Trag vs Destroyer - TRAG WINS

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Trag. Destroyer

[Destroyer]

sup t-rag?
10

[Trag.]

I'm not the asian kid, fyi


10

[Destroyer]

oh, we'll see about that...

[StarFaggot]

Lol

[Trag.]

Mods clean the thread and I have 16, 10 is kinda meh for a battle.

[Destroyer]

well we agreed on 10 and nobody wants to read 16 of your shitty lines but post up and I'll match it

otherwise, I'm dropping 10

[Trag.]

14, no ext.


father time been kickin ur ass lately, now ur moment is done.
If classic means old & timeless ur every Mozart masterpiece rolled into one.
I'm up on secret societies. s'why this redneck deserved his losses.
Cuz i saw the clandestine operation...n it involved white sheets & burnin crosses.
U say ur girl hates. where u compensate for lack of certain traits.
everytime she goes down n sees despair it mirrors that EXACT look on her face.
& up in the club makin her ass twerk. while u thinkin' she's perfect.
But shit, she got that move down to a t...since there's virtually nothin to werk with.
ya hearings going, ya vision sucks and on medicare payment plans.
Des throw hands? only time u say 'take the gloves off' is for ur prostate exam.
i made ya wife ratchet... talks cheap. she's top 1% at a swap meet.
we raw beat... march up with my angry mob that'll turn the pussy wall street.
Seen ya battle vs hotdog, u lost even tho he aint posted in years.
must be like ur life sellin phones becuz u stayed behind a vendor most ur career.

[Destroyer]

同性恋的
fuck this asian faggot... des throws death blows, u can't handle me
u got killed with neighbor's key like a stalker lied & said he was family
I'm a killer so I walk the streets in a haze of medical, hoes & cocaine
meanwhile, u walk to the buffet & refill trays of general tso's & lo-mein
I know u tried mad hard but against des it's just futile u wack tard
when u lose, we'll probably see a great wall, oh wait.. that's just in ur backyard
this fag tries clownin my job? I'm breakin both of his limbs..
cuz after I give 'em this work, y'all never gonna see T-Mobile again
the way I Bruce Lee these hoes, they all think des is their destiny
while ur one-inch punch is just what ur girl calls ur sex technique
actin all tough while ur unknown- this kid's a asshole
ur just a second-rate resin tryin to act loud - strikta's glass bowl
normally I'd get serius on u & show up in ur hood to scrap...
but u'd prolly sucka punch a nigga... everyone knows all asians are good at Math

[Sentex]

Trag.
father time been kickin ur ass lately, now ur moment is done.
If classic means old & timeless ur every Mozart masterpiece rolled into one.

& up in the club makin her ass twerk. while u thinkin' she's perfect.
But shit, she got that move down to a t...since there's virtually nothin to werk with.

ya hearings going, ya vision sucks and on medicare payment plans.
Des throw hands? only time u say 'take the gloves off' is for ur prostate exam.

Seen ya battle vs hotdog, u lost even tho he aint posted in years.
must be like ur life sellin phones becuz u stayed behind a vendor most ur career.

vs

Destroyer
fuck this asian faggot... des throws death blows, u can't handle me
u got killed with neighbor's key like a stalker lied & said he was family

I know u tried mad hard but against des it's just futile u wack tard
when u lose, we'll probably see a great wall, oh wait.. that's just in ur backyard

this fag tries clownin my job? I'm breakin both of his limbs..
cuz after I give 'em this work, y'all never gonna see T-Mobile again

normally I'd get serius on u & show up in ur hood to scrap...
but u'd prolly sucka punch a nigga... everyone knows all asians are good at Math

vote: Destroyer

I thought this battle was really close, I enjoyed both verses. I don't think either verse had any weak lines, but the ones highlighted above are the stand out lines for me. Overall I think Destroyer just edged it, very good from both though.

