RD2: Sn00p vs. Karaoke - {Sn00p wins}

[Strikta]

The Long Anticipated...
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Round 2

Rules:

10 lines minimum/16 max in this 3-way battle (If u & ur oppenent(s) agree to more that's fine)
No swaying
No biting
No recycling
No other dumb shit that will get u DQd

Voting on 5 battles is mandatory, or u will be docked 2 for every one u miss. Links MUST be posted in the voting links thread at the top of the forum.

Battles due Wednesday October 16th at 11:59 pm PST

Extensions allowed up to 48 hrs, & to ONLY be agreed to between both participants.

Any other questions or concerns PM myself or Sn00p.
Sn00p Karaoke

[Sn00p]

'sup, fam. 16?

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

in...
ok...

Bye...

[King Karaoke]

Hi...



Title says it all.

But yeah, I've just come back from the club (still hella drunk, so excuse spelling mistakes). And well, they had a whole load of flyers ffrom the local gym just lying around there. So naturally, I picked them all up and approached every girl I came acroos on some gym trainer shit. idk shit about that gym, i go to a different one myself. but i made a lotta stuff up (li9ke all their prices and conditions, what kinda specials u get as a student etc) and convinced all of them i actually worked there.
shit got me a tonof numbers and shit.

what've u done?

wassup, Max...

Youre scrawny as hell, no wonder you have to do a lot for sex
I guess flexing your acting chops is cool when that's all you've got to flex
U can use fake personals all u want, I'm spittin nothing but facts, lame
Living in the fast lane? Well, it's bullet time and I'm bringing Max Payne
Search engine providing ammo but im not worried abt what the dumb queer found
Oktober's almost over but this German faggot participates in sausage fests all year round
Meth predicted me to win, u can't front like that nerd isn't right
Cuz u get owned by someone new every week, you're worst than this site
I bring it every battle, u don't provide the kind of competition the best give
Nigga, my resume speaks for itself, urs could make Gamble's look impressive
Youre not slinging a gun, I keep mine ringing for fun
Im a human wrecking ball, you're just Miley Cyrus swinging on one
Your wording sucks and u lack haymakers in every verse that u post
Its funny that we call u a Nazi when execution is where u have trouble the most

Bye...

[Sn00p]

yo.

u BOMBED in the tag tourney. evn ur drunk 1night stands cudn't fail harder
but don't act like losing in rd 1 was ur first rude awakening w/ a mael partner.
& no one cares that u were in a crew or why u stopped fucking w/ them
if ppl call u the ex-plane guy, they just mock u for retelling ALL the discussion events.
so merkin' ya face isn't evn worth using a real weapon. fuck, i'm budgetin'...
i'll have a screwdriver in ur mouth & drink oj w/ vodka at the funeral just to rub it in.
& drop the masquerade. i can only pity ya, slime...
u're so much of a rich white acting black, next u'll pledge to free gotham city of crime.
nc's live reporter doesn't realize i'mma kill him even when i'm not using guile...
shit, i cud make a 'noose flash' before ur eyes & u'd just complain i copied ur style
said he took public transportation to college. eager to get defamed in the frat
dude was never running late on trains, cuz later they would run trains on this fag.
plus this dude only gets emotionless chicks who like boring guys...
no wonder all girls that miss kare have been dead inside for some time

[KwaL!ty]

U can use fake personals all u want, I'm spittin nothing but facts, lame
Living in the fast lane? Well, it's bullet time and I'm bringing Max Payne
Search engine providing ammo but im not worried abt what the dumb queer found
Oktober's almost over but this German faggot participates in sausage fests all year round
Meth predicted me to win, u can't front like that nerd isn't right
Cuz u get owned by someone new every week, you're worst than this site
I bring it every battle, u don't provide the kind of competition the best give
Nigga, my resume speaks for itself, urs could make Gamble's look impressive
Your wording sucks and u lack haymakers in every verse that u post
Its funny that we call u a Nazi when execution is where u have trouble the most



vs



u BOMBED in the tag tourney. evn ur drunk 1night stands cudn't fail harder
but don't act like losing in rd 1 was ur first rude awakening w/ a mael partner
so merkin' ya face isn't evn worth using a real weapon. fuck, i'm budgetin'...
i'll have a screwdriver in ur mouth & drink oj w/ vodka at the funeral just to rub it in.
said he took public transportation to college. eager to get defamed in the frat
dude was never running late on trains, cuz later they would run trains on this fag.
plus this dude only gets emotionless chicks who like boring guys...
no wonder all girls that miss kare have been dead inside for some time
^last bar concept was good but wording was blah



very close battle sn00p had a couple more misses in which lost in the battle... the sausage line & the site line was pretty dope imo ... the mael partner sn00p dropped was pretty dope as well

mvgt- Karaoke

[Sintro]

kar

Search engine providing ammo but im not worried abt what the dumb queer found
Oktober's almost over but this German faggot participates in sausage fests all year round
Meth predicted me to win, u can't front like that nerd isn't right
Cuz u get owned by someone new every week, you're worst than this site
Your wording sucks and u lack haymakers in every verse that u post
Its funny that we call u a Nazi when execution is where u have trouble the most

closer could have been better but still a nice idea.

