RD1: Philly vs. Arch. aka Solomon Grundy - {Philly wins}

[Strikta]

The Long Anticipated...
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Round 1

Rules:

10 lines minimum/16 maximum (If u & ur oppenent agree to more that's fine)
No swaying
No biting
No recycling
No other dumb shit that will get u DQd

Voting on 6 battles is mandatory, or u will be docked 2 for every one u miss. Links MUST be posted in the voting links thread at the top of the forum.

Any other questions or concerns PM myself or Sn00p.

Philly Arch.

[Arch.]

Hi

[Strikta]

Verses due Thursday, October 3rd @ 11:59 pm CST

[Arch.]

Philly hasn't even checked in. I'll give him til tomorrow. I'm gonna get some work done

The Bully 12 is cool
The Bully work is crazy. One more extension? I can drop about 0930 eastern time

[The Bully]

12
Due tomorrow by 10:30 PM eastern.
I'll send mine when I'm done.

[Arch.]

Just got off. Keying now and I'll send to Strik

[Arch.]

Well...

I supply your bitch with pills. Without her fix she's acting crazy
Arch have her calling for that Ex to comfort like Strik's girl having a baby
She's the definition of a jump off but fat as fuck. A jiggling slut
If you think she has a Coke bottle figure... it's cuz liquid's filling her guts
My arsenal's unstoppable. Give me a reason to show that I'll clap
Get a 38, 45 or 50 to your face... Oldify App
Your crew is weak as fuck. When there's drama they'll never tussle
Shit... anyone Running with The Bull's always known to avoid trouble
I'm on some God shit to the public. Chilling with socialites proposing a toast
If you ever raised your social status... you're just on Facebook promoting a post
Niggas think you're getting dope but I'm known to astound dudes
So if you're on the path to greatness... it's as bump I run over to round 2


...blah...

[The Bully]

After seein ur pics dude.. I'm gonna guess there's a lotta scenes ur not hip to
ur such a nightmare in public, when u go out ya prolly bring a fuckin dreamcatcher with u
Revered soldier? Please. You should see how this kid gets degraded
You've taken more random dicks under a tent than Alvin's bitch when they dated
Reading your past verses was a drag dude - thought you might have new swag
Got rid of the "etype"...but still e-typing ur shitty bars in special font like some huge fag
Back home you never get sex boss, any second with dude is rep tossed
If a girl's sober enough to know where she is...I guarantee she's tellin you to get lost
Look, you don't know me. All of my homies got hearts thats froze as shit
& his blood'll flood the streets.. when I put more animals out on this Arch than Noah did
So let it go. You'll never be addressed as a "vet", "great", or "GOAT"
You were the flavor of the month man.......and that was like a decade ago.


At ease.

[ill nik-A]

Arch for me had the running with the bulls which was ok, a lotta misses, specially the first half, then the Facebook and bump lines made me cringe, the bully started just as bad with the dream catcher and Alvin line which were really bad, the font was eh ok the get lost was cool and Noah was aight too didn't like the ender

V bully

[Sintro]

Arch strikta opener was nice. Running with the bulls and fb status were both good too. I really don't think anything else was really damaging. Bully had flavor of the month which was ok n the dream catcher concept had potential but I think it was worded pretty bad. Nothing else stood out to me. IMO arch had less misses and more developed punches. Bully lacked emphasis on his punches n came across more basic. Vote arch

[Beyond]

She's the definition of a jump off but fat as fuck. A jiggling slut
If you think she has a Coke bottle figure... it's cuz liquid's filling her guts
Your crew is weak as fuck. When there's drama they'll never tussle
Shit... anyone Running with The Bull's always known to avoid trouble
I'm on some God shit to the public. Chilling with socialites proposing a toast
If you ever raised your social status... you're just on Facebook promoting a post
Niggas think you're getting dope but I'm known to astound dudes
So if you're on the path to greatness... it's as bump I run over to round 2

vs

After seein ur pics dude.. I'm gonna guess there's a lotta scenes ur not hip to
ur such a nightmare in public, when u go out ya prolly bring a fuckin dreamcatcher with u
Revered soldier? Please. You should see how this kid gets degraded
You've taken more random dicks under a tent than Alvin's bitch when they dated
Back home you never get sex boss, any second with dude is rep tossed
If a girl's sober enough to know where she is...I guarantee she's tellin you to get lost
Look, you don't know me. All of my homies got hearts thats froze as shit
& his blood'll flood the streets.. when I put more animals out on this Arch than Noah did


