voidformula
01-30-2013, 06:52 PM
I try to bang out a few verses everyday, here's one from a few minutes ago;
A gruesome image resides vivid in his imaginary mind
Lines far from crossed grow closer each second of time
As the voices lower pitch into demonic states of chime
The restraints once tainting are now consequences deprived
Disguised as his saviour his one single truth within
Slowly reveals the shades which included his kin
The constant pressure to remain a stupor for sins
Starts exterminating reasoning that stood as a brim
Each second passing from the crying to the rattling
Piece by piece adds up to what had to of been
An agonizing pain too strong to withstand
So he reached for his chambered out and clutched the pin
Silence surrounded no sirens would come
Kiss on the forehead thought what have I done
Her infant chest exposing ribs to the sun
Society drained his already minuscule funds
Scavenging the dresser once containing his gun
For any change to escape his loved one
Her scene at the crime will be more than he can handle
Pacing back and forth gripping only a candle
Days never seemed so dark light surrounding dismantles
With nowhere to hide he resides laying with eyes closed
One final breath and his fate is now chose
The heavens reject and satan has spoke
I'm not happy with the 2nd half. Starts to get a bit too simple on the rhyming, but whatever was just some quick shit. Any critics are welcome.
A gruesome image resides vivid in his imaginary mind
Lines far from crossed grow closer each second of time
As the voices lower pitch into demonic states of chime
The restraints once tainting are now consequences deprived
Disguised as his saviour his one single truth within
Slowly reveals the shades which included his kin
The constant pressure to remain a stupor for sins
Starts exterminating reasoning that stood as a brim
Each second passing from the crying to the rattling
Piece by piece adds up to what had to of been
An agonizing pain too strong to withstand
So he reached for his chambered out and clutched the pin
Silence surrounded no sirens would come
Kiss on the forehead thought what have I done
Her infant chest exposing ribs to the sun
Society drained his already minuscule funds
Scavenging the dresser once containing his gun
For any change to escape his loved one
Her scene at the crime will be more than he can handle
Pacing back and forth gripping only a candle
Days never seemed so dark light surrounding dismantles
With nowhere to hide he resides laying with eyes closed
One final breath and his fate is now chose
The heavens reject and satan has spoke
I'm not happy with the 2nd half. Starts to get a bit too simple on the rhyming, but whatever was just some quick shit. Any critics are welcome.