[Cunt]

I'm a killer so I walk the streets in a haze of medical, hoes & cocaine
meanwhile, u walk to the buffet & refill trays of general tso's & lo-mein
I know u tried mad hard but against des it's just futile u wack tard
when u lose, we'll probably see a great wall, oh wait.. that's just in ur backyard
this fag tries clownin my job? I'm breakin both of his limbs..
cuz after I give 'em this work, y'all never gonna see T-Mobile again
THIS RUN OF CONSECUTIVE BARS WERE NICE...

VS

Seen ya battle vs hotdog, u lost even tho he aint posted in years.
must be like ur life sellin phones becuz u stayed behind a vendor most ur career.
& up in the club makin her ass twerk. while u thinkin' she's perfect.
But shit, she got that move down to a t...since there's virtually nothin to werk with.
THESE WEREN'T BAD AT ALL...



THIS WAS BETTER THAN I EXPECTED TO BE HONEST, DES SUPRISED ME CAUSE HE'S BEEN WACK AS FUCK LATELY BUT OBV STEPPED IT UP FOR THIS MATCH.. NOT SAW MUCH OF TRAG BUT HE CAME ALRIGHT TOO, SAYING THAT.... DES STILL TOOK THIS COMFORTABLY V- DES

[DLB]

U say ur girl hates. where u compensate for lack of certain traits.
everytime she goes down n sees despair it mirrors that EXACT look on her face.
Seen ya battle vs hotdog, u lost even tho he aint posted in years.
must be like ur life sellin phones becuz u stayed behind a vendor most ur career.

Both quotables really were ok, the despair line was cool, i think i've seen it before but cool wording but the second was iffy. You need to work on your wording tbh

Vs.
I'm a killer so I walk the streets in a haze of medical, hoes & cocaine
meanwhile, u walk to the buffet & refill trays of general tso's & lo-mein
this fag tries clownin my job? I'm breakin both of his limbs..
cuz after I give 'em this work, y'all never gonna see T-Mobile again

v - Trag, the bold wasn't a quotable but seemed to be a bit of a feed that turned into an okay bar. the bar of the battle was non-existent in this battle tbh, des could've won but more than half his verse was stereotypical azn jokes that got played out tbh. trag had 2 quotables vs 1 and des kinda used jokes i seen already against a lot of azn txtcees

[Arch.]

despair to wall street were solid

vs

neighbors key then T-Mobile to glass bowl

even battle on quotes, but T-Mobile hit hard as fuck to me...

vote Destroyer

[Trag.]

uppin over closed battles.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...


father time been kickin ur ass lately, now ur moment is done.
If classic means old & timeless ur every Mozart masterpiece rolled into one.
U say ur girl hates. where u compensate for lack of certain traits.
everytime she goes down n sees despair it mirrors that EXACT look on her face.
ya hearings going, ya vision sucks and on medicare payment plans.
Des throw hands? only time u say 'take the gloves off' is for ur prostate exam.
Seen ya battle vs hotdog, u lost even tho he aint posted in years.
must be like ur life sellin phones becuz u stayed behind a vendor most ur career.

Cool verse...
Despair line was dope and prostrate exam was funny...
u had some terrible misses tho...

fuck this asian faggot... des throws death blows, u can't handle me
u got killed with neighbor's key like a stalker lied & said he was family
I know u tried mad hard but against des it's just futile u wack tard
when u lose, we'll probably see a great wall, oh wait.. that's just in ur backyard
this fag tries clownin my job? I'm breakin both of his limbs..
cuz after I give 'em this work, y'all never gonna see T-Mobile again

One of your better verses...
T Mobile line was fire and great wall was funny...
U had some bad misses too...

This battle was close imo...
I think Trag's lines hit slightly harder...

Vote- Trag....

Bye...

[Beyond]

father time been kickin ur ass lately, now ur moment is done.
If classic means old & timeless ur every Mozart masterpiece rolled into one.
& up in the club makin her ass twerk. while u thinkin' she's perfect.
But shit, she got that move down to a t...since there's virtually nothin to werk with.
Seen ya battle vs hotdog, u lost even tho he aint posted in years.
must be like ur life sellin phones becuz u stayed behind a vendor most ur career.

vs.