snoop

u BOMBED in the tag tourney. evn ur drunk 1night stands cudn't fail harder
but don't act like losing in rd 1 was ur first rude awakening w/ a mael partner.
& no one cares that u were in a crew or why u stopped fucking w/ them
if ppl call u the ex-plane guy, they just mock u for retelling ALL the discussion events.
plus this dude only gets emotionless chicks who like boring guys...
no wonder all girls that miss kare have been dead inside for some time

noose flash was a good idea too i just didnt feel how u worded it.

i think snoop had the harder lines. the only shit i thought kare had that really stood out was the owned by someone diff every wk line. snoops miss kare line was dope n i think sealed this for him. the opener mael line was nice too n i liked both of them more than kare's best 2. vote snoop

[Dominate]

Search engine providing ammo but im not worried abt what the dumb queer found
Oktober's almost over but this German faggot participates in sausage fests all year round
lmao, good funny personal flip
Meth predicted me to win, u can't front like that nerd isn't right
Cuz u get owned by someone new every week, you're worst than this site
nice recent event flip

opener was cool, just fell a little short for having such a large quote set up IMO... Max Payne was alright, bit obvious of a np, resume I almost quoted, shit was funny, just not on quite on the level of the stuff I have quoted, last 2 bars I felt u really fell off - seen a wrecking ball flip on Miley just last week and 'execution' wp has been done, even with the personal tie-in I couldn't dig it

vs

u BOMBED in the tag tourney. evn ur drunk 1night stands cudn't fail harder
but don't act like losing in rd 1 was ur first rude awakening w/ a mael partner.
nice, set up well
& no one cares that u were in a crew or why u stopped fucking w/ them
if ppl call u the ex-plane guy, they just mock u for retelling ALL the discussion events.
good double personal
plus this dude only gets emotionless chicks who like boring guys...
no wonder all girls that miss kare have been dead inside for some time
ouch. nice


screwdriver I almost quoted, was cool, gotham city was creative but the connection just a bit too vague imo, noose flash was a good personal idea but felt it could've been executed better, running trains ehhh nah...



I got sn00p... 1 extra quotable and non-quotes maybe just slightly better overall. Best battle this round IMO, good job to both

v/ Sn00p

[The Bully]

Search engine providing ammo but im not worried abt what the dumb queer found
Oktober's almost over but this German faggot participates in sausage fests all year round
Meth predicted me to win, u can't front like that nerd isn't right
Cuz u get owned by someone new every week, you're worst than this site
Your wording sucks and u lack haymakers in every verse that u post
Its funny that we call u a Nazi when execution is where u have trouble the most

Opener was cool too, kinda funny.
A few misses but pretty solid verse, I liked owned by someone new a lot.

vs.

u BOMBED in the tag tourney. evn ur drunk 1night stands cudn't fail harder
but don't act like losing in rd 1 was ur first rude awakening w/ a mael partner.
& no one cares that u were in a crew or why u stopped fucking w/ them
if ppl call u the ex-plane guy, they just mock u for retelling ALL the discussion events.
& drop the masquerade. i can only pity ya, slime...
u're so much of a rich white acting black, next u'll pledge to free gotham city of crime.
said he took public transportation to college. eager to get defamed in the frat
dude was never running late on trains, cuz later they would run trains on this fag.

Opener was comedy. Ex-plane was probably the best.
There were a few more borderline quotables with good concepts but bad wording.

First time I read it I thought it was maybe Kar by a hair but I got Snoop too, more harsh and creative.

v/Snoop

[Swerve]

Search engine providing ammo but im not worried abt what the dumb queer found
Oktober's almost over but this German faggot participates in sausage fests all year round
Meth predicted me to win, u can't front like that nerd isn't right
Cuz u get owned by someone new every week, you're worst than this site
Your wording sucks and u lack haymakers in every verse that u post
Its funny that we call u a Nazi when execution is where u have trouble the most

vs.

u BOMBED in the tag tourney. evn ur drunk 1night stands cudn't fail harder
but don't act like losing in rd 1 was ur first rude awakening w/ a mael partner.
& no one cares that u were in a crew or why u stopped fucking w/ them
if ppl call u the ex-plane guy, they just mock u for retelling ALL the discussion events.
so merkin' ya face isn't evn worth using a real weapon. fuck, i'm budgetin'...
i'll have a screwdriver in ur mouth & drink oj w/ vodka at the funeral just to rub it in.
plus this dude only gets emotionless chicks who like boring guys...
no wonder all girls that miss kare have been dead inside for some time


I felt Sn00p got this pretty handedly. Kar had those bangers, but past that his verse really dipped to lows. Sn00p had good lines and then he had near misses all throughout his verse. There was only maybe like 1 line that just wasn't good and had no potential. With that said, I got sn00p here.