Nice battle. Ex/X not really original, but I liked the punchline. Coke bottle figure was good. Thought you'd take it in a played direction, but you didn't. Oldify App not familiar with, but can put two and two together, so not bad. Running with The Bull's is solid. Could of used strong connection, but it's growing on me. Social status is good. Not too risky, but pays off. Path to greatness was cool. Feel like I seen it before, but can't put a finger on it. Nightmare in public was a good opener. Real smooth. Under a tent was cool. Could of used more, but somewhat funny no less. Eype wasn't feeling. Just seemed too statementish, not creative enough. Get lost was cool. Kind of clever. Animals out on this Arch was dope. Haven't seen that particular nameplay on him before. Closer was a throwaway. You can do better than that. Overall, pretty close battle. Philly maybe have had LOTB and a couple of slightly better standouts, but I was feeling Arch's unquotes and his standouts better than the couple of standouts I didn't like as much from Philly. Could really go either way, but I think Arch edges this on consistency for me. Philly's highs were higher than Arch's, but Arch stayed at a consistent level throughout and didn't really have any real absolute lazy lines like Philly did. Props to both.

/v arch.

[Sn00p]

I supply your bitch with pills. Without her fix she's acting crazy
Arch have her calling for that Ex to comfort like Strik's girl having a baby
^not bad
She's the definition of a jump off but fat as fuck. A jiggling slut
If you think she has a Coke bottle figure... it's cuz liquid's filling her guts
^hah, aite
My arsenal's unstoppable. Give me a reason to show that I'll clap
Get a 38, 45 or 50 to your face... Oldify App
^cool concept, wording seemed a little rushed
Your crew is weak as fuck. When there's drama they'll never tussle
Shit... anyone Running with The Bull's always known to avoid trouble
^yup
I'm on some God shit to the public. Chilling with socialites proposing a toast
If you ever raised your social status... you're just on Facebook promoting a post
^nice
Niggas think you're getting dope but I'm known to astound dudes
So if you're on the path to greatness... it's as bump I run over to round 2
^kinda dece

i liked the running with bull and social status lines. rest weren't really misses, but didn't hit too hard either. that oldify line coulda been really dope, but it seemed rushed as fuck.

After seein ur pics dude.. I'm gonna guess there's a lotta scenes ur not hip to
ur such a nightmare in public, when u go out ya prolly bring a fuckin dreamcatcher with u
^idk, the line was good, but arch never seemed like an antisocial kinda guy to me.
Revered soldier? Please. You should see how this kid gets degraded
You've taken more random dicks under a tent than Alvin's bitch when they dated
^solid
Reading your past verses was a drag dude - thought you might have new swag
Got rid of the "etype"...but still e-typing ur shitty bars in special font like some huge fag
^e-typing seems forced as a connection
Back home you never get sex boss, any second with dude is rep tossed
If a girl's sober enough to know where she is...I guarantee she's tellin you to get lost
^like it
Look, you don't know me. All of my homies got hearts thats froze as shit
& his blood'll flood the streets.. when I put more animals out on this Arch than Noah did
^the nameplay's been done, but this flip wasn't bad
So let it go. You'll never be addressed as a "vet", "great", or "GOAT"
You were the flavor of the month man.......and that was like a decade ago.
^connection is really loose. idk. this seems very indirect.

opener was a good concept that didn't hit too much. i mean i've seen arch's pics, and he didn't strike me as weird or something. dicks under a tent was aite. etyping missed. get lost was cool. best line of the verse. arch was a cool flipped on a somewhat tired concept. closer was not bad, but didn't hit either.

overall, arch was more consistent to me. philly had the best bar of the battle, but he had some misses too, while arch didn't really have a line i disliked. so yea, i'mma go with consistency here and give it to arch. neither seemed to try too hard, but it was still a cool battle. close too. can see ppl v/philly. but i got arch.
v/arch

[Swerve]

I supply your bitch with pills. Without her fix she's acting crazy
Arch have her calling for that Ex to comfort like Strik's girl having a baby
She's the definition of a jump off but fat as fuck. A jiggling slut
If you think she has a Coke bottle figure... it's cuz liquid's filling her guts
Your crew is weak as fuck. When there's drama they'll never tussle
Shit... anyone Running with The Bull's always known to avoid trouble

vs.

After seein ur pics dude.. I'm gonna guess there's a lotta scenes ur not hip to
ur such a nightmare in public, when u go out ya prolly bring a fuckin dreamcatcher with u
Reading your past verses was a drag dude - thought you might have new swag
Got rid of the "etype"...but still e-typing ur shitty bars in special font like some huge fag
Back home you never get sex boss, any second with dude is rep tossed
If a girl's sober enough to know where she is...I guarantee she's tellin you to get lost


Really close and I'm really surprised tbh, I thought this was going to be Philly running away with it. However, Arch came really good and I honestly thought he would take it but the end of his verse really fell off. Philly was just more consistent with it and that's why he took it for me.

