VBB/KNK PRESENT: Detour vs Lakhryth (SHIT GETS AIRED OUT LOL)

[detour]

yeah...some shit got aired out in this one...lakhryth is a hella strange dude smh...I took this battle on 10 hours notice when dirt called an said he missed his flight...can't believe I remembered all that shit...I think my verse really picks up the second half delivery wise, but I'm happy with the bars throughout...not quite the dizaster performance stage wise, but given the circumstances I think I put on...lemme know what y'all think bout them bars...especially the megans list shit hahaha...lakhryth is definitely on some whole other shit, some unquantifiable alternate dimension of blending written an freestyles into a rapid fire something I can't put into words...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k1f8ddiL6Ow

[NYCSPITZ]

ur wack and the miniscule crowd all look gay/metrosexual

[DLB]

why are these hillbillies rap battling

[DLB]

asher roth grew a beard and decided to battle the caucasian paul wall

smh

son sound like he gay halfway through his line

[DLB]

i cant tell if that black dude in the middle w/ the hat supposed to be lil wayne, ace hood or 2 chainz.

[Frank Metts]

Sound quality made me miss a lot of what was actually said .... from what I heard flow was on point ...

[Wise Wiggles]

Could you beat Eminem, De? Real talk though.

[detour]

all day wise...

[DLB]

how u get ether'd by a nigga who turn red when he speeds up his flow detour

gtfoh

[Diode]

lol @ not on the level of the dizaster battle

so you stopped biting vakill now or what

[detour]

never bit him in the first place...how's the steroids treating u these days fuck boy? post this battle to ur twitter btw lest u feel the wrath of these cannons...

[DLB]

Steriods are a bad. Bad diode.

stop biting pjk

[detour]

tyson bit me...I just recycled...I been saying that since '05 dumbass...

[DLB]

plz quote or u are a confirmed biter on multiple accounts

[veritas]

Joshua...I am your number one fan but I was not feeling this sorry.

If you would like honest constructive criticism I will tell you

[detour]

ten hours prep time...is what it is...

[Fart]

WAY too long round limits. This is unwatchable

[veritas]

Agree.

[Boredom]

vakil biter smhhhhh. i dunno ur shits the same every battle, gets repetitive and lame very fast.

rounds were waaaaay to long

[detour]

it was one five minute round...like I said, not exactly my best foot forward, but given the circumstances I think it was pretty good...I'll be dropping a vlog with the dirt bars soon, that'll probably be pretty good hahaha...

[PancakeBrah]

Quit making excuses. You put it out there. Quit responding to every critique. You're not stellar. Try harder at being better.

[detour]

forgive me for actually responding to people instead of ignoring them an acting like I'm above speaking to others...also forgive me for admitting this isn't my best showing instead of pretending like it is...any other life lessons u'd like to bless me with?

[PancakeBrah]

No. The ones I posted earlier still apply. You're below average so work harder to be better.

[detour]

word man thx for taking the time out ur busy day to give me such in depth an valuable responses...if there's ever anything I can do for u don't hesitate to ask...

[Zen]

I'll give constructive criticism without meaning to be a dick. The flow was good, but the problem I had with this was that you talked about shooting him and shit like that throughout the verse and only delivering a few punches. The punches you did do were ok considering the time restraints. Another thing, stop flailing your arms. That shit made me cringe honestly. If I was battling you I would bust out laughing if you flailed your arms like that. Js.
So my advice would be to stop telling people you'll shoot them and insult them more without flailing your arms.

[PancakeBrah]

word man thx for taking the time out ur busy day to give me such in depth an valuable responses...if there's ever anything I can do for u don't hesitate to ask...

Lol

[veritas]

too much filler. too much guns. slooow it down a little. I had trouble understanding what you were saying. I hate to say it Joshua it got a little boring...just keeping it real.

[DLB]

detour needs to battle better comp so they can expose him for being a netcee wanksta tbh

[veritas]

http://i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/224/511/1333839_700b.jpg

[detour]

I'll give constructive criticism without meaning to be a dick. The flow was good, but the problem I had with this was that you talked about shooting him and shit like that throughout the verse and only delivering a few punches. The punches you did do were ok considering the time restraints. Another thing, stop flailing your arms. That shit made me cringe honestly. If I was battling you I would bust out laughing if you flailed your arms like that. Js.
So my advice would be to stop telling people you'll shoot them and insult them more without flailing your arms.

u know it's funny cuz I've been thinking the same thing about the arm motions...it's hard sometimes, cuz as a rapper u tend to keep ur rhythm a lot with ur hands...plus, didn't get to rehearse...definitely something I've been tryna calm down tho hahaha...an word @ it going too fast, I think I was tryin too hard to snap on the guy cuz I wasn't as comfortable with the material...all great advice tbh...

[PancakeBrah]

I disagree

[detour]

with what part lol?