shots from the hammer hit your lid
But you're a lightweight, one jab'll get rid of this Rican faster than Strikta did
good
Hit you with the backhand and spin, both of my fists crackin' your chin
How the fuck do you work in an auto shop and still lack the mechanics to win
cool
I joined your crew for the respect and the crew votes, you know the bonuses
We're supposed to be a band of brothers but u got us looking like the Jonas'
LOOL

This was a nice consistent verse. The wheel realign was hard.

Allen Knight:

wanna be black bad, but u don't sell drugs or let metal blast
this cracker literally went on ticketmaster to see if he could buy a ghetto pass
haha ok
u suck at hittin on bitches, they laugh at this slow queer
shit every line u pitch, strikes out more than mariano riveras whole career
concept is played no matter what name you put behind it
u got bodied bad in the tag, shit niggas trashed u serious
dom fuckin ripped n gutted kar faster than a motor swap in the fast & furious
bang bang.. & so true
u dropped weak as fuck in that, this niggas a fag
ironic u got carried by mael, man when u shoulda had that shit in the bag
ahhh man close but it doesn't work well for me
u try every position wit ur b/f, u aint slaying whores
the way this faggot lacy helmet to helmets the only spot hes aiming for
is this lay see? concept and wordplay work but the execution is off

Overall this is a nice verse but I think you rushed the concepts.. sometimes its just better to be simple with the execution than go overboard


Good battle. Kar really had no misses while Allen had a few. Allen had lotb & if he had another decent hit it would've been closer but Kar ran away with this one.


MVGT Karaoke.

[Arch.]

realign, mechanics to win and closer

vs

opener and fast and furious...

good shit from both... Kar was just more consistent

vote Kar

[Neighbor]

Reinvent the wheel, mechanics to win, band of brothers

vs.

Ticketmaster, Fast & Furious


This battle was dumb close, even for 10 lines.. I felt like Allen had the bigger shots, but Karaoke was more consistent. Kar, I thought your concepts were really strong, but the way you delivered them lacked some sting. Allen, you had mean personal angles, but the lack of execution hurt you here.

Dope battle & well worth the read, but I always go w/ consistency over big haymakers if shit's that close..

v/ Karaoke

[DLB]

Kar wins