I'm a killer so I walk the streets in a haze of medical, hoes & cocaine
meanwhile, u walk to the buffet & refill trays of general tso's & lo-mein
actin all tough while ur unknown- this kid's a asshole
ur just a second-rate resin tryin to act loud - strikta's glass bowl


Good battle. Old & timeless, good opener. Strong wording. Clandestine, fresh nameplay. I likey. Despair, another fresh nameplay. Down to a t is pretty dope. Good wordplay. Take the gloves off another lol old/gay personal. Pussy Wall Street is nice, too. Reminds me of my Seph line. Closer is a strong current personal as well. Neighbor's key was a decent opener. Key/lock connection bleh, though. Refill trays was funny. Great Wall I feel like I've seen before, but honestly not sure (old age?!). I'll give benefit of the doubt. T-Mobile I feel like I've seen or done as well, but don't know. I've probably written every line in every battle from here until the end of time. Fuck it. Thought it was dope, though. Good job! We did it! Hmm, I thought of a similar one-inch punch line. I would of flipped it different and mentioned his tiny Asian schlong even though I know that's what you meant. No homo. Strikta line was funny. Seen quite a few Serius/Math line last week. I remember Blue or maybe even Tragic doing one about good at Math or similar as well. I liked your flip, though. Idk. Overall, as you can see from this wall, I could pretty much quote both verses. Could go either way, but I'm going to go with Tragic. Thought Des won upon first read, but on this read thought Tragic won. With another read might flip flop again, but fucking reading. Amirite? Amiblack? Trag seemed to just have more original concepts. Some of Des' rang bells, but didn't necessarily blow whistles. Props to both.

/v trag.

[Blue Bayou]

I'm up on secret societies. s'why this redneck deserved his losses.
Cuz i saw the clandestine operation...n it involved white sheets & burnin crosses.
& up in the club makin her ass twerk. while u thinkin' she's perfect.
But shit, she got that move down to a t...since there's virtually nothin to werk with.
Seen ya battle vs hotdog, u lost even tho he aint posted in years.
must be like ur life sellin phones becuz u stayed behind a vendor most ur career.

vs.

fuck this asian faggot... des throws death blows, u can't handle me
u got killed with neighbor's key like a stalker lied & said he was family
this fag tries clownin my job? I'm breakin both of his limbs..
cuz after I give 'em this work, y'all never gonna see T-Mobile again


Enjoyable battle... both had some cool bars but i've got Trag edging it bcuz i think Destroyer really fell short with some mediocre asian punches.. trag had the extra quotable and imo more creative and better concepts... props to both

Vote - Trag

[~RustyGunZ~]

I'm up on secret societies. s'why this redneck deserved his losses.
Cuz i saw the clandestine operation...n it involved white sheets & burnin crosses.
& up in the club makin her ass twerk. while u thinkin' she's perfect.
But shit, she got that move down to a t...since there's virtually nothin to werk with.
Seen ya battle vs hotdog, u lost even tho he aint posted in years.
must be like ur life sellin phones becuz u stayed behind a vendor most ur career.

opener was garbage. clandestine was a dope nameplay. despair was forced to me. down to a t was creative. prostate exam was wack. wack again an the closer was okay, nothing great but a cool personal.

vs

fuck this asian faggot... des throws death blows, u can't handle me
u got killed with neighbor's key like a stalker lied & said he was family
I know u tried mad hard but against des it's just futile u wack tard
when u lose, we'll probably see a great wall, oh wait.. that's just in ur backyard
this fag tries clownin my job? I'm breakin both of his limbs..
cuz after I give 'em this work, y'all never gonna see T-Mobile again
the way I Bruce Lee these hoes, they all think des is their destiny
while ur one-inch punch is just what ur girl calls ur sex technique

opener was cool, nothing special cus neighbor bars are a bit done. buffet was a stupid bar. great wall was a cool asian joke. t-mobile was dope to me. one inch punch actually got a laugh out of me. the next two weren't good at all.

v/des

[Boredom]