V/ Sn00p.

[Beyond]

U can use fake personals all u want, I'm spittin nothing but facts, lame
Living in the fast lane? Well, it's bullet time and I'm bringing Max Payne
Search engine providing ammo but im not worried abt what the dumb queer found
Oktober's almost over but this German faggot participates in sausage fests all year round
Meth predicted me to win, u can't front like that nerd isn't right
Cuz u get owned by someone new every week, you're worst than this site
Your wording sucks and u lack haymakers in every verse that u post
Its funny that we call u a Nazi when execution is where u have trouble the most

vs

u BOMBED in the tag tourney. evn ur drunk 1night stands cudn't fail harder
but don't act like losing in rd 1 was ur first rude awakening w/ a mael partner.
& no one cares that u were in a crew or why u stopped fucking w/ them
if ppl call u the ex-plane guy, they just mock u for retelling ALL the discussion events.
plus this dude only gets emotionless chicks who like boring guys...
no wonder all girls that miss kare have been dead inside for some time


Nice battle. Opener was cool. Bullet time was nice. Oktober was roflz. Site was good. Resume was cool. Wrecking Ball been done a lot and better, IMO. Execution was a good closer. Mael partner was good. Ex-plane guy was good. Screwdriver was cool. Gothem City was cool. Noose flash is forced/played, IMO. Trains was cool. Miss Kare is good closer. Damn, close one. I thought both were super consistent. Thought Sn00p had the worst line of the battle with that noose flash. Could go either way, but feel that Kare's lows were slightly higher. Sn00p may have had more standouts, though. Props to both.

/v karaoke

[Cashius]

Sausage, owned, execution

Vs.

Explane, miss kare

This was a pretty dope battle. I thought Karaoke's misses were worse than Snoop's, but I thought that he also had more bangers. I'm going with Karaoke for being a bit more consistant. Props to both.

Karaoke.

[Allen Knight]

Search engine providing ammo but im not worried abt what the dumb queer found
Oktober's almost over but this German faggot participates in sausage fests all year round
Meth predicted me to win, u can't front like that nerd isn't right
Cuz u get owned by someone new every week, you're worst than this site
Your wording sucks and u lack haymakers in every verse that u post
Its funny that we call u a Nazi when execution is where u have trouble the most

Vs

u BOMBED in the tag tourney. evn ur drunk 1night stands cudn't fail harder
but don't act like losing in rd 1 was ur first rude awakening w/ a mael partner.
& no one cares that u were in a crew or why u stopped fucking w/ them
if ppl call u the ex-plane guy, they just mock u for retelling ALL the discussion events.
so merkin' ya face isn't evn worth using a real weapon. fuck, i'm budgetin'...
i'll have a screwdriver in ur mouth & drink oj w/ vodka at the funeral just to rub it in.
plus this dude only gets emotionless chicks who like boring guys...
no wonder all girls that miss kare have been dead inside for some time

V/Snoop, dope an close battle had to read it 2x tbh, I got snoop by one more
Quote here an that mael line was nice an screwdriver too, kar excution bar was dope
Ill shit yahll props on the battle. I thought snoop had more heavy hitters imo.

[Neighbor]

Youre scrawny as hell, no wonder you have to do a lot for sex
I guess flexing your acting chops is cool when that's all you've got to flex
Meth predicted me to win, u can't front like that nerd isn't right
Cuz u get owned by someone new every week, you're worst than this site
Your wording sucks and u lack haymakers in every verse that u post
Its funny that we call u a Nazi when execution is where u have trouble the most

vs.

u BOMBED in the tag tourney. evn ur drunk 1night stands cudn't fail harder
but don't act like losing in rd 1 was ur first rude awakening w/ a mael partner.
& no one cares that u were in a crew or why u stopped fucking w/ them
if ppl call u the ex-plane guy, they just mock u for retelling ALL the discussion events.
nc's live reporter doesn't realize i'mma kill him even when i'm not using guile...
shit, i cud make a 'noose flash' before ur eyes & u'd just complain i copied ur style
plus this dude only gets emotionless chicks who like boring guys...
no wonder all girls that miss kare have been dead inside for some time

Close battle.. I went back & forth w/ my vote, had to read it a few times.. basically just felt like Sn00p had the creativity & personal angle, while Karaoke came off a little bland in this one.. both seemed rushed, but both had some solid lines.. I think Sn00p was just more polished & executed better, ironically

v/ Sn00p