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Mike Wrecka
09-30-2013, 04:42 PM
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Season 2

Rules

Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST

Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST

Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree

Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread , preferably edit it in the check in

If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss
If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension


Topic

Obstacles are what you see when you take your eye off the goal. - Vince Lombardi



Good Luck Just Write Aesthetic

Aesthetic
10-01-2013, 11:13 AM
Goodluck, check.

Just Write
10-04-2013, 02:40 AM
Shawn had it easy, always at the head of his class
A logical student who was also gifted in math
Just give him a task and watch him quickly complete it
The kid was a genius with a promising path
A captain and standout in every sport that he played
Scholarships lined up from duke, to his home town of P.A.
Voted best looking in school, though wasn't one to flaunt it
When it came to women he could have whichever he wanted
It was common for shawn when he went out of his way
If a friend needed help he'd volunteer his time for the day
Everybody loved him, and this was equally shown
But shawn had a secret, see there was evil at home
At 5 shawn was adopted, along with four other kids
Locked in their rooms at night, they had a camera above em
The clark's didn't love them, they were just in it to win
paycheck on the 1st and trips to the bank, cashin em in.


Constantly beaten he had to find some type of excuses
That's why shawn joined the football team, to hide all the bruises
Being told that he's incompetent, awkward and useless
Only made him stronger and smarter, and he wanted to prove it
It Gave him a push needed to be a mathamatical genius
In fact as a sophomore he wrote a collegant caliber thesis
Astounding with speeches, they say he had a golden tongue
They didn't know it came from hours in the mirror trying to hold himself up
He was never shown no love, and didn't know how to be treated
So when a woman approached him he either hid or retreated
He felt simply defeated with yet a sense of progression
He learned to adapt and move about in many different directions
He learned an obstacle is only an obstacle it you continue to let it
Grow into a hopeless notion til it's over, forget it.
Look past all the skeptics, Smile! It's all part of the show
Cuz If you take your eyes off the goal, you know you'll regret.