V/ Bully

[Strikta]

3-2 Arch.

MORE VOTES PLZ!!

[Sho Money EMG]

Well...

I supply your bitch with pills. Without her fix she's acting crazy
Arch have her calling for that Ex to comfort like Strik's girl having a baby
^ cool opener

She's the definition of a jump off but fat as fuck. A jiggling slut
If you think she has a Coke bottle figure... it's cuz liquid's filling her guts
^ not really feeling this

My arsenal's unstoppable. Give me a reason to show that I'll clap
Get a 38, 45 or 50 to your face... Oldify App
^ okay

Your crew is weak as fuck. When there's drama they'll never tussle
Shit... anyone Running with The Bull's always known to avoid trouble
^ alright
I'm on some God shit to the public. Chilling with socialites proposing a toast
If you ever raised your social status... you're just on Facebook promoting a post
^ kinda basic but okay line

Niggas think you're getting dope but I'm known to astound dudes
So if you're on the path to greatness... it's as bump I run over to round 2
^ cool closer
...blah...

Vs

After seein ur pics dude.. I'm gonna guess there's a lotta scenes ur not hip to
ur such a nightmare in public, when u go out ya prolly bring a fuckin dreamcatcher with u
^ lol feelin it
Revered soldier? Please. You should see how this kid gets degraded
You've taken more random dicks under a tent than Alvin's bitch when they dated
^ lol dope
Reading your past verses was a drag dude - thought you might have new swag
Got rid of the "etype"...but still e-typing ur shitty bars in special font like some huge fag
^ okay this was cool
Back home you never get sex boss, any second with dude is rep tossed
If a girl's sober enough to know where she is...I guarantee she's tellin you to get lost
^ lol nice
Look, you don't know me. All of my homies got hearts thats froze as shit
& his blood'll flood the streets.. when I put more animals out on this Arch than Noah did
^ like this aswell
So let it go. You'll never be addressed as a "vet", "great", or "GOAT"
You were the flavor of the month man.......and that was like a decade ago.
^ nice closer

overall, seems like a clearly onesided battle to me. Philly was way more creative and consistent. Good battle tho.

Mvgt Philly

[Strikta]

3-3 Tie.

NEEDS MORE VOTES!

[Frank Metts]

Arch - opener ex plays are old but the subject matter made it fresh as shit good hitting shit, coke bottle concept was cool but were all 80% liquid so it just didn't connect but this could of been dope with some other elements, I don't like pause lines.... Drake ... but this one was gutter and it hit I liked it ... Running with the bulls was straight as shit I liked it ... Facebook line was weak it's just so hard to make a Facebook line that isn't a real personal connect I liked how the concept played out just didn't hit hard at all ... Closer was alright you missed a word in their but it's ok I see what you were doing, personally I'd of opened with this and closed with something a little harder but that's just preference doesn't affect the line at all good verse some misses but not any in a row so the verse never lost steam nice drop

Philly - opener was straight good way to start it off , second line was comedy I laughed can't believe Alvin girl references can still make me laugh but this one did, next line was ok not a hard hitter though get lost line was ok hit hard enough to probably be a quotable but it was simple but sometimes simple prevails , Noah's arc was cool but seems like at least the np been done but this is fresh to me I liked it maybe lotn and you closed it well real good consistent verse my dude few bars that weren't my fav but that doesn't mean they weren't good

This was a pretty good battle maybe the best one I've read this round I think top to bottom Philly gets this on consistency and a few bars that seem to hit harder then archs .. This is one of those battles were you wish arch could just fill one of the Many no show spots and get to round 2 because he'd prob have another good snowing as opposed to all the cheap wins that we're handed out this round

V/Philly

[Allen Knight]

he's the definition of a jump off but fat as fuck. A jiggling slut
If you think she has a Coke bottle figure... it's cuz liquid's filling her guts
Your crew is weak as fuck. When there's drama they'll never tussle
Shit... anyone Running with The Bull's always known to avoid trouble

vs.

After seein ur pics dude.. I'm gonna guess there's a lotta scenes ur not hip to
ur such a nightmare in public, when u go out ya prolly bring a fuckin dreamcatcher with u
Reading your past verses was a drag dude - thought you might have new swag
Got rid of the "etype"...but still e-typing ur shitty bars in special font like some huge fag
Back home you never get sex boss, any second with dude is rep tossed
If a girl's sober enough to know where she is...I guarantee she's tellin you to get lost


V/philly, this was a real close battle both dropped nice, I think phil was more consistent here, liked arches coke bottle flip but phils get lost line was nice. Nice battle props yahll.

[Strikta]

Philly wins, 5-3