U say ur girl hates. where u compensate for lack of certain traits.
everytime she goes down n sees despair it mirrors that EXACT look on her face.
ya hearings going, ya vision sucks and on medicare payment plans.
Des throw hands? only time u say 'take the gloves off' is for ur prostate exam.
Seen ya battle vs hotdog, u lost even tho he aint posted in years.
must be like ur life sellin phones becuz u stayed behind a vendor most ur career.

vs

fuck this asian faggot... des throws death blows, u can't handle me
u got killed with neighbor's key like a stalker lied & said he was family
I know u tried mad hard but against des it's just futile u wack tard
when u lose, we'll probably see a great wall, oh wait.. that's just in ur backyard
this fag tries clownin my job? I'm breakin both of his limbs..
cuz after I give 'em this work, y'all never gonna see T-Mobile again

this battle was pretty even, old jokes vs asian jokes but all in all traj had the harder hitters and more direct approach as well as i felt his non quotables hit harder, could go either way but i have trag with the slight edge.

[Sn00p]

father time been kickin ur ass lately, now ur moment is done.
If classic means old & timeless ur every Mozart masterpiece rolled into one.
^aite, not bad
I'm up on secret societies. s'why this redneck deserved his losses.
Cuz i saw the clandestine operation...n it involved white sheets & burnin crosses.
^fresh. like it
U say ur girl hates. where u compensate for lack of certain traits.
everytime she goes down n sees despair it mirrors that EXACT look on her face.
^haha good
& up in the club makin her ass twerk. while u thinkin' she's perfect.
But shit, she got that move down to a t...since there's virtually nothin to werk with.
^aite, not my style tho
ya hearings going, ya vision sucks and on medicare payment plans.
Des throw hands? only time u say 'take the gloves off' is for ur prostate exam.
^wouldn't it be 'put on gloves'? that threw me off. was dece otherwise
i made ya wife ratchet... talks cheap. she's top 1% at a swap meet.
we raw beat... march up with my angry mob that'll turn the pussy wall street.
^yup
Seen ya battle vs hotdog, u lost even tho he aint posted in years.
must be like ur life sellin phones becuz u stayed behind a vendor most ur career.
^solid close

vs.

fuck this asian faggot... des throws death blows, u can't handle me
u got killed with neighbor's key like a stalker lied & said he was family
^yea, okay
I'm a killer so I walk the streets in a haze of medical, hoes & cocaine
meanwhile, u walk to the buffet & refill trays of general tso's & lo-mein
^was funny, but really simple. like the whole connection was that u walk this way while he walks that way.
I know u tried mad hard but against des it's just futile u wack tard
when u lose, we'll probably see a great wall, oh wait.. that's just in ur backyard
^not bad. wording coulda been a bit harsher. solid line
this fag tries clownin my job? I'm breakin both of his limbs..
cuz after I give 'em this work, y'all never gonna see T-Mobile again
^this was good. best line of ur verse so far
the way I Bruce Lee these hoes, they all think des is their destiny
while ur one-inch punch is just what ur girl calls ur sex technique
actin all tough while ur unknown- this kid's a asshole
ur just a second-rate resin tryin to act loud - strikta's glass bowl
normally I'd get serius on u & show up in ur hood to scrap...
but u'd prolly sucka punch a nigga... everyone knows all asians are good at Math
^seen this at leas 3 times last wk already. lost the impact for me

trag hit harder when he hit and he hit more. this wasn't onsided at all tho. des had some nice lines (t-mobile mighta been lotb), but i preferred trag's style here. others might see it differently, i got trag tho. good shit to both tho. cool read.
v/trag

[DLB]

More votes plz

its 6-4 trag

[Tic]

I think Trag was more consistent with his punches. That "despair" line was dope, and I think the bar of the battle. I'm not usually too keen on 'your girl' jokes, but this was a direct shot at him, instead. I think he had a few pretty good punches that followed one another, and made the verse flow pretty easily. Des came pretty nice with that T-Mobile line (assuming he works @ T-Mobile, otherwise it's a failed attempt at wordplay). But I'm giving the slight edge to Trag here based on